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Edited by anshra - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome Update

really loved it alot...

Geet monlogue was so nicely written...

love is tasteless without the flavour of trust...

i loved the conversation between Maaneet...

and loved answer of Geet to LOVE HURTS...

but yaar... distance... constant yearning and lack of trust hurts only when love exists...

i loved how everytime Devil denies to be afraid...

and just loved the kiss... so sensuall and so touchy...(assume all the meanings of touchy)

this is the finest and easiest yet most powerful answer to many problems...

Awesome...

wow... Devil found the love in midst of kiss... he understood its not sympathy...

and finding Daadi and Anvesha all alive just boost the feelings...

thankGod you dint show him hugging or being emotional to them...

that would be a miracle... reserve it for your epilogue...etc...

oops... he carried her to room to...ehm ehm...

loved how Geet stopped him before loosing herself...

and demanded a payback...

finally Mr. Pay back specialist has to give payback himself...

loved the confidence of Mrs. Devil after knowing that he trust her love...

the power of love...

oops Geet to gayi...

Continue Soon

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago

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Dilsay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

congo on your new thread 👏

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

phew

that was the longest update ever😳

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reni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

i got spamming messages hate IF...ani i loved both last parts.. 😊 how i love a smart geet...loved the way she and vicks tricked mummyji...she did bring back his family...👏

love the payback and the last update...he finally realised her love...payback time me blushing😳

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reni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

oops sneha love the poem...ani off to bed dear its almost two...see you tomorrow...love ya...

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Rituja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

I m speechlesss...

I dont knw what to say...

It was fab fab fab and fab...

Just loved it to the core...

DI What and update u gave yaar... Me totally fida on this update...

@Sneha: The poem was osum dear...😊

Aaj use mere pyar pe yakin ho gaya

Aaj usne humare rishte ko apna liya...

Aaj babaji ne mujhe umar bhar ki khushi di hai

Uski baahon me humesha rehne ki ijajat di hai...

Mere Pyar ne use fir se mera wapas bana diya hai

Mere shaitan ko mujhse janam janam ke liye jod diya hai...

Ab to har khushi har kainat humare sath hai

Zindagi uski bahon me gujre yahi tammana hai...!!!!

@.. A Little words by me ..@

This is what I want to say after reading ur update...😊

Love it tooo the core... THANK U SOOO MUCH

Luv yaaa...😳

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

@allgals me also goinghave to do some imp work on internet😭will peep in againluv ya all@snehacouldnt chat with u whoel day

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
I m speechlesss...
I dont knw what to say...
It was fab fab fab and fab...
Just loved it to the core...
DI What and update u gave yaar... Me totally fida on this update...

@Sneha: The poem was osum dear...😊

Aaj use mere pyar pe yakin ho gaya
Aaj usne humare rishte ko apna liya...

Aaj babaji ne mujhe umar bhar ki khushi di hai
Uski baahon me humesha rehne ki ijajat di hai...

Mere Pyar ne use fir se mera wapas bana diya hai
Mere shaitan ko mujhse janam janam ke liye jod diya hai...

Ab to har khushi har kainat humare sath hai
Zindagi uski bahon me gujre yahi tammana hai...!!!!

@.. A Little words by me ..@

This is what I want to say after reading ur update...😊

Love it tooo the core... THANK U SOOO MUCH

Luv yaaa...😳