OS {MG}:A Kiss To Remember...! part 3 (pg16) 9/9

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Divz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

now my part of the deal done...

now its ur turn babyness

plsss

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Priya Doss

@riya27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

please do write some more parts..atleast a single part and give a happy ending😃

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
simply amazing...
hey dear change the font size...its absolutely unreadable...i had the zoom in the screen...

Aawww...sorry for the inconvenience U have to went through😳
I am glad that U liked it😳

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nice...
Aashu and her NP...
yahan bhi...😆

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namita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awww that's superb OS...

loved reading it...

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

amazing OS dear

loved the title "A KISS TO REMEMBER" *90s style winks* (winking madly)

thnx for the PM

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
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u actually wrote an OS coz i cried in the last one...😭 😭...

jaan..i love u so much.(in best friend, best buddy, a sis that i dont have..n not in that kind of way😆)..u have no idea...😭...🤗...🤗

i love the title of the OS...😳

omg..meri saut ki entry..😲.😆..wo bhi mujhse pehle......😆..

but i love my entry..."Tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye JAAANNN hatheli per le aye re...!!🤗

she is remembering some1 special...

i am best friend with geet...well after all i am your princess....

n main ek doc...wow...i always wanted to be one...😍

jyo was there for her bf..n understood...but i was not...sorry...

omg...loved the way maaneet met...n kiss under the mistletoe...wow...😍.my jaan is a wonderful writer...she can evoke many emotions while reading...😳

he gave the locket to her...n went away...gave the thing which he came for...

i wish u continue this one...coz i want to know how maan felt n does he also love her like she does...

n mujhe to propose bhi maar diya...babaji...ye meri jaan kya karna ya kehna chahti hai...😳...n ye rahul...lol...😆...bechare ne kitni badi musibat mol le li...🤣...

i loved the poem...👏⭐️

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beautifully written OS my jaan...

i love the way u write...

hope u write another part n let the two souls meet...

after reading this...again i had tears in my eyes...but those were of gratitude n happiness...for giving me such a lovely friend...😳

n i cant b thankful enough...

hope u forgive me...😳

First of all thanks a lot for such a long comment😃
n Yeah I did after all U are my princess na😳 m glad U are satisfied with Ur entry😉
I really did know that fact sole reason I casted U in this😆
Im very very very glad that U liked it😳
Thank YOu! MUaah
n Jaan really love her princess A lot may be more than a lot🤗

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awesome os...really loved it...thanx 4 the pm

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

awesome os
lovely!
omg rahul proposed jyo haayyyeee!
NP was typical majnu joru ka gulam supporting aashu
poor sid left btwn geet n ansah!
omg rahul was threatened
haayyee their encounter looked like a fairytale spcly their kiss
awww he gave her the precious locket for which he came
awww geet blushing remembering maan
awww jyo was a real friend indeed to geet
awesome
pls type the nxt part n give it a proper ending
waiting
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!