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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

It was Maan Geet slapped him aiyo

Geet is gng close to Yash

Maan wnt like it

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

thank god you updated!!!

waiting for the rest of the update..

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I wonder how long will Maan be able to keep up cool/unaffected MSK appearance...

Poor Geet being confused b/w what her eyes are seeing vs what her heart is feeling. Waiting for u to continue

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

waiting for u to complete the update.

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gangesegb

@gangesegb

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Loved it...
Awesome...
waiting 4r nxt update...

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Niks

@NiksAngel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

read almost whole of FF after I left midway...lovely updates...!!!

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Great updt Lena sweety but a bit short 😛

So... the part entirely goes to maan's possessivness 😆

But before that, poor maan, he just wanted to fullfill her wish and what he got in return ? geet slapped him 😆... must be thinkin yaar kia zamana a gaya hai ek to dusre ka kaam karo upper se thappar kaho 😆... But i felt it was a good idea indeed, the situation was like that : geet has confessed to maan but maan doesn't believe her, now all knows that maan ( as msk of her college ) is really handsome and girls drool over him ( so do I 😉 ) and here geet has rejected him. In this situation the slap comes out as source of joy for maan... because somewhere he understood she reserved the right to kiss her only to "her" maan . Well done, hope this kind of situation happens more often...at least maan will start believing her ! 😳

ok now geet being friendly with this yash...i dnt remember well, but i think maan had warned her abt him... Is this yash playing some game ??? But fikar not maan ( as msk ^^ ) will keep an eye on her, or should i say: will not set his eyes off her 😆 😳

Oh and yeah of course geet felt something wrong abt maan as msk... good that u didn't rushed things, because for now she can't be suspicious she hasn't enough clues ! You balanced it really well 👏 she hates msk for "being like her maan", even the slightest thought of msk being maan didn't come to her... She is on the very beginning of discovering the truth, so i really liked the way u didn't emphasize her confusion ! Well done !

And of course my piece of critic : I dnt know how long maan act like this... but one thing is sue, a day or another geet will find out... it would be could to have a monologue from maan on that, like him wondering what geet would think, how will she reacts...i know according to him she will never know, but if he isrealistic enough he knows that it's impossible and she will know sooner or later... so it would be to have maan's pov on that... rest is up to you 😊

Ok with that me eargerly waiting for the rest of the chap !
Plz plz updt soon !

With my love and support !
Zubi ! 😊

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

im excited to read the rest, its friday lena, please update again soon.

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podapulleh

@podapulleh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

I have read all 14 chapters at once. I love the angle you have taken with this story. I love the hidden identity. Reminds me of Louis and Clark (superman)

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

I'll start writing the update in an hour. Gosh, all the guilty comments. r u trying to flatter my guilty conscience? 😛
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i am so sleepy 🥱. stil havent finished.

Edited by .Lena. - 13 years ago

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