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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

ab jake pata chala ki geet ek angel hi ore iski guilty ise kayee ja rahi hi
haan teehk hi tho hain.. why would a pari like her be second in anything.
mano yah na mano.. he did believe & made every one believe prachi was his choice.. seedhi ..saadi..
salwar kameez... studious... perfect to his superficial self.

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

I read deewangi in one go on sunday... i just couldnt stop reading it and leave it mid way... that was such a master piece

even i hve read deewangi its truly a master piece , espesially when Geet starts growing up and feels physical desire for maan

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

ab jake maan babau ko apni galti pe pachtava ho rahi itna hone ke baad

Wat was he even thinking abt her all this while.. may it be misti or Geet. He just took her for granted & did wat ever he wanted to ' may it be getting anger at or... playing around with her
may it be accusing her or claiming her

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

superb dear

nd take care of urself

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

maan ab kya faida itna hogaya geet ki life me waise realise huwa na wo ek princess wahi kaafi hi
slowly banged his head not making any noise, can't hold back his cry.. to his heart, afraid of wat might follow once he starts to... he clenched his fist rather not believe his own feelings.. oh god so much of pain ...he hit his chest just above his heart.. again.. & again..

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

wow wat lovely update , gud now maan is understanding GEET ab use pata chal how Geet really is ... hope geet family members accepts maan as thier damad!!

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Priya Doss

@riya27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

such a calm update muski...without any fear of further misunderstandings..or fights...

😆

loved the way they both shared their feelings...

waiting for next update...but i do have a doubt...y maan left her and went😉

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

maan sapna nahi sach hi ye

she held his hand..

he looked at her in disbelieve
how cutely she slip into his arms

she slowly slipped into his arms.. hugging him breaking all the norms, rules..

the sentence is osum she is his

not knowing any more wat is right or wrong. All she knew was she his !!! & she didn't know how to tell him or ask him.

maan now u hav heaven in ur arms

She rested her head on his letting him feel her choked heart beat.. whimpering.. shaking fearing his refusal.. may be he will react differently.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#569

maan now u get ur angel in ur arms see how pure she is itna tune use abuse karne ke baad me tere hi baho me hi All he did... cuddled up like a baby not able to cry nor speak a word.. slowly losing himself.. his senses in her scent, in her warmth. His hands softly holding her waist.. just resting.. not to let go, unsure she was actually there.. did she feel his ehsaas like he felt hers..
dry tear.. silent cry..something only their hearts could feel.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#570

cute scene They sat their for as long as they could with out catching anyone's attention. He took in a deep breath & cupped her face deeply looking only himself in them.
Aap baad main aana
he nodded.
She pretended to take some thing went out.