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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mishty..sakii

thank u so much dear...i can try ...what will u think dear...should i...?😳

yes dear u should try and u know how to write as u r the writer of pure love na so u must be knowing basic things about writing os and moreover der ait's creative thread anyone can write even if she si not a writer hope to see ur part soon😉😳😳

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: abinash079
yes dear u should try and u know how to write as u r the writer of pure love na so u must be knowing basic things about writing os and moreover der ait's creative thread anyone can write even if she si not a writer hope to see ur part soon😉😳😳

ok then i will try...give me 1 hour...and thank u so much for encouraging me...😊

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Thnx 4 pm

MAAN is an obsessive lover ..dreamy

part 1 was fab

do continue

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mishty..sakii

ok then i will try...give me 1 hour...and thank u so much for encouraging me...😊

would be waiting for the part dear

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: zunaiba5
Thnx 4 pm

MAAN is an obsessive lover ..dreamy

part 1 was fab

do continue

dear part 2 has been writen by nazma in page 7 i think plz read it😛😛

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mons_mb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

finally finally finally was waiting for the new thread 🥳 🥳

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Part 3

how could she tried to push him.how dare she..maan thought to himself.maan increase his pressure on her and push her towards the wall.geet just didn't understand what was happening.she felt helpless but she thought to herself she don't show her helplessness to this devil.she will fight.

maan lost all his sense at her rejection,her guts.he increased his pressure on her hair which he is holding and geet whimpered with pain and that brought back maan in his sense.he freed her hair instantly.caressing her face and said with guilt in his voice,

sorry...i am sorry...did i hurt u...?

geet now became surprised.what that maan is..sometimes ago he was hurting her,threatening her and now caressing and asking sorry?she couldn't understood his intention at all.,

abhi bhi dard ho raha hai geet...?he asked softly again.

geet nodded silently.she don't know why she do that.as if it's coming naturally.

maan now very much angry with himself.how could he hurt her.he got blind with fury and guilt.he freed her and smashed his hand in the mirror hardly.his hand hurt badly.pieces of broken glass stuck in his hand and it's bleeding badly.maan didn't winced a little.as if he couldn't feel any pain.

geet first feel the weight of him leave her then heard the sound of broken glass.she shivered with fear.

what is happening here...?ye sound kaisi hai..?what r u doing...?she asked in shaking voice.

maan smiled seeing her fear.

daro maat...i don't hurt u...maine aapne haatho ko saza di hai tumhe hurt karne ke lie...

geet just stood there numb.is he mad...?

aap pagal ho kya...?she asked with anger.

he grabbed her and pulled her close.

ha...tumhare pyar me...u made me do those things which i never wanted to do...he said with frustration.

then leave her with a jerk.

chali jao yaha se geet...just go away before i hurt u again...

geet didn't know what to do for sometimes.he leaved her that easily.she thought he will hurt her more and don't know what else.she just stood their numb and then back to her sense.she try to open her blind fold but his hand stopped her again,

one more thing...ye nahi samajh na k maine tumhe chodh dia geet..i will come again...u r mine..only mine and don't forget that..he said in her ear kissing her ear and then went from their.

geet opened her blind fold sometimes later then saw no one is there.she took a long breath and try to calm herself.she washed her face thats when saw the blood stain on her arm where he held her.she looked sometimes at the blood and don't know why she felt a little pang of sadness thinking him hurt.

don't know how was it...pls don't mad at me if i ruin it...😳

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

awesome mishty loved it
loved the way u took th estory forward
some one take it from her