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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: komlika
Who said I'm not reading 😉

oh... i thought u wudn't read as it seemed odd...! well thanks for criticising... i appreciate dat...
n thanks for reading too...😳

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thanks everyone for ur precious comments... dat ws really encouraging...!

if u dun like anythng plz free 2 criticize n tell me... i'll repect dat...! n will try my best 2 make dat good...!

thanks again 😊 here is the 1st update...!

GEET HOUSE:

Geet's mom came in her room...!

GM: Geett...??? tu abhi tak sorhi hai? uthhh time dekh kia hora hai...! (geet hugged her teddy bear n sleeping

wd a lil smile on her face), nai uthegiii...???

G: kiya mom... sone bhi nai detiii...! (hide per face frm teddy bear)

GM: tu ne hi kaha tha k subah kuch b hojae uthaa dena... chahay maaar maar kar...bhul gai???

G: han bhul gai *yawning*... good nite mom... ap b sojao...!

GM: good nite ki bachiii... 10 baj rhe hain... wo bhi RAAT k nai SUBAHhh k...!

G: what..?? (she sudden got up) yeh kia mom apne mujhe uthaya b nai... raat mai b kaha tha jaise kar k bhi uthaa dena...

magar ap toh samjhti hi nai... ab kia hga... itna late hgaii...mereee mumbaiii ki train nikal gai tohhh...!

GM: bol lia...??

G: han ap bolo ab...! pata hai mom ap hamesha aisa krte ho... rat mai kaise bolrhe they k utha dungi utha dungi magar ap uthate nai

itne pyaar se kiun uthaate ho... ek thappar laga ker utha dete...!

Geet's mom luking at her in anger,,,

G: oh sorrrie...! chalo ab aap bolo...!

GM: pehle hi late horhi ho... jao jakar fresh ho.. mai nashta laga rhi hun... (she went frm geet's room)

geet's POV: hain... yeh kia... mom b na kuch bolna b nai tha phr b mjhe chup kradia...! 😆 (she watched at clock, dat clicked 10:30)

oh GOD... mai toh gaiii ajjj... (she runned in wshrum)

MAAN HOUSE:

everyone is waiting for Maan at the breakfast table...! maan's dad ws in anger...!

Maan's dad 2 his mom: rat ko sahab club gae the...! firsttt time...! bas pardh jaegiii ab inko bhi adat...

MM: are ab gussa mat hoyee... pehli baar gaya tha... dost le gae hnge... kaam b toh kitna karta hai office mai..

MD: so wht? kaam karta hai toh club jaega relaxation k liye?

MM: uffooo... ap kiun galat samjhte hain... doston ne zabardastiii ki hogi toh chala gaya hga...

MD: tmhe lagta hai wo kisiii k kehne per aise kahin chala jaega... he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

his mom cudnt answer.. coz dat ws true...!

MM: hmm acha ap nashta toh kijiye...

MD: tmhe pta hai i want each n every member in breakfast table... jabhi ham kuch khate hain...!

MD to maan's sis: dolly, jao or apne bhai ko bula ker lao.. n use kaho k dad bht gusse mai hain foran aye...

dolly: ajaega dad... mai kiun jaun ab upper bulane bhai ko?

MD: dint u listen wht i said?

dolly: huh.. ok... going

after some while...! she came back..!

MD: where is he? kia krha hia?

D: he is getting ready...

MD: abhi takkk...????

D: yupp dad... n he is in full anger... usne bola hai dad se kahe kal rat k bare mai mujhse kuch na puche...! it was nothng like jaisa

wo samajhre hain...

Maan's dad ws quite... but in anger,...!

PRECAP: MAANEET first meeting 😳

sorrie for the boring update but i wnted u to knw about the family background n way of living... hope u understand😊

plz do comment...! i really need it...! 😳

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saam123

@saam123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Mahum nice staring .rocking idea

but don't make them cousin

then they will be bro & sis

maan is his dad's bother son

so they r blood related . pm please

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

interesting start ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hey guys... i hve edited the intro on pg:1... plz have a look...

now geet n maan r not cousins...!

@simm n @komlika... this was for u... thanks for criticized, i really respect dat...! 😳

THANKS ALL

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

no dear it's not at all boring infact i loved geet's convo with her mom.it was really really interesting.hmmm waiting eagerly for maneet's meeting.so plz update next part soon...
-mona

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Very good please update regularly

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

thanks everyone for ur sweet response...

dats really encouraging...! 😳

so here is the 2nd update... hope u like it... feel free to leave ur feedback, if u dont like anything...

plz feel free to criticize n telling me...i'll respect ur views n trving to do my work better ... 😊

Episode-2... Part A

Maan was stepping down from stairs in full anger, everyone was just looking at him but he wasn't giving a single look to anyone...

MD: see... his attitudes n anger... aik toh galti karta hai... upper se gussa dekho...

fine i wont discuss about last nite then..? then yeh bilawaje ka gussa dikha ker he just want me 2 shout on him... sick..

MM: huh... plz.. stop now... breakfast k time ap zara apne gusse per b control rkhen i dont want any kind of violance in the dinning table...

Maan reached in dinning room:

M: good morning everyone...

MM: good morning beta... kaise ho?

M: hmm em good mom... (then he luked at his dad n said) dad mujhe apse ek baat puchni hai...

MD: but mujhe tmse koi bat nai karni chup ker k nashta kro... or preeti ko school chor ker ao then wahin se office jana..

aj Varun ki tabyat khrab hai toh he wont go...

M: ok chor aunga... but ap se bht imp bat puchni hai...!

MD: i said nai... atleast nashtey ki table per toh nai...

M: fine...! em not taking breakfast... (he was just about to go)

MD: sit down... bolo...

M: yeh mai kia sun rha hun... ap k frnd Mr Mehta ki beti aegi n hamare company mai work karegi???? widout any experience?

do u want k hamari company doob jae? how cud u do dat... just frndship k liye kisi b chalte phirte ko...

MD: listen Mr maan singh khurana... kia tmne is company ko kisi experience k bad join kia tha? its all about intelligency... n mai jaanta hun use... wo apne dad ki tarah bht intelligent hai... n phir uska sapna hai hamari company mai job krne ka...i think use mauka toh dena hi chaiye...

M: mai apna beta hun so mujhe kisi experience ki zarurat nai thi...

MD: toh use b mere beti jaisa samajhlo... n wese bhi mai koi relations nai dekhta kaam mai... if she wont do well.. toh she will hve 2 leave but i have fully faith on her...!

M: but dad...

MD: enjoy ur meal...

(Maan chup hojata hai... but he was in Anger.. n thinking "Kuch Toh Karna hi parega" )

preeti: Maan chachuuu... jaldi karenn mai late hojaungiii

M: nai hoge ap late beta... ao mai chor k ata hun apko...

Geet House:

geet's dad is sitting in the living room wd his wife...!

GD: yeh geet abhi tak aee nai neeche..?

GM: wo... tyaar horhi hain apki laadli... pata nai kis ki shadi mai jana hai...

GD: oho... toh hone do tyaar... meri beti itni sunder jo hai... toh apna khayal toh hga hi na...

GM: han toh sunderta sajne sanwarne se hi ati haina... wo toh bas kurta shalwar pehenker or baal mai itniii tight chotiii bnaker hi nikalti hai

bahar... yeh bhi koi tyaaar hona hua?

GD: sunderta toh saadgi mai hoti hai... tm kia jaano..

GM: acha toh mai saj sanwar ker buri lagti hn apko?? :(

GD: ap bhi kuch kam sunder thori hain... ab geet toh ap per hi jaegi na..

GM: bas bas makhan nai lagayee... mai dekhker ati hn use...!

Geet was in her room... her mom went there n was in shocked...!

GM: yehhh... geet... tujhe ho kia gaya hai...! 😲

G: kia hua maa? achi nai lagriii? 😒

GM: yeh aaj... itni sunder lagre hai meri beti...

geet was in white kurta shalwar, wd open hairs...! she was luking really beautiful...!😳

G: sachi...???

GM: han meri jaan... (she hugged geet...) or aj hi itniii door jarhi hai hamse...(wd brimmed eyes)

G: maa... plz ansu poncho aise mai kaise ja paungi...

GM: hmm nai roti beta but fikr toh hoti haina...

G: han maa but dont worry u know na i can care myself... chalo ab jaldi se nashta lagao warna...

GM: warna...??

G: mai shor macha dungi...

GM: hahaha.. badmassshhh... chal lagati hn...

then they took breakfast...

GD: beta bht dair hgai hai mr khurana ka fone b aya tha he was asking k tm kab aoge... tm mumbai pohanch kr unhe call krdena

wo tmhe lene ajaenge...

G: nai papa mere pas address hai main khud se chali jaungi...

GD: beta kabhi toh apni man maani na kia kar... kardena fone plz... ajnabi sheher hai teri fikr hogi

G: papa ap mujhe abhi tak bachi samajhte ho han?

GD: rehne dena tu... mai khudi kardunga fone bas mujhe wahan pohanch ker fone krdena or wahan se hilna mattt...

G: ok papa... jaisa ap kahen...

then she said gudbye to her parents... n left for station...

Maan was driving car, preeti ws beside him...

P: chachu koi gane lagao na...

M: yeh ap school jarhi hain ya kisi concert mai...

P: kiun chachu ap jab office jate ho tab b toh ap sunte hoge na ya concert mai jane se pehle hi sunte ho 😆

M: ufff my lil princess ap se koi nai jeet sakta... acha lagata hun... (in a while his cell rang) wait...

umm hello dad boliye...

MD: maan... preeti ko chor dia school?

M: bas on the way

MD: acha... tmhe pata hai aj bht imp meeting hain wd sharma's company...

M: oh mai toh bhul gaya us se related file ghr pe hi...

MD: hm very good... yehi umeed thi... jab insaan club jane lage toh nashe mai yeh sab yaad kahan se rahega...

M: dad kaam ki bat kijiye... i told u mujhe is bare mai bat nai karni its my personal matter...

MD: yeah rite personal... hmm well said...

M: dad plz... dont be so senti... btayee ab kia karna

MD: ab preeti ko chor ker ghar jana n files leker ana...

M: what??? but dats out of root... mai dobara ghr jaun?

MD: yup...

M: sorrie ap kisi employee ko bhejden...

MD: Mr Maan em not asking em telling u will have to go... (n cutted the call)

M to himself: yeh kia baat huee... yeh dad bhi na... huh aj ka din hi bura hai...

P: hehehe kia hua chachu itnaa gusaa

M: kuch nai beta apka school agaya ap jao...

P: ok bye chachu... mwaaahhh (she kissed on Maan's cheek)😳

maan smiled " love u beta.. bye"

Geet had reached Mumbai, she was on the station n called her dad 2 inform him...! he then called Mr. Khurana..

GD: hello khurana

MD: oh hiii yar... kaisa hai? geet pohanch gai?

GD: han yehi btane k liy fone kia hai...

MD: acha kab tak pohanch jaegi...???

GD: woh pohanch gai hai.. she is at the station...

MD: oh.. acha tm fikr nai karo... jaise hi ghar pohanchegi i'll let u know..

GD: ok yar... apna khayal rkhna... n thanks itna karne k liye..bye

GD: no need 2 say thanks pagal... bye

Maan entered in his father's cabin...!

M: dad... hre is the file... now tell me meeting kab hai?

MD: maan tm meeting attend nai kroge i'll handle dat... tm jaO station n Mr Mehta ki beti ko pick kr k ghar chordo... then office ao

M: what??? dad yeh aj ap ko ho kia gaya hai... em not robot...

MD: ok fine... tm office mat ana agar thak jao toh ghr hi rehlena but u'll have 2 pick her... n dats my order...

Maan walked out wdout saying anythng but just gave a serious luk...!

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Episode-2... Part B

Geet at Station...!

G: yeh abhi tak koi aya kiun nai... papa se kaha bhi tha k khud ajaungi... ab kia karun... samajh hi nai arha... baba ji plz help me...

umm pyaas b lagre hai pani bi khtam...

she went at the shOp which ws near her bench...!

G: bhai saab aik pani ki bottle dena...

Shopkeeper: yeh lijie mam... umm 50 rps..

G: whattt... maine kia tanker lelia apse pani ka?

S: dekhiye yeh toh 50 rps ki hi hoti hai...

G: excuse me mujhe mat btayeee ... mai koi dusre planet se nai ayee... hamare kanpur mai yeh bottle 25 ki milti hai toh mujhe buddhuu mat bnaeee... ap jante nai mai kon hun

(she started arguing , afterall she is GEET 😆)

S: k..k..kon hain ap? (he was afraid 2 know)

G: main.. Geet Mehta...

S: hain... yeh kon hai? (his all afraidness blown away 😆)

G: kia matlab kon... GEEETTT... hamare kanpur mai sab darte the mujhse or tm ho k behes kar rhe ho or bewaqoof bna rhe ho..

S: dekhiye madam ap kanpur mai hi jaa ker raheeeye na phir... yahan kiun tamasha karhi hain...

G: ab tum mujhe btaoge mai kahan jakar rahun...???

S: acha galti hgai... maaf kardjiye... ap yeh free mai lejayee but plz yahan se jaayee.e...

G: apne costumers ko aise bhagate ho... or paise kiun na dun? tm kia mere chacha ho haaan?

Shopkeeper startsss hitting his head frm the wall 😆

G: pakro 25 rps...

S: shukriaaa apka bht bhttt meri ankhein kholne k liye,,,

G: han thek hai thek hai...

n she again sat on the bench...

G: its 3 pm... or mai 12 bje se wait krhi hun... what the hell...! kia karun kia karun... han mai khudi chali jati hun adress toh hai hi...

Maan reached at station.. but there were so much crowd so he was thinking kahan car park karey...! he was getting irritate by the crowd..." yeh mai kahan phas gaya...

is larki ko milne do aisa sabaq sikhaunga ultey paun wapis jaeeegii... but mai use pehchaanuga kaise...Goshhh kuch btaya hi nai dad ne... mai khudi toh wahan se

chala gaya tha...ab kia karun" (he was talking to himself itne mai he heard sumone fighting wid rickshaw wala)

he saw at rite side of him... A Girl (Geet) was fighting wd rickshaw wala... his eyes was just freezed on her... White kurta Shalwar, open hairs, heeled sandel...she was luking adorable...😳

G: yeh ap btameezi kiun krhe hain? maine bas address ka pucha na... toh... toh kia prob hai?

R: dekhiye behen jee mai apse btameezi nai karha mai toh bas yeh kehra hn k...

G: apne kaha k ham wahann nai jaskte... toh kia richshaw sajane k liye lia hia...

Maan came back in his senses... he had 2 get out frm his car coz they were standing infront of his car...

G: btaooo jarhe ho ya dusra rickshaw lelun...

R: behenjee ap dusra rickshaw b nai le...

G: what??? tmahre baap ka raaj hai k rickshaw b mai koi or nai le sakti...

Maan cam n interuppt them: " excuse me... larai jhagra side per kijiye... meri car ko agey jane mai prob hori hai..." geet turned back n luked at him then eyelock 😳

G: umm... kia matlab side per..? richshaw wala mjhse btameezi karha hai or use peetne k bajaye ap kehre ho k side per jakar laren...

M: peeetnaaa...??? rickshaw wale ko...???? 😲

G: han toh kanpur mai aise koi btameezi karta tha toh sab usko maarne lag jate the bare besharam ho ap...

M: excuse me... be in ur skin... em not here 2 sort out ur problems... em here for sumthng else.. so mjhe apne matters mai shamil mat karo...

G: excuse rejected...! i was talking 2 him agar kuch help nai karsakte toh jao or apni gaari mai beth ker tamasha dekho...!

M: who r u to tell me k mai kahan jaun... mjhe yehin khare rehna hai... tmhe kia...?

G: huh... fineee... khare raho... but beech mai kuch mat bolna...

M: Fineee,,,, (maan starts to look here n there.. to find dat Mr Mehta's girl but also hearing their fight, n geet phir se rickshaw wale se start 😆 )

G: han ab bOlo... kahan thi mai..? haaan... dusra rickshaw kiun na lun...

R: kiun k behenjeee apka luggage bhttt zada hai,... apko taxi hire karni paregi...!

Maan cudn't control himself n laughed out burst, geet luked at him wd embrassement, Maan smirked...

G : um ummm pehle nai btasakte the,,,, han... pagal... (she went near a taxi) bhai saaab KHURANA HOUSE chalenge...?

Maan luked at her n shocked n then came near 2 her... " excuse me" she turned back..: " tm ? tm phr se ? i said na beech mai mat bolna"

M: dekhooo...

G: what? em not here 2 see suchhh cartoons...

M: what...??/ em i cartoon...?

G: any doubt?

M: just shut up... n mere sath chalo...

G: what??? tmaaare sath??? tm mujhe kahin WO toh nai samajhre... awww... how dare u... abhi police ko...

M: justtt shut ur mouth... (he hold her arm n forcefully take her in his car)

so here was the 2nd epi... i hope u like it.. n if no toh bhi feel free to tell me... dat wud be encouraging too... press the like tab n leave ur comments dat really mean alot for me
😳

love
yaaa ❤️

Edited by princess-mahum - 13 years ago