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Heyy People ! 😊
I am Naima 😃 And a die hard fan of maaneet 😉 Well i was always a silent
reader and loved these fan fictions 😛 .. These actually motivated me to create my own if account and talk to all of you ! You people are soo sweet and friendly that i would love to chit chat and know you all better 😉 Anyways for now i wanted to introduce and ask you people about your opinoin about my fan fiction 😊😉😉 I will post a scene tonight and mostly it will be one shot as i can't keep up with looonggg stories lol .. Then i'll write all one shot scenes or stories on the theme you people will suggest !! Hopefully will see some replies and suggestions once i log in again to give you people an update :D And i will try my best to fulfil your demands on the scenes :)

Thank you sooo much !
Hope to get your support :)
Naima ! 😊😊😊

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Maaneet SR .. (below)

Morning After .. (below )

Maan jealous .. page 2

His revenge ... page 3

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😊Heyy this is the first scene ! As maan and geet are married so SR is very imp bcz no marriage complete without that 😆😆 so here it goes 😉

Maan and Geet's SR😉😉😉

P.s .. Sorry for mistakes :)

The wedding was fabulous and everything was exceptional bacuse it was The Maan singh Khurana's wedding so there was NO chance of any mistake . Here geet was siiting on the bed waiting for her price charming to arrive and blushing thinking about the events that will take place tonight . She still remebered maan saying main tumhari himmat test karoon ga she was nervous would he actually test it and .. she statred blushing not wanting to think more ..

Here Maan tried the thousand time to convince all the girls including pinky to tell hm whatever they wanted so he could enter the room . he was getting restless and wanted to see his geet and make her his forever . He wanted his geet so bad . He wanted to fulfill her dream but before that he wanted to have fun . He smirked thinking about what he was going to make her do tonight . His chain of thoughts were broken by pinky shouting and adi and that was it he had become enough of that sweet maan he was back to his MSK mode and gave a glair to all which was enough for them to shut up .

Maan : Adi ! give them whatever they want and i am going as i am very tiered . Samjhay ?

Adi : y y y y e e s s s s sssiiirrr !

Maan : Good

Annie jumped in and starting teasing im while others giggled .

Annie: Bhai ! U 're tiered acha chalay you go to sleep tou main geet bhabhi ko apnay saath sula laitee hoon wo kya hai na she'll get bored after u've slept ..

It was soo hard for her to control her laughter and speak with an innocent face but maan gave her a deadly glare and she bursted out laughing .

Shaking his head and irritated by all he entered the room into their world . where there would be him and geet . geet his mishty , his life , his jaan his world his everything . He scanned the room and saw it was beautifully decorated with candles all over the room and no light except the dim light from the candles . he looked at the bed and saw his mishty sitting there with a veil that was covering her face and bed was decorated with strings of roses . On the other side geet got alert and started to feel shy when she heard the door open and then the click of the door she was too shy to do anything and then she felt maan sit next to her .

He lifted her veil and saw her beautiful face . he was once again hit by her beauty and was memorized as to what perfect features she had . Not able to resist he brushed his lips agaist hers

Geet : Maan (she moaned)

That only turned him on and he took her into a deep log kiss ... sucking her lower lip ... he wanted access but she was not allowing rather she was too shy to react in this situation so he bit her lower lip and she gasped .. he took this oppurtunity and entered his tounge and played with each otheres ... They kept kissing each other giving them pleasure till they gasped for air .

Geet felt shy and turned a shade pink and hid her face in her palms . But maan got in a naughty mood and said

Geet ! Agar abhi se sharmaoo gee tou agay kya karoon gee ? (winking at her)

WARNING : 18+

Now her already pink shade cheeks turned red and she wacked him lightly but maan held her hand and stated to take off the bangles one by one kissing the spot tht left bare . he did the same with the other hand also Now trailing how wet kisses on her arm .. He then took off her maang tika and kissed her forhead lovingly as to promising to be by her side always ... then came the earings . he took off her earings and nibbled on her earlobe . she was blushing and moaned 'Maan' but little did she know he was no where to stop tonight . Tonight she was at his mercy . he did the same with the other other earring also .. He unclapsed her necklace and trailed open mouthed kisses all over her neck . he sucked on her collar bone and bit her just above the cleavage . She gasped . Hen then took off her dupatta . She felt really uncomfortable and more than that she felt shy beacuse her low cut blouse and with no dupatta sitting in front of maan she felt she shy but to her surprise maan pulled her closed nibbiling on her soft flesh of her neck and started to open the dori of her blouse . Her blouse was only held by dozens of sting he snapped open one 'Maan please" she managed to plead but all he said was

' Ajj main tumhari koi baat nahi manay wala geet ..Buhat bhaag liay tum mujh se .. Aaj main kuch nahi sunoon ga aur waisay bhi maine kaha tha na keh main tumhari himmat test karoon ka aaj wo din aa gaya hai tumhain kya laga main bhool jaoo ga ?? huh geet ? '

he winked at her and looked at her naughtily ' bolo geet .. jawab doo ! '

But obviously she was in no position to answer as he opened her stirngs and now he was creating havoc on her bare back .. roaming his hands here and there feeling her skin taasing her senses but the hook of her bra was a barrier and tonight he would not bear any hurdle so he without a single though snapped open her hook . she felt too shy and hugged him tight while he got the chance to feel her back more and more . After breaking the hug he opened his shirt buttons and threw his shirt on the floor . She gulped seeig the perfect figure and the most handsome guy ever . He was soo hot that anyone could drool and without her consent her mouth fell open which didn't go unnoticed by maan and he smirked .

He then made her lie down and sucked on her belly button which was exposd due to the short blouse . He kissed every part of her stomach making her moan in pleasure even bit a few places as if caiming her to be his only his .. He them felt his mouth and touge take over the area where he had bit .he licked that part to ease the pain . But when he moved a little upward her shyness took over her once again and ' Maan aap' .. ' shh aaj kuch nahi geet .. i just want you to moan my name all night tonight ' he said sensously rubbing his thumb over her lip and finishing with a peck . Her lips parted slighty and not able to resist the temptation he kissed her passionately and more aggresively nibbling sucking and biting her lower lip . He then threw away the already loosened blouse and kneaded her b***** on top of her b** .. harsly pressing them .. realeasing and then again pressing taking her to the edge of madness . She couldn't help but moan his name and the little bit of self control in him also drowned . He ripped apart her bra and pinned her hands wanting no disturbance in doing the task which was haunting him the most . He bit her softest part and she gasped but soon her gasp turned into pain and pleasurable moans as he sucked and bit her curve ... leaving no place where his tounge or mouth had not reached . She wanted him to free her hands so she could feel him but he was not ready to give in . Finding no way out she bit his neck and he let her go . She imidiately grabbed him in an intimate hug with her hands roaming all over him back and chest feeling the perfect torso ever . She felt shy and pushed him but he was way tooo strong instead he pulled the strings and her lehenga was down in a jiff . He took off their remaining clothers and enterned her in a jerk . She screamed but her scream was surpressed by another hot passionate kiss . He then would thrust her harder and harder each time saying ' Ye mujhse bhagnee ki saza' she couldn't help but giggle at his saza and the way he made love to her .

After like hours of love making they lay in each other arms cuddled and happy with their life . :)

But please suggest trackes and also do tell me if i should continue this further ??

Thank you :)

Naima !!😊

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Os #2 .. The morning After 😉

She woke up in the morning as the rays of the sun fell on her face indicating a new morning , a new start a new beginning of her life with her love maan .. She saw him and a smile crept upon her lips but then she looked around the room and blushed seeing all the things scattered . Their clothes lying on the floor and how her bra was thrown she blushed remembering how maan could not bear any more distance and ripped her bra. Her cheeks turned red . She covered her self with a sheet and thinking of slipping to the washroom when she felt a strong arm encircle her waist .

Maan

Hmmm

Maan let me go I want to have a bath

Wait for some time then we'll go together

Maan (she blushed)

She again tried to get up but instead maan pulled her and she fell on his chest.

Hmmm aab bolo kahaan jana tha haan ? (pulling her more on top of him)

Maan please dadi maa is waiting na let me go (trying to free herself)

I am also waitng

Maan please jane dijiyee naa (she said trying to loosen his grip on her)

Theek hai jao

And before she knew maan rolled on top of her. Now geet was under him and her hands pinned to the bed.

Jaoo na geet tumhain jana tha na ? Ruk kyun gaee ? (He asked naughtily)

With that he started planting kisses on her neck and gave her a bite . She hissed but to soothe the pain he licked and just as he was about to go lower she stopped

Nahi maan no more kisses

Maan was a little surprised at this and said what?

Haan aur nahi tou kya look at all the marks you gave me! My body is full of marks. Now how will I hide them??

Achaw ?? (he smirked ) I can't see them

You can't?? ruku abhi deekhatee hoon.

And geet without realizing what she was doing removed her sheet to show him the marks that he gave all over her body . It was only that when she saw his heated gaze roaming all over on her naked form she turned crimson red and immediately pulled the sheet to cover herself and save herself from further embarrassment when maan stopped her

Nahi geet it's totally my fault

Umm No maan it's ok

Nahi geet agar main marks diyay hai tou I'll soothe them too (he whispered naughtily)

And with that he pulled the sheet down and began kissing and licking her marks giving her pleasure and all geet could do was just moan as her husband took her to another world of pleasures. Maan looked at her. Her eyes closed... Lips parted and moaning his name he took this opportunity and planted a deep kiss on her lips. He entered her mouth with his tough and felt each and every area of her mouth trying to grasp the honey like taste in him. He broke the kiss and lifted her up. Only then she got back to her senses

Maan ye aap kya kar rahi hai

Shhh

Maan please mujhain uthariyee dekhainyay mujhain nahanay jana hai

Hum wahi jaa rahay hai Mrs Khurana

Hum ?? nahi maan hum nahi main

Par geet sath problem kya hai ?? He asked still walking towards the bathroom

OMG don't tell me tumhain sharam arahi hai... Seriously after all we did last night?

Maan (she whacked his chest)

WARNING... 16+

He smirked and entered the washroom. Before she knew maan locked the door of the bathroom and pushed her inside the shower. Geet was not ready to take the sheet off because although whatever happened between them she still was shy. But maan helped her and in a swift go he took of her sheet. She hugged him feeling shy. Their wet body touched each other and now their proximity was being prominent. He pushed her to the glass wall and slammed his lips on her kissing her hard and aggressively under the shower. maan then looked at her breasts which had water droplets and without a second thought he sucked each and every drop of water that fell . He kept on sucking it like a starved man and even bit her at a few places. While his other hand kneaded her breast feeling her softness. He then parted her legs and entered her she screamed loud due to the sudden pain but maan suppressed it with his passionate kiss .

After an hour or so a smirking maan and blushing geet came out of the shower both wrapped in towels. Geet was about to take her saree inside to change when maan stopped her

Nahi geet aaj main tumhain apnay hathoon se tiaar karoon ga

Although she was a little shy but yet she could not refuse when he asked so lovingly. She smiled in return. He took her towel of and made her wear the blouse. Then turned her around and tied the doori of the blouse while deliberately letting his fingers linger on her back. He then bent down and started to set her pleats and drape the sarree around her beautifully. While placing wet kisses on her abdomen and stomach. He set her pallu on her shoulder and placed a kiss there. He made her wear the earning and kissed on her ear. He did the same with the necklace trailing long wet kisses all over her neck. He bends down and kissed her ankles while placing payal on each of them. He took a beautiful diamond studded waist chain and placed it on her belly while kissing her along with it and bit where he clasped the chain. It felt like he made her wear two waist bands one of his kisses and the other of diamond. He put sindoor and kissed her forehead promising that he would always be by her side and will give her all that she deserves. All geet could do was just look at her maan her husband in awe. How much she was in love with him. Overwhelmed by each and every gesture of his she hugged him tight with teary eyes. He reciprocated the hug and then kissed her tear away. Later she was about to put lipstick when maan stopped her

Ek min geet

Maan aab aap lipstick tou nahi lagaoo gay naa (she smirked)

Nahi par usse pehlay kuch karna hai

And before she could make out he kissed her deeply sucking biting her lips. After he broke the kiss he smirked and said

Agar baad main karta tou lipstick kharab ho jaatii naa geet ( he winked)

Maan aap bhi na

She pushed him and applied her lipstick.

Both later went down to meet everyone and very satisfied and happy with their life and feeling blessed to have each other . They couldn't thank God enough for such favors

I hope it was nice 😊 And sorry for my mistakes 😊 Please do comment and give feedback i love reading you comments 😃

Thank you 😊

Oh i was thinking about another Os of maan getting jealous ! What say ?? 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

noice noice 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

thz was fab...

me loved it sooo much...

ur also thing to make a another os...cool...

plz start as fast as posible...

hey ur writing skills are good... if u don't mind y don't u do start a ff dear...

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Naima

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsweet
thz was fab...

me loved it sooo much...

ur also thing to make a another os...cool...

plz start as fast as posible...

hey ur writing skills are good... if u don't mind y don't u do start a ff dear...

heyy ! thank you soo much 😊 that is soo sweet of you 😊 I will post next part tomorrow 😊 An ff hmmm actually am not that good :P but will start with ss 😊 Thank you once again 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it dear..do write more :)

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Naima

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thankyou Everyone 😃

Here it goes 😉

OS # 3 Maan jealous !

Ullu .. Dafforee .. dush Dhanav .. Samjahte kya hai apnay aap ko ??? Mujhain party main nahi lekar gaee ! Main do minute late kya ho gaee jaisay afat aa gaee mujhain ' mujhain GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko choor kar chalay gaee 😡 aab aap deekhna Mr khurana main kya karti hoon 😈 party main tou main zaroor aoo gee

😉 ( she smiled evilly with a mischievous plan forming in her mind to teach her husband a lesson )

Yes geet maan singh khurana was cribbing to her baba jee about how her husband left her and went to the party .

Maan and geet were invited to a party and geet being geet took all her time to get ready . she wore a beautiful saree and looked stunning but after a little while which was an hour she came out and saw maan had left without her and kept a note saying he had been waiting for her for the past one hour and now he was going as he was getting late as Mr. Mehta was waiting for him . This angered her and she went in the room cursing her husband for leaving her. And vowed to teach him a lesson .

With this thought she started to change. She wore a saree with a back less blouse which had only one string with a knot in the middle holding the blouse . The rest of her milky cream back was bare . She had purposely tied her saree below her navel giving a better few of her curvaceous body . She then put make up . She wore her mangalsuter but on top of it wore a necklace which kind of hid her mangalsuter . Se filled her maang with sindoor but covered her hair in such a way that the sindoor was not very prominent. She looked at her self in the mirror and very satisfied with her look. She picked up her clutch told nakul to take the car out and had an evil smirk on her face . with self determination she said Aab deekhna mr maan singh khurana main kya karti hoon . You will regret leaving me ...

Maan was in the party hall and he somewhere felt bad for leaving geet and coming but he could'nt have helped it , he was called as the chief guest and everyone was waiting for him for the inauguration ceremony . All company owners were invited and he didn't want to get late . But he smiled naughtily thinking about how he would make up for this to his wife tonight 😉 but little did he know his geet had planned a lot for him .

His eyes fell on the entrance and his gaze froze when he saw his geet his princess entering the party hall looking nothing less than a beautiful angel. But he was a little surprised seeing no mangalsuter and sindoor. Her eyes met his but she lowered her eyes and started to walk ahead. He was surprised but then thought she must be angry at him. She walked passed him and then his eyes fell on her backless blouse and bare back. His mouth fell open. He looked around and saw everyone gaping at his mishty, Anger boiled inside him with the thought of all the men staring at her. He went to her and held her firmly from her wrist and took her to a lonesome corner .

Geet ye tumne ya pehna huwa hai ?? 😡

Kapray maan ! aur kya ? (she smirked)
Tumhain pata hai na I don't like you wearing revealing clothes in public 😡

Main aap ki baat kyun suno ?? Aap mujhain leh kar aiyee thay ?? Nai na ! I came alone and I will do whatever I want

And she walked off angrily leaving maan boiling in anger . But then he remembered she did wear the mangalsuter and sindoor which was noticeable only when he stood very close to her . He looked at her retreating figure and clenched his fist at her bare back , he wanted to devour her this minute but she was gone back in the party .

He came back to the party but his eyes searched for her and he found her on the dance floor dancing with ADI .. He boiled although he knew adi was just a friend and no hard feeling but the thought that adi was touching his wife's bare waist he could not tolerate .he was definetly acting like a possessed man who owned her . He was buring in the fire of jealousy and it only added more fuel when adi twirled her around 😉 . That was the limit . he went to the dance floor and glared at adi . 😆poor adi gulped his saliva 😆and vanished before his life would be at stake but only to be stopped by geet 😉 he feared even more because maan sir was glaring and geet was not ready to leave his hand 😆

Ggg eee eee ttt (adi stammered)

Jee adi sir ? ( she asked coolly)

G gee ttt maaannn sir aagayyeee haiii tt tt ttuummm uunnn kaayyy ssaa tthhh tthhh ddaa nnn ccceee kkaaarrrooo (he was hell frightened )

(geet maan sir aa gaee hai tum un kay sath dance karoo)

Aray adi sir aap bhi na.. (to maan) maan aapko koi problem tou nahi agar main adi sir kay sath dance karoon ( she asked most innocently )

For the first time maan wanted to kill adi . he was confused what to do . He couldn't allow anyone to touch his wife's bare back be it adi also but he conuldn't even refuse .

Nahi geet woo main …

But before he could complete geet jumped in

Nahi na .. deekha adi sir chaleeyayy dance kartay hai .

Then adi and geet started dancing and all maan could do was curse adi and even more curse him self for leaving geet at home neither he would have left her home neither she would have done this . but then he got an idea he went near and

Adi ( he yelled)

He got frightened .

Yyy eee sss Siiirrr

Tumne Mr Mehta ko file nahi di abhi tak ?? 😡

Ssiirr dee maiinnee abhiii

Jhoot ! Jaoo jaa kar deekhoo ABHIII 😡

Emphasizing on the word 'Abhii" he just wanted an excuse to send adi away from his wife although he knew adi had given the file infront of him but still he had to do something . The sight of her wife dancing with him burned him from inside . Geet on the other hand smirked knowing well Maan was jealous .

As soon as adi left maan took that opportunity to dance with geet but before he could make a move geet announced she was thirsty and went towards the drinks . This angered maan more

Great ! ek tu she comes to the party wearing suck sexy and revealing clothes … dances with someone else and when I come to dance with her she run away .. aur kya kya jhailna parhay ga MSK ko aaj ?? Magar tum fikar na kroo geet main iska badla zaroor loon gaa 😉

He went near the bar only to see geet shaking hands with one of the clients . He could'nt bear the way he was gazing at his mishty so he went near her and put an protective arm around her bare waist and said loud enough for hm to hear

Chalain Mrs khurana ???

Before he could answer the client spoke

Oh my ! U're married ?? You look soo young and beautiful ! I thought you were single .

Maan glared at him and he just ran away from there not taking up a fight with The maan singh khurana . Geet laughed and as soon as he left she moved away from his grip and said

Mrs khurana ?? Abb yaad aya main aaki biwi hoon ?? tab kya huwa tha jab aap mujhain ghar par choor aiyee thayy ?? jaee mujhain apse koi baat nai karni aap ..

Before she could speak and further he slammed his lips on her not allowing her to speak any further . He kept on sucking her lower lip and kissing her aggressively biting her lips till they were breathless .Luckilt it was dark and noone could witness their wild love as everyone was busy in dancing . Not able to take any more of all this he dragged her to the car and made her forcefully sit in the car . He then sat on the driving seat and tied her belt while geet looked away angrily and maan just smirked and self thought

Abhi ghar tu chaloo phir batata hoon geet .. Maan singh khurana se panga lenaa na nateejaa … Aaj tum nahi bachoo gee .. Aab dekhoon main tumharay sath kya kya karta hoon … You'll beg for mercy .. he gave a meaningingful smirk thinking about exactly what he had to do with his geet so she remembers never to torture the MSK . His expressions were naughty .. and had a mischevious glint in his eyes thinking about what he'll do 😉😉

Pleasee do comment and press the like button it encourages me alot 😊

I guess you all know what he'll do to take his revenge 😉 So how many of you want an OS on his revenge ?????? 😉😉😉