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Posted: 13 years ago
Keya, you are updateing discontinued FFs...but why not More Piya...
Please update fast...eagerly waiting for it...
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MORE PIYA
PART 13






Geet silently looked at maan. She never thought how impossible is to understand him, however it's easy to annoy.
She shoved her body from the fat single couch, to next to maan. His eyes swerved all over the room with a quick glance then looked at her.
"how many time I have told you. Stay way from me!"
"couldn't help my self!"
"GEET!"
"how sweet, you actually know my name!"

Maan with irritation stood up and sat on the other side. Geet with a smile looked at maan. He now and then looked back with anger, which had zero effect on geet. She just sat in front and kept staring. He have never felt irritated by any other girls as much as geet. Everything about her was un inviting; yet here he is staring back. He loved attention there was no doubt in that, but geets attention, there was something different, almost it's a mockery, however when she gives this attention to someone els then why there is agitation! Anger running through his vain. He almost can ripe her apart along with the person she giving her attention to.

Geet stood up, maan could guess whatever she was here for its already done. But what?

"I think we should share!" she walked up to maan and snatched his pen. One thing maan have learned, never to share anything. Or nothing. Everything he finds that can be important to him in near future it's his.
"I don't share..." maan coldly replied.
"stop it maan... How long will you act like this? You are 16 and you act like you still a 7 years old kid who still looking for attention blindly!"

Maan instantly looked at geet with anger.
"you are an weirdo! I don't understand you. What's in attention? I get it from all my friends do what's the biggy?"
Maan instantly stood up, holding her cheek within. He pushed her back in to the sofa, while geet looked at him horrifyingly. Her heartbeat rose in an incredible speed. Thumping against maan. She rested her palm wide against maans chest, in order to push way but in vain he only came closer. Crashing her in his embrace.


"you are hurting me..." she managed to mumble out. While maan had no intention to free geet. For him, he have been far to soft with girls. Maybe it was time it should stop. Specially with geet. He dug his nail on her side arm. Geet closed her eyes in pain.

"maybe now it's time for you to-understand- I- am -not -like -any-one-els!" he gritted his teeth in agony. Geet looked at him horrifyingly at the same time confused with so sudden anger outburst. She looked at his lips which was throbbing, maybe to bite her off.


"you scaring me. Let me go..." geet wimped, but maan only pushed in further...


The loud noise of the door brought them back to there sense and maan instantly dropped her. Geets body based against the sofa and stared at maan shockingly with pain.

At the background, Rano shouts out. "we are home"...

Rano walked in. Rather confused with all the sofa pillow scattered all over the floor.
"you two didn't have a fight again! Have you..."
Geet had a red eyes... But she didn't whisper a words. "I was throwing pillow at maan mama. Oh... I made him angry."

Maan looked at geet angrily then looked down. Why did she lye... She could easily say that how he just tortured her... But...


Maan walked upstairs.

He laid on his bed, with eyes wide open, wondering why exactly he over reacted. Geets words was like a needle to his open wound that he have been carrying inside since he was born. Maan turned on the side table, picking his book up, then restlessly started to flick pages. He started to tape his foot at the same, there was some regret inside him, tormenting. There was agony of guilt building up with each passing second. Restless About something that is unknown. Maan stood up, breathing heavily, then opens his window open to get some fresh air in. He hated how he was holding geet, he hated how he pushed her cheek in, digging his nail right within. Seeing tears crawling down with question in her eyes. Why? That's what she was asking why? And instead of answer, he brutally abused her... But again, this wasn't the first time. And every time he do this, it only becomes easy. It becomes so easy to give her pain and there is not a single drop of guilt. The guilt and restlessness its disappearing from within his heart.

No! "no...no...no.." maan brushed his hair back. He have changed before... And here he is changing again. A change... What kind of change?

Maan brushed out of the room and walked straight in geets room. She was sleeping. He drank the warm saliva, to rest the thirst that have been there for past 2 hours. He slowly walked in, making no noise, nothing then sat next to her. His hand was shaking for some reason, some unknown reason. He removed the spread enough to see her hand. It's wars then the last bruise but the guilt is half time less. His heart didn't feel any pain of seeing someone in pain. His heart barely cared but his mind was helping him to help geet to heal her wound. He took something out of the cupboard and applied gently...

Next morning, geet thought she will be in pain, but instead the pain wasn't as much as before. The pain did not crack open to expose her morning in to pain. She moaned little, but that soon disappeared.

After breakfast both walked out, geet silently flowed maan. Who didn't bother to look back at her even once.

However geet knew well, it was maan, it was he who applied the medicine. If he can give pain, he also knows how to cure... Because she knows how much he cares for her.

Once they were off from the bus, both went to there classes. Few of geets friend noticed the big nail mark on geets arm.

"geet... What happen?"
"oh... It's nothing"
"no no... It's something... It's wars then the last mark. You never tell us who does this to you!"
"but it hurts less na..."
"geet... Please. You have to understand, this is not a good thing. Specially you get brides all over the place. I bet it's maan..."
"so..."
"geet..."
"look... He is the one to apply medicine as well na!"
"what..."
"yes... Every time I tell you and every time you say what?"

At lunch time geet walked out, maan was few feet way. He kept looking at geets arm. Wondering why was it! Because he really didn't want to or care. Was it because he didn't want anyone to know that it was he who done this??


hello.. sorry for delay.. and welcome..

the story just started.. from here we will see how there heart figits with another..

its gn be very complicated love story.. and its gn take some time to build up.. but its important to create an effect and make you understand what they are thinking how they are thinking. and why they are thinking...

why they are fighting with emotion..


and guess what this is gn be 2 updates everyday :D

xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
lt is really a complicated love story...not able to understand why Maan behave like this with Geet.
The part was great...plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you berry muchfor updating lol.

missed ur frequent updates ...
now very happy to see u back in action...
love u loads
Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!!
cant believe that you will update it dayly!!
dying to read more!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum part dear
so maan is changing dear
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...loving the idea of 2 updates everyday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
is this story going to have a sad end??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for update.
Mann is fighting his inner struggle...because of his unswwet happening of past...yet 2 b revealed...
Geet so cute...
Story needs to b little paaced up...i think so...
Enjoyed reading n keep it up
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