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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Rano-"Ohhh tho mein tortures Mom huu… rukh tuu mein tujhe nahi chodungii…."n started running behind Naintara n seeing this Mohinder was laughing n Just Geet was missing from the picture.

As Mohinder was sipping his Tea there was a knock on the main door

Mohinder "Rano dekho tho darvaze pe koi aya haii???"

Rano "Haanjiii dekhtii huuu…."

Rano opened the door and was shocked to see Savitri Devi aka Daadi ,their Family Friend n her Grandson

Rano touched her feet "Maaji aap kaisi hoo??? Aree mein bhi jhalli aap ko darvazze pe hii sab puch rahi huu…. Chaliyeee andaz ajayiyee aap ka hii Ghar haiii Maajii…."

Mohinder also touch's Daadi's feet "Namastee Maajii itni saal hogaye aapko dekhe…

Kaisi hooo Maajii aur sab kasiee haiii ….Yeh Maan haiii yaa Dev?????"

Daadi "Yeh Maan haiii….Dev tho US mein haiii MBA kar raha haiii"

Rano "Yeh lijiye meri Special wali Chai maajii aap ko bohat pasand thii naaa"

Maan "Rano Maa mujhe nahii dengiii apni Special Chaii ????"

Rano "Haan beta mein dethi hooo

Bilkul nahi badle tum jaise bachpan mein the waise hii ho

Zaara bhi patience nahi hai na tumhe Maan Beta"

Maan "Kyaa Ranoo Maa aap ne mujhe pechan liyaa…." Making a pouting face

Rano "Aele mera bacha nazar hogayaaa" n pulls his cheeks

Maan "Rano Maa mein aab chota bachaa nahi huu ke aap mere gaal kich rahe hooo…"

Rano "Mere liye tho tum mere Bache hiii hoo

Maajii, Dev nahi aayaa aap ke saath???"

Daadi "Rano Dev US mein apni padahii puriii kar raha haiii…"

Rano "Haiii Babajiii Dev US puch gayaaa mein tho bas TV mein hii dekha haiii…"

Daadi "Humariii bachiyaa kaha haiii Rano????"

Rano "Jii woh Naintara tho College gayii haiii

Abhi 15 min phele hii gayii

Woh 12th kar rahiii haiii"

Maan "Aur who Nakchadiii ???? Miss Manaliii Express????"

Daadi "Haan kaha haiii hamariii phool sii bachii Geet …."

Rano n Mohinder had tears in their eyes when they heard Geet's name….

Rano just cries falling on the floor, Daadi n Maan are shocked…..

Maan went n hugged Rano "Ssshhh Rano Maa kyaaa huaaa???? Aap yese kyun rorahiii haiii????Woh Nakchadii aapko bohat pareshan kathi hogina apni non stop bolne se???? Kahii bahar gayiii haiii… Anne do ussee lecture dedeke Pakka dalungaaa…."

Rano "Vo bas chup chap sun legiii betaaa Aaa thak nahi karegiii???"

Daadi "Kyaa hua haiii Mohinder Ranooo itna kyun rorahiii haiii???

Geet thik haii naa…."

Mohinder "Woh Maajiii pechlee Che Mahinoo se Geet kuch ajeeb tara se hogayii haiii

Naa hiii kuch baath karthi haiii

naa hiii kuch mastiii karthi haiii

naa hii hasthi haii naa hii rothi haiii

Bas chup chap naadii ke kinaree pura din bethtiii haiii aur raat koo chilla thi rehtiii haiii…

Pataaa nahii humariii bachiii ko kyaa hogaya haiii????"

Daadii "Itnaa kuch hogayaa aur tumne humee bola bhiii nahiii

Aap tho bas yese hii humeee Maajiii keh the haiii

Jab dukh bathne ka samay aya tho akele hiii sab sehthe raheee…."

Maan who was silently listening to everything atlast spoke

"Rano Maa Geet kaha haiii????"

Rano "Wahin hogiii naadi ke kinare chup chap akelii bethiii huiii….."

Maan "Thik haiii mein waha jaa raha huuu…."

Mohinder "Nahiii beta waha maat janaa

Geet bohat voilent hojathi haiii agar koi uskee paas bhi gayaa…."

Maan "Baba mujhe jaanee dooo kuch nahi hogaa

Aur Geet bhi kuch nahii kareegiii"

Mohinder "Thik haii beta, be careful"

Maan goes towards the River n found Geet sitting in the usual place where they used to sit in their childhood in the exact position as if its just time that has flown by but nothing else has changed

Maan goes n sits in the position he used to sit n glanced at Geet

Geet was going to shout n hit him but seeing the position he was sitting just sat silently n turned towards the river but had a glow in her eyes as if remembering her childhood

Maan expected Geet to hit him shout at him n then hug him tightly as she had done on the day he was going away from Manali to Delhi with his parents

But instead he was welcomed by the blank eyes which did get its glow seeing Him.

Maan was sure she did remember him…..

Maan "Geet itni naraz hoo kee Baath bhi nahii karoogii apne Bandar se…."

Geet nodded her head as if saying Nooo

Maan "Ohh tho tum ne mujhe Miss nahi kiyaaa…."making a cry baby face

Geet nodded her head to Yes as if telling She did Miss him

Maan "Ohh tho nakchadiii ne Mujhe Miss kiyaaa….."

Geet's eyes widened when she heard Nakchadiii

N glared at Maan

Maan "Oyeee Nakchadiii sirf Maan Singh Khurana glare kar saktha haiii yee uska Copyright haiii samjii tum" n glared at Geet

Geet just pouted her lips n turned her face away from Maan

Maan "Haan Haan thik haiii aab tum mujhse baath kyun karoogiii

Hogana tumhara koi Boyfriend jisse tum saari bathe karthiii hogiii…."

Geet just looked down n tears started coming out of her Eyes

Maan "Ohhh tho tumne mujhe diyaa huaa Vaada nahii thodaaa….Very Good Girl" n tries to pull Geet's cheeks

But Geet just pushes his hands away as if it would Burn her alive n she just runs away

Maan smiles seeing this n Promises himself that he would get the old Geet back by Hook or Crook in a months time.

Precap-


Geet Opens up to Maan

Or

Geet Pushs Maan away like she does with others

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Awesome part dear. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
hi
the up is really good
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
amazing update
loved maan's care n one sided talk with geet
what happened to geet n why's she like this
continue soon

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
read both of ur update

nice story

eager to know what happen to geet

do accept by buddy request
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
good to see u back

and geet is responding to maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
poor geet what happened to her 😲😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Luv da concept awsum update
Eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part x

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