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Does Love at first Sight actually happens ???? How many of you all believe it it???? But this two couple actually showed that Love at First sight do happens''.. Love can happen at any time or at any place'.. This is a story of two people who were totally stranger to each other fell for each other'.And became one'''..







The Bed room was fully decorated with flowers and candles. The beautiful girl was sitting on the bed'' thodi si sehami hui, dari hui was waiting for her husband to come''.. It was her wedding night' While waiting she just went into flash back thinking that I never believed that mujhe kabhi bhi pehli nazar mai kisi se bhi pyaar hoga and then she smiled''
Flash Back

It was a house of Soham and Sonam. They had just shifted to there new house and doing there interiors. A very beautiful girl was screaming at one of the person saying yeh maine aisa nahi karne ko kaha tha phir bhi aap logo ne aisa hi kiya'''.. Her name Geet a very bubbly girl''.. She was an interior designer and was designing her friends house'..

While Geet was screaming a very handsome man enters the house in search of his friend Soham''.. His name Maan''.. He had a very huge business empire and a very reserved by nature'' He just gets lost seeing the beauty of Geet and keeps on staring at her''.. She doesn't even realise that some one is seeing her''..

Hearing the scream of Geet Soham and Sonam comes out and Sonam goes near Geet and says

Sonam: Geet its ok jane de yeh bhi acha lag raha hai

Geet: are nahi Sonam in logo ko maine specific instructions diye the but nahi apni hi manmani karne ki'..

Soham: Are Geet its ok how much you will scream'..

While they were telling Geet Soham turns and sees Maan standing''

Soham: are Maan kab aya tu''..

Maan comes to his senses and hugs Soham but his eyes were still on Geet''

Maan: I just came'' How are you and Sonam'..

Soham: We are fine just adjusting with our new home''..

Maan looks around and says good house yaar'. Lovely interiors''.

While talking to Soham Maan eyes were stuck on Geet.

Soham: Ya Maan the credit goes to Sonam's friend'.. She has made this wonderful interiors'. She is there standing and screaming'''..

Maan : The way she has done this she is just beautiful'

Soham: Sonam see who has come''.

Sonam: Oh Maan'' you got time to meet us'..

Maan: Come on Sonam I got stuck in a meeting sorry yaar

Sonam: Its ok I can understand''.. wiase bhi aap dono dosto ko kaam ke alwa kuch dikhta hi nahi' Geet bus karo yaar ab kya unki jaan logi tum chodo usko indhar aja...

Sonam introduces Geet to Maan''..

Sonam: Maan she is my childhood friend Geet, and Geet he is Maan Soham's business partner and very best friend'. They both just cant live without each other''.. and Maan yeh jo interiors hai this is done by Geet only.

Maan looking at Geet: BEAUTIFUL

Sonam: hey na beautiful''..

Maan comes back to his senses and says ya very beautiful''..

Soham realises that Maan has lost for Geet and gives a wrink smile and self talk Fass gaya Maan babu''.

Geet: Ok Sonam am leaving now '

Sonam: aise kaise jaogi'' have dinner and go'.

Soham: Ya Geet we all 4 of us will have dinner together

Geet: ok

They all have their dinner and Geet was about to leave

Sonam: Soham we should go and drop Geet home its too late

Soham: Ya sure we will do that'..

Maan: If you all don't mind why are you both leaving I will drop Geet home''

Geet: Its ok I will go on my own

Maan: How can you go alone its too late.

Sonam: But Maan your house is '''

Soham stops Sonam from saying further and says: Maan ok you drop her home'''..

Geet and Maan both leave




In Car








Both were silent in the car''' Geet finally broke the silence between them''

Geet: Thank you for this

Maan: For what???

Geet: For dropping me home

Maan: talks in his mouth actually ghar chodna to shirf bahana tha I wanted you to be near me.

Geet: Aap ne kuch kaha kya???

Maan: No nothing you don't have to say thank you...

Geet was adjusting her dupptta and keeping her handbag near and at the same time Maan was adjusting the gear and by mistake Maan hands touched Geet''' Both could feel at sense of each other'''

Maan drops Geet home''.. and says hope we meet soon

Geet: ya sure Bye

Maan: Bye

That night Maan couldn't sleep at all he was in the dream of Geet'' The face was always in front of him'' Same was with Geet also'. She was thinking Maan was such a nice guy'.. He had everything what a girl wants'''. Dono jagaha aag barabar ki lagi thi'''.

Days started passing by'' Maan always went for some reason or other to Soham's place as the work was still on so that he could get to see Geet, talk to her''' Geet also liked Maan coming''..

One day in office

Maan was in his cabin in deep thought'''.. Soham enters the cabin and looks at Maan''Maan doesn't realise that Soham is in cabin

Soham: Maan Maan what are you thinking????

Maan: Nothing yaar just'..

Soham: I know what are you thinking???

Maan: What???? Actually Soham I was thinking that its high time we change our interiors'' Don't you feel that''

Soham: I know why you are feeling this'' Stupid why don't you talk to her if you love her so much'''

Maan: (little shy) No Soham aisi koi baat nahi hai''

Soham : You don't have to hide from me understood I realised it on that day itself ''

Maan: Ya Soham from that day I am going mad''.. I have started loving her like anything

Soham: Then Maan what are you waiting for go and tell her

On other side Geet condition was also same'''

Geet and Sonam had gone out for some shopping

Sonam: Whats the matter Geet why are you so quite??? You were never like this'.

Geet: nothing yaar just tired of work pressure

Sonam: acha Geet tell me the truth how do you find Maan

Geet: Yeh kisa sawal hai Sonam'''

Sonam: This is not the answer to my question''..

Geet: Sonam He is nice, I think he is the guy which every girl will urge for''.. But why are you asking me this????

Sonam: Because madam you are in love'.. I could see the spark of love in your eyes whenever Maan was nearby'..

Geet: But I don't know whether he also has the same feeling or not'.

Sonam: Don't worry I will speak to Soham about it



Days passed off and there feelings still remain between themselves

One day Soham was talking to Sonam and Maan over hears it but partly and things change'..

Soham: Ya dear I am leaving from office I know that we have to go to Geet house for engagement of her brother'..

Maan only hears Geet house for engagement and walks off without hearing the complete sentence. He gets an impression that it's the engagement of Geet that is happening'.

Maan just couldn't control his emotion''.. That night Maan for the first time in his lifetime cried like anything'.. He was feeling that someone very very important has gone away from his life''.. He was blaming himself that he should have spoken to Geet about how much he loves her'.. but now its very late''''.





Eventually he started ignoring Geet'''. Geet started feeling weird about Maan's behavior towards her'. The man who use to care for a her so much has suddenly ignoring her'.. She was not able to see what the problem was'. She thought many times to speak to Sonam about it but couldn't do it' She always stopped herself''' Geet started remaining upset'' She cried whenever she was alone'' She just couldn't take Maan behavior''

Soham and Sonam causally noticed the change behaviour among Maan and Geet'''

Sonam: Soham why Maan is ignoring Geet whats the matter???? Have you noticed them if Geet is there Maan walks off'..

Soham: Ya Sonam even I cant understand and infact Maan loves Geet like anything'' He has gone crazy for her''' I don't know is that the case that Maan must have propose Geet and Geet must have said no''

Sonam: No No Soham that is not possible because even Geet loves Maan.

Soham: Oh if that is the case then problem kaha hai yeh to ab janna padega'

Soham speaks to Maan

Soham: Maan kya baat hai I am seeing you last few days you look very upset''..

Maan: Nothing Soham''.. Whats the point in telling you'. You knew everything and you never inform me'.. you should have atleast told me''

Soham: What have I done??? What did I hide from you???? I am not able to guess anything'''..

Maan: Tumhe pata than a ki Geet ki engagement ho gayi hai then why did you not tell me'' and now also you are not telling me'' and mujhse hi sawal puch rahe ho

Soham: Geet ki engagement???? What are you saying???? Who told you this????

Maan: That day I was about to come to your cabin to discuss with you about that project at that time I heard you talking to Sonam that I am coming home as we have to go to Geet house for engagement''..

Soham: Ya to????

Maan: Soham what do you mean by Ya to'..

Soham: Oh that means you heard only half''' That day we went to Geet house for engagement but that engagement was of Geet's brother not Geet understood''' Ohhh so now I understood why you were behaving in such a manner'''.

Maan: You mean Geet is not engaged'' I mean I misunderstood it''.. I should have asked you before reacting to anything''.. I must have hurted Geet also by my behaviour''..

Soham: Now go and tell her that you love her otherwise sach mai uski engagement ho jayegi and you will be like Devdas'..

Maan was about to run''

Soham: aare Maan where are you going

Maan: To meet Geet

Soham: She is in my house


Maan and Soham reaches Soham's house'' Geet was already there' Seeing Maan Geet was about to leave'..

Maan: Geet''.. Will you marry me'''

Geet shocked and looks at Maan''..

Maan: Geet please javab do''' I will die without you I love you'.

Geet: Stupid itni si baat kehne ko itna time laga diya'''. Yes I will marry you'''

Geet and Maan spoke to their parents about each other''.. The wedding was fixed and they both got married to each other'' That day was the happiest day in their life'''.

Back to Present

Maan enters the room and hearing the noise of the door brings Geet back from what she was thinking''.. Maan praises the beauty of Geet to no end''' They were in each others arm for the whole night''.. They made love''''




Guys Do you all believe that Love at First sight happens






If you all really like my writing Please press like and do comment... Will be waiting for all of yours response... Your likes and comments means a lot to me...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one...

Love at first sight...hmm...i dont know anyone who has fallen in love at first sight...n i toh dont have a love life...lol
So, no idea abt it...but yes, i've seen in films n tv serials that it happens...
It must be a beautiful experience na...reading your story which has maaneet in it...i wish i find someone like this who falls in love with me at first sight...lol
Awesome dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dea
i'm not sure but heard some people saying that love can happen anywhere anytime
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Graphic #17

Anamika
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow loved it Anna u r amazing
Yes I believe in love at first sight lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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frnd...😉...

4 Pming Me...😛
4 ur new Story...🥳..
👍🏼4 ur
updates.👏👏👏..
me dear...😃..
really dear..😛
lots of hugs n kisses 4 u...🤗...
lov,❤️
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P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply loved it dearawesome OSthanks for the pm
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yes...yes I believe it...love can happen even when u don't even see the person...I have this experience...I fell in love with name and got husband of same name...strange hai na...😆

when I was 12 yrs old I read a novel with name Satish as its hero...after reading it I fell in love with the name Satish and even I prayed to God that whenever I get married later may my husband has this name...

Later when I was 17...one day a person came to our house with one of our relative and when he saw me he instantly asked for my hand in marriage from my parents...after some days of thinking my parents agreed...,his name was Naveen...
he was good looking...very good physique...good voice...
until that time I realized that that was just -kachchi umar ka pyaar---so I accepted my fate to have husband of name Naveen...

before one month of marriage my would be husband got new Job and send letter to me with new address...I am living with my friend until I get my accomodation...this is new address---
Satish Chandra..
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I got shock and very annoyed with Bhagwaan...hai bhagwaan if u didn't give me husband having Satish name..why u make his friend with this name...
then I answered his letter to that address that ur friend has a very good name...he answered me back---stupid this is my name not my friend's...
after marriage when I told my husband that I loved this name and when I thought this is ur friend's name I was annoyed...so my hubby joked---thank God this is my name who knows u may have eloped with my friend...

So...this is my real love story...I loved a name...pray to God and God granted me my wish...

beautiful OS...I loved it...thanx for pm
Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awasome os
Loved it
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lovely OS...

truly love at first sight...

thnx for PM...

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