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buddies...this is isha..hope u know me...this is my first os...i have already writing a ff and ss!!

bahut paka liya...now about the os...it about cute little fight between our maaneet!!
so here goes...

one day maan,dadi maa and geet went to a resturant

actually the main motive was to give some time to newly wedded couples..dev-nandani

as lucky and preto had already gone to their holiday...but dev due to the fact of work..was not able to!!

all three entered the resturant

dadi maa and geet was buzy chatting with each other

manager came and welcomed maan

they comfortably seated on their seat

some some time a dancer came and started dancing around thier table

maan was staring her

he thought geet and dadi maa is buzy chatting

they will not notice it!!

but he was wrong

from the time maan gaze was on that dancer...geet was contiously following maan eyes

after some time dadi also seen what maan was doing

finally the staring session was finished

maan thought let talk to geet and dadi maa

he was shocked to death...

geet eyes were red in anger..and dadi maa was similing

he was looking like a 5 year boy..who has been caught

geet stood up ...and started moving towards the exist

dadi maa and maan ..both called her

but it was unnotice by geet

dadi maa- maan beta mana ligiya..varna u have to sleep on couch today!!heheh

he gluped saliva

geet was very angry..continously giving jali to that girl and maan

she stoped

she heard the song...she turned around

maan was singing

she crossed her hand

song-( desi boys)

maan-Ab naa tu
Rakhna tu
Mere dil ka yeh
Chota mota haq maar ke

maan moved as he sing those word

geet moved her head other way

maan-Galati se
Galati ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

he hold her ears and continuied singing

geet moved in opposite direction

and geet sang

geet-Tujhpe na aitbar mujhe
Fika lage tera pyar mujhe

signaling to maan

and came close to maan

and started beating his chest

and sang

geet-Main na banaoon dildaar tujhe
Saare sapne te jhoote
Ab tak pyaar ke

geet faced other side...and started moving

maan -Dil jaane
Rab Jaane
Na khabar pe main tere
Ab dil haar ke

while bending down in his knees

and stood up and moved towards geet he hold his ears

and said-Galti se galti ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

he saw that there no effect on geet so he sang

he said- Jab jab yara dhoondo tujko
Paa loon main khud ko hi
Tu hi hai mera pata

and moved towarrds geet while looking in her eyes

geet pushed maan backwards

and said- Ho..tujh se ab na mohabbat hai
Teri na mujhko zarurat hai

and move more backwards

geet sung-Meri toh aisi surat hai
Loot jayenge yahan dil haar ke

while she was surrounded by mens

maan had sudden jealously

and moved towards geet and pushed the men aside

and sung-Laakhon mein ek main hu
Koi aaye na aage ab iss yaar ke
Galati se galati ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

that time geet smiled and maan knows ki mission accomplished

geet moved in front and sung-Teri ankhon mein doobi main
Dekhun apni akhon ko o beeti yun hi saari umar
Teri baahon mein lipti main
Meri baahon mein tu ho o duniya ki ho na khabar

maan came back and hugged her from the back

geet further sings- Ho na zaroorat baaton ki
Mile lakido haaton ki
Saalon se umar ho raaton ki
Aise bhi dekhe dono pal pyaar ke

while staring at maan and smiling

maan- Kal aise pal aise
Aani teri meri chaahton ko ikraar ke
Galti se galti ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke


moved started singing and dancing together

and again our playful geet was back

she pushed maan and moved towards dadi maa

she went behind dadi maa...it was like she was hiding

and sung-Ho tujhpe na aitbar mujhe
Fika lagey tera pyaar mujhe
Main na banaoon dildaar tujhe
Saare sapne te jhoote ab tak pyaar ke

maan knows that he got his geeet back

he sung-Dil jaane ho rab jaane
Na khabar pe main tere ab dil haar ke
Galti se galti ki
Kabhi pichhe pichhe aaya tere
Jhak maar ke

all threee started dancing and enjoying...they all were laughing and giggling!!!

this was there cute fight!!!

how was it??

hope u like it

do comment

and hit like button!!

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or my other works..

my creation on maaneet


thanks for supporting

Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
the fight wa sreally very cute and the song was apt to the situation
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
luvd it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update dear...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haila Maan was seeing a girl i mean other than Geet?
cute OS dear...
krati5 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice shot... culd u plz gv me link of ur ff &ss...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww luv da os relii reli cue
fanx 4da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃

Originally posted by: krati5

nice shot... culd u plz gv me link of ur ff &ss...






ya why not ...here it goes...


thanks buddy!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by geetsweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really sweet OS...loved it... well done.. JHAK MAAR KE...hehehe

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