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Mishu

@-Mishu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awesome update di
congrats 4 new thread
cant wait 4 next part

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

congrats on new thread...

congrats on being chosen as the writer of the week...

loved the update...

she has to realize her feelings and has to name her feelings...

hope maan comes soon

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Fab part aniee
but mujhe tension ho rahi hai. Aage kya hoga. When will maan come.

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Mahwish

@Parrimuskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow superb yar 9 theard jst within 26 part...

Congrats dear..
Keep it up

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Speechless

Why Beeje is so helpless Awww Geet didn't want to marry word LOVE reminds her of MAAN she was hallucinating Him Kissing and hugging her

She was waiting for him to come for herPoor her what is the point to have a family when u can't share ur painfinally she realized her feelings for himShe loved HimThe song MAIN YAHAAN HOONshe was imagining him doing all Things

Where is Maan??Osko bhi abhi jana tha couldn't he send Pooja and YashAnnie Di

hahah

u know everyone

wanted

to have hot update

and i was like

what to do

maan wont be there

so i made dream seq😆

yeah but now poor soul is in

trouble😲

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: leverne
dream...huh...where is maan yaar...an update without him feels so suna...😭
in the dream i felt that devil is back yaar...lols...i miss him too much...guess i am also hallucinating like geet..😉
good she finally realised that she is in love,,...
hope she can stand up for it now😉

but c atleast maan was there in dream na
😆

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
Me dead... !!!!!!!!!!!
Di sone se pehle u killed me...😆

Kya update tha yaar... uff...😳

Me sooo Loved it...

Each and evry bit of It...

The song u slected was just my fav and superb...!!!

Superb... Osum... Mindblowing... Fantastic update di...!!!!!!

I want to say only this after reading update...

Kyu mujhme tum aise sama chuke ho

Ki tumhara dur jana sadio se lamba lag raha ho...

Kyu tum ek ehsaas mere dil me bhar rahe ho

Ki us ehsaas ko pehchan na mushkil ho...

Kyu mera dil tumhare ek sparsh ke liye tarasta hai

Kyu mera dil tumhare pass na ho ne se ghabrata hai...

Kyu mera dil har waqt tumhari yaad dilata hai

Kyu in aankho ko bas tumhara intazar hota hai...

Kya ye ehsaas pyaar hai jo mujhe mehsus hota tha

Kya ye wahi ehsaas hai jisse mujhse dur rakha tha...

Aaj is ehsaas ko mene pyaar ka naam diya hai

Aaj mene mann se khud ko tumhare hawale kiya hai...

Ye ehsaas me bas tumhare liye mehsus karungi

Tumhare siva kaise me ye zindagi ab jeeungi...

Jaha bhi ho laut aao mujhe jarurat hai tumhari

Pyar baya karke mujhe bana lo sirf tumhari...!!!!!

I can write this much only... as a thank u for giving such a lovely update...!!!!

Luv ya... hugs and kisses..

omg

u wrote so well

in such short span

u rock gal

loved it to the core

simply wow

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu
congrats for the new thread.

Main yahan hu yahan hu yahan...no...he is not there...plz get him back...am scared...cant see Geet like this.
And whom is she getting engaged to ???

Beautifully written...loved it.

have to wait a little