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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

her 'hope' certainly gave some hope to him

nice update

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

loved the geek geet...

maan showed interest...that is more than what his family was thinking...

waiting to c whether they will be able to sustain the relation in the long run...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Beautiful...

I like Maan's involvement too... From where I stand, it looks like he is more than ready to move on.

I am also glad that Maan and Geet had a very open conversation. Brilliant.

Waiting for more.

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muna talukder

@MunaMeet22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

di,it's really awesome..
and am surprised to know about that accident..
really a lovely relation...cont soon..love my understanding matured maan..

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609931

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Wonderful update, I love how Maan & Geet are getting to understand each other & it seems like friendship will be established in this marriage before anything else 😳

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

awesome loved loved loved it

cont. soon

waiting for her decision

thanks for pm

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meettu

@meettu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

awsome loved it

its true relationship nd friendship stands on truth

will love the journey from friendship to love

waiting for the next

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

awesome chapter!!! im liking the way geets character has been developed and maan's openness to new bonding although that maybe on the surface level only but still a progress.. do write more soon... keep it up!!!

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evasumi

@evasumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Ritz thank you for the lovely updates i loved it

And in the accordance with your note on Maan's behavior I would like to give my views on Maan's behavior too.. I actually did not mind the way you portrayed it..

He felt terrible to loose his fiance on his wedding day and may be he never could forgive himself for not being there to save her...

He had been in this anguish for all these years and at the same time feeling lonely in life... there comes a time in his life where he had to think what dadima told him and that also what he was feeling... So now he is ready to do the compromise in his life not only for dadima's sake but for him also as he thinks he needs to fulfill some responsibilities toward his family and not be drawn in his selfpity all his life..

So that is why he takes this first logical step and listen to his dadima and gets ready mentally to do these duties toward his family..

I truly believe there is nothing wrong in this thought process and I think that shows he is mentally ready to come out of the shadow of the past... and that is a very good sign.. as in actuality he does not have a broken heart but a heart full of sorrow and anguish at the stroke of fate. As there is no pain or anger of betrayal but just the helplessness of the circumstances so there is no bitterness toward another soul but just on the circustances he closed his heart for any further such pain but now it is mending and he is ready to listen to his grandma who knows what she is doing as she knows her grandson too well,

Now though the shadow of his past lurks in his mind and heart but the novalty and livliness of Geet's attitude and nature will put all the painful past behind and Geet would be able to mend his broken heart with the new colors of life and paint it beautifully..

I absolutely loved the concept of your story and the way you have done it. Yes the healing touch of a beautiful woman not only by look but in everything she is inside will mend his broken heart and his heart will be free from the brokenness of his past and he will be a free bird to live and fly freely..

As there is a depth in Geet that goes beyond her exterior beauty and in that private meeting on the terrace looking at the painting both have realised it and both have gone in each other's heart beyond that which was on surface.

It was great to see that the complexity of Geet's nature was able to penetrate the outer facade of Maan's heart. With just a simple contradicting nature she was able to knock that wall around his heart.. awesome concept as Maan was totally intrigued by the depth of her heart only by her paintings which shows his understanding of her heart too...

Totally awesome.. Keep it on Ritz I love it.. I hope I am on the right track understanding your concept. Let's see Ritz how you mold the story I am eager to see the depth of his soul and the healing spring in Geet's thoughts and behavior

love eva

Edited by evasumi - 13 years ago