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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome n superb n beautiful update...

its amazing...

magar abb sameera ko kaun bachayega maan k kaher se...he he he...

loving it a lot...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...


love u...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think maan should teach sameera lesson and trap her in her own action and prove him innocence and expose her to people.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
i jst hate sameera dat bi***
wat does she thinks of herslf
now only god knows wat maan wil do wid her...
Brij is such a ka****...poor geet she had to suffr due to him
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Posted: 13 years ago
tooo gud
read in one go
pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
sam is so shameless please show whole school her real face
nice update geet ki shaadi ab kya hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago


Shayad Maaneet ke pass-pass rehne ka samay aa raha hai...Sachin will decide to leave village and come to Delhi for Geet's studies and Geet will admit in same school as Maan...

hai...Mungeri lal ke haseen sapne...aisa ho jaaye to kya baat hai...

awesome update...

Sameera ki to band bajni chahiye...such a shameless girl...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 17
nice part...
now Maan has to teach Sameera a good lesson...
and poor Geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the bful comments...here u go with maaneet part...getting more on maaneet...wait until tomoro...njoy!!!

love u all...muaaah <3

varsh rai


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part 18

Maan was moving fast towards the parking area...he hopped on his bike without even knowing his frends were following him...saurav tried to stop him but vipul refused him to do so...they knew he will not listen now,he was not in his receiving mind state.

Maan wanted to talk to geet but not in this state of mind...
he went to the sports club to calm himself practicing kick boxing harshly ...he practised thai kicks on sand bag without stopping for a second...no trainer was present as it was afternoon time ...only the care taker was there who was more than scared watching maan practising kicks continuously without stopping for almost an hour now...he wanted to stop him but the rage he observed in his eyes ,he couldnt dare to speak anything ...

More than sam it was arbaaz's presence in school which disturbed him inside outside...he never wanted even traces of him in his life ... even on his death bed he would have never asked for his help...almost after 3 hrs of practising all kind of harsh stress busters he laid flat on floor panting heavily...he closed his eyes for a while relieving himself when his cell buzzed...it was saurav's call...maan sighed and received the call knowing they must be worried ...

Saurav: maan

The phone was on speaker...

Maan: hello..

Saurav: maan tu theek to hai na

Maan: haan mai theek hu yaar...dont worry...

Saurav: maan hum mrs vyas se baat karenge...aur unhe batayenge ki actually hua kya hai

Maan: ohhh...mrs vyas...to tu apna source laga raha hai

Maan said in an amusing way to lighten the situation...

Saurav smiled

Saurav: nahi yaar...humne dekha hai sam ne kya kiya...and she cannot deny the eye witnesses..

Maan: iski koi zarurat nahi hai yaar...mujhe koi fark nahi padta kaun mere barey me kya sochta hai

Rex intervened ...

Rex: lekein hume padta hai...har baat pe teri manmaani nahi chalegi...hum log us sam ko chodenge nahi

Vipul: yes maan...she will have to pay for it..

Maan: cool down guys...

Rex: look who's talking


maan shook his head : aur haan ye saurav ko bol do ki mrs vyas se kuch bhi clear karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...ye ssab tum..

Before maan could complete his sentence he saw vipul rex and saurav were standing behind...they knew where maan could be...they were on the way to the club in rex car...

Rex: yaar hum ne to socha tha ki tu sam ki watt laga dega...aur yaha to tu itna cool hai...

Saurav: tu kuch bhi bol hum mrs vyas se baat karke rahenge

Vipul: haan ...sam has crossed all the limits this time...

Maan: tum teeno bologey aur mam maan lengi...

Vipul: dia ne bhi sab kuch dekha hai...she is also supporting us...meri baat ho gayi hai us sey...

Maan was soo proud of his frends...he was so happy to have frends like them...they were united and could do any damn thing for each other...as much naughty their actions could be...they were very pure and clean by heart and were mature enough to deal with the things coming their way...

Maan took a shower and changed his clothes and they were in the club canteen ...chatting and giggling lightening their moods...maan was waiting for the clock to struck 3 so he could call geet...but was stuck there with his frends ...they took a leave frm the club on their respective conveyance ...maan stooped his bike on the way at a lonesome road beside the lake,he cudnt wait anymore..but before he could call his phone buzzed printing "meeshti" on screen...his happiness knew no bounds...
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As soon as sachin and supriya left from geet's room...geet called maan feeling more and more restless and low ...

As soon as maan picked the call...he couldnt hear a word from the other end ...but felt her breathing...

Maan: meeshti

It was already getting v difficult to hold her tears...and Hearing his voice it was getting impossible to stop her whimpers...

Maan: kya hua?

She wanted to speak ...but oh god why it was so difficult to utter a normal word without shaking her voice...she immeditaley took a glass of water and sipped gulping the tears...maan could hear the voices in background her drinking water...her breathing and trying to say something but cudnt...

Geet: maan...wo mai pani pi rahi thi..aap kaise ho...mujhe aapki bahut chinta ho rhai hai ...

Her last words were shaken...she couldnt help...she tried her best but couldnt hold her tears..she wanted to sound normal not letting him know anything...

Maan: geet...

Geet burst out in tears... she kept her hands on her mouth sobbing...Maan stopped breathing...he was stunned ...numb.. hearing her weeping this badly...he gather his wits..

Maan:kya hua bacha...

Geet (crying): maan..

that was it...her calling his name with breaking voice ..she needs him...

Maan: mai aa raha hu waha...chup bilkul..

Geet: nahi maan...wo..

Maan: mai aa rahu hu bus...bilkul nahi rona...

She gulped ...Don't know what fate has in store for them...already he was mad at sameera and now his meeshti in pain...why god is testing his patience...cant this world let them live in peace...first they separated them for years...now when they ve met again ...they are living far away from each other being ek jism do jaan...and when they accepted that...why people cant see them happy...why they are making already so difficult things more difficult for them...

He left for hoshiarpur in his bike...Maan didnt had anything in his mind but meeshti...not even the traces of the incident ...what happend to him in the morning ...he just wanted to be with geet right now...hold her...kiss her madly...listen to her...stop her frm crying...he was scared...msk was actually scared today...

while he was on his way ... he was thinking what cud have happen.. may be brij...or might be daarji must have done something...does it has something to do with the brij snaps he send him...his mind was full of thoughts while he was accelerating the bike at breath taking speed...

geet was sitting on bed with her legs folded towards her chest and her head on her knees looking towards the window... waiting for him...her eyes gave in... which were burning now...coz she cudnt stop her tears ...sachin came inside and made her sleep properly...covering her with blanket...she woke up with his touch but pretended to sleep ...sachin left after sitting with her for a while...

It was 11 at night when maan entered her room ...she was resting on her back on head rest with her eyes closed waiting for him


when she saw him...she threw her blanket and rushed towards him like a fish dying without water has got an ocean to live in...maan wrapped her in his arms taking her in a bonecrushing hug...she didnt know what to do...she was crying ans smiling together...as if they were meeting after ages..

Geet: aap aa gaye maan..

She said nuzzling he cheeks on his chest...her arms hardly covering his torso..maan digged her fingers into her hairs pulled her to face him...he could see her eyes were red and wet...

he cupped her cheeks and kissed her face not leaving even an inch... kissing away her tears...

Maan: ye kya haal bana diya hai apna...itna koi rota hai kya?

Geet: daarji bahut kharab hai...

Maan wud hav killed that daarji today...he was not in his right senses and his entire self was aching to kill the person who had made his angel scared...

Maan: aaj tumharey daarji ko mujhse koi nhai bacha sakta...

Maan separated himself from her and rushed towards the door madly...when geet stopped him...

Geet: maan ...rukiye...ye kya kar rahey hai...

She hugged him from back...she didnt know how to stop him...maan sensed her that her entire self was shivering badly hugging him...maan turned to face her and again took her in his arms ..he was scared looking at her like this...shivering badly...he cursed himself how can he be so impatient...he is here to calm her..love her... and not to scare her even more...maan folded his fingers made a tight fist at her back controlling his anger ..

Maan: acha kahi nahi ja raha...pehle chup ho jao geet..please...mai mar jaonga...hua kya hai?

Next part : maan beating brij...(Thanks for reading...Please click like button...😊)

part 19
Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is so small
I want to read more Maaneet part
Plz update one more part
Love Maan's love
He reached there so fast after jus hearing her voice
Love his frnds
They are awesum
In sabko milke Sam ki band toh bajani hi chahiye

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