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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

loved itgreatawesomeu r doing full justice to the storyme waiting for more

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Hi Just saw this FF.
Awesome concept and superb beginning.

Will comment as I read on dear.
Thanx for pm.

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Part 2...

Awesome part Ritzy...
Loving the story...
Wow what a dhamakedar entry of MSK and what a superb performance by Geet...

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

he has already thought abt it all...but u never know what destiny brings in front of u...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Part 3..

Superb...awesome...fabulous...no words to describe what u have written...

Loving this story...And Vivah is one of my fav movies...its always been close to my heart...

Thanx for pm...

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Awesome part Ritzy.
Am loving this Ff.
Beautifully written dear.
pls continue soon.
Thanx for PM dear.

A very Happy Republic Day to u...

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

awesome update...

maan agreeing to meet geet...

at least he is making an effort to move...

n reshu's poem is just perfect...

at first geet was not willing to even see him...but later not only was she impressed but was even praising him...hehe...

even maan seems to have a liking towards the handa family...

hope this will be the with geet too...hehe...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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evasumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Ritzy dear lovely updates..

I specially love the way you put little things to explore the atmosphere of the surrounding..

The way Geet appreciated the first look of Maan and understood his confidence and his attitude.. So she is already struck by the cupid on his good looks he he...

Loved the way Maan noticed all the little things to know that Handa family is very closely knitted and loving family..

With your initial story notes and with Maan's remark today I have pretty good idea about Poonam's demise and the circumstances but will let you unfold it..

and that tells me that he is still bacheor in real sense..

So now ready for the meeting of Maan and Geet and want to see how they interact with each other and how they asses each other and how in the world Geet Handa sees the man beyond all that outer facade and agrees to marry him...

As for Maan he is ready to marry anyone now as he thinks on the line of his dadima thinks.. in short he thinks it as a necessasity but how did Geet Handa fell for him..

Lovely begining Ritzy and loved the way you are taking the story and all the characters..

Thanks