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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 108:
EXCELLENT DILOG BY MAAN HIGHLIGHT OF THE PART

Maan grinned as his hand roamed her bare back inside her kurti – "Aaj mera B'day hai…mein jo chahe karunga…saying this he grabbed her for a deep kiss."

Geet broke gasping for breath. She slapped at his shoulders and put her hook back.

SACH HI TO GEET TUNE DUST DANAV SE HI SHAADI KI

"Dusht Danav ho aap…. Ji nahi aaj aapki nahi meri marzi chalegi….maine jo kehdiya so kehdiya…itna bhi nahi kar sakte aap mere liye…maine pura din plan kiya hai and you will not say no"

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 108: how cutely maan was talking with geet i love this maan very much

Maan – "Lekin Shona…itni planning ki kya zaroorat thi"

geet the sherni command

Geet – "oh Hello!!! aap ka Birthday hai….aapka pata nahi but mere liye bahut important day hai….is din aapke saath saath meri kismet bhi like di gayi thi"

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 108:
maan 's logic geet gussa superb geet bina paida huye maan ki sapne dekhne lagi ha

Maan was perplexed with her logic –"lekin Geet tum to paida bhi nahi hui thi tab"

Geet made an irritated face – "aap na…toh I was just waiting for you to be born….samjhe….ab mujhe kuch nahi sunna…aur waise bhi kitne din ho gaye koi family outing nahi hui hai….isliye hum sab bahar jayenge..haan"

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 108:
geet ka anoka surprise maan ki b'day keliye ore maan udas hi ki sabke saath manye apni biwi ke saath akele bitane ka time hinahi

Maan chuckled at the excitement in her eyes. He leaned a little bit towards her and said huskily – "Family outing…haaan….waise Geet tumhein mera B'day hi mila hai yeh family outing plan karne ke liye…agar main kahoon ki main apna b'day apni nayi nayi biwi ke saath akele mein guzaarna cahta hoon toh"

Geet looked at his face and whacked his shoulder – "acha…lekin aapko kya farak padta hai…b'day ho ya no ho…aap to waise bhi har rat apni nayi shaadi celebrate kar leto ho"

ore geet super excited for the holiday
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet soch ke boli ya bina soche bak rahi

Geet looked at his face and whacked his shoulder – "acha…lekin aapko kya farak padta hai…b'day ho ya no ho…aap to waise bhi har rat apni nayi shaadi celebrate kar leto ho"

maan ka gussa face dekne layak tha usne cake ko itna romantiocally kaya ore uski biwi shikayed kar rahi raat ki

Maan made an angry face – "Geet tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise you don't enjoy…ok I had put the cake on you but who went downstairs and then got that chocolate sauce upstairs and dribbled all over me…uske baad…tumne…kya kiya tha…you were lickin"

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dono ka fight badiya hi wo bi apne romance pe

Maan made an angry face – "Geet tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise you don't enjoy…ok I had put the cake on you but who went downstairs and then got that chocolate sauce upstairs and dribbled all over me…uske baad…tumne…kya kiya tha…you were lickin"

geet kya huwa sharmagayee ye maan poora ka poora besharam hi he was so open kuch bi kar saktha hi

Geet kept her hands on her ears – "bas bas bas…ok baba….but…but….everyone want to celebrate and wish you on this day…hai na….toh family outing…..aur raat ko aap jo kahoge main karungi…lekin….lekin raat ko" Geet finished with pointing her finger at him.

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 108:
geet tu is tarah promise pe promise kiye ja rahi last pata na tere maan ne tera promise ka poora ka poora faida utaya

Maan held her finger with his finger – "Oh dear wifey…ab itna sweet promise karogi to main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...last time ka promise yaad hai na"

Geet blushed – "Hey Babaji yeh maine kya keh diya inhe manane ke liye…Geet ab to tu gayi"

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 108: plan me 1st part badiya hi maan to ungli chat tha reh gaya

First everyone travelled to chandani chowk. They walked through the winding lanes of old Delhi to a street called paranthe wali gali and had a hearty brunch of different paranthaas, chole bathure and lassi. All shared and tasted lot of varieties enjoying the old charm of traditional breakfast.

Maan sucked his fingers clean of the pickle – "Ummm….jo bhi kaho bade pa, mazaa aa gaya…it has been a long time since we had such chatpata and yummy breakfast"

He leaned towards Geet - "So Madam, what's the next plan…aaj din bhar hum aapke haath mein hain"

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, why now sameera is back. now that maan and geet will handle this problem together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
firstly congrats on new thread and its an awesome update :) :)

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