DD's Absence -- A 5 Day Track Layout

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Peeps!!

As DD is going to London .. I felt like coming up with a potential track that could be carried out in a span of 5 days to accomodate her leave YET still keep a focus on the main ML track .. it involves Maaneet, and focuses on Maan's ML. I hope you like it .. and I was requested to put this on the MF so that you and potentially the CVs could have a look at it! 😊 Do leave your feedback if you like/dislike it 😳
So here goes:
Mon: Maaneet getting close ... Maan getting invited to an ashram or a place related to kids .. and he is the guest of honour (kind of like how Geet did after the MC) .. Maan and Geet both head off (maybe to drag a bit we could show some nice Maaneet moments in between like a car ride..them talking ..them stopping at a lake and spending good moments .. anything romantic and eventful and not boring ...
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Tues: Maaneet reach the ashram .. they meet and greet. . they sit in an assembly and the MC gives special mention to them .. and then starts to talk about the orphans .. and the kids.. and what kids mean ... and Geet gets pretty emotional remembering her baby .. Maan is kind of confused as to why she's tearing up but he doesn't ask her ...Geet seems dejected from Maan and doesn't talk much to him after that as she is saddened ..
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Wed: Maan is worried for Geet ... he tries to ask her what's the matter but she doesn't answer .. he remembers that she was getting upset only at the mentioning of the kids .. and suddenly his mind starts to work and he gets the feeling that maybe Geet wants to have children? But Maan may not be so ready to have kids yet as he just happened to accept her and just started his new life journey with her .. He asks Geet if she is upset because she is longing to have a child? Did she want to have a child with him before his ML? Geet is stunned ...
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Thurs: Geet doesn't answer him as emotions take over and she just maybe whispers "Mera baccha ..." and leaves it at that .. and runs away .. (by this time they are outside in a field-ish area talking .. and not in the ashram and its nighttime) .. and Maan is left confused because she says "Humara baccha .." as if she had a child .. Maan starts to get hazy and his mind starts to trigger .. almost setting a flashback .. he starts to get a headache .. and he stammers .. but isn't able to move much .. so he starts to go near a tree.. and bumps into it .. and he is so disoriented already that he hits his head hard on it .. and BAM -- flashback of Mein Pregnant Hoon .. and Maan leaving Geet's hand .. and turning away from her..
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Fri: Maan gets a jolt from what he just saw .. he first thinks his mind is playing games with him because it was so vivid .. and he tries to concentrate .. and realizes he just had a memory flashback .. Geet is nowhere to be found (she goes off somewhere and they don't have to show DD for the rest of the epi) and Maan starts to wonder why he must've been so angry at her .. and starts to think that Geet was pregnant.. but not with his child .. and the rest of the episode could be Maan questioning himself .. questioning what this flashback meant.. he get's sort of angry that Geet may have deceived him in the past? Etc etc..
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Z
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jyoti06 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww what super writing Z 👏👏..see this is what is missing from the current episodes ...this drama and curiosity factor of what next ...even in DD's absense they could hv shown a restless MSK questioning his past ..doing some hoo-haa and all which would hv been much better than this man vs woman joke ...I really hope CVs who r stalking this forum ,sees your post and take some ideas from it of how to write a track in the absense of one of the lead ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really wish cvs read this n incorporate it in d story. evn whn DD returns Maan's memory flashes can come. in fact cvs seemed to have ML. they have forgotten dat Maan has ML. instead all their focus n energy is n writing senseless crap epi on amritsar gang - havinng juvenile fight bet boys n girls. aren't they grown up to act like adults! why r they acting like kinder garden kids. and what happnd to our MSK? reduced to bawarchi!!!
pls cvs read and take some ideas!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it
MP should defo see this
He may get some skills from you
roseinbloom thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jyo: Thankyou :) And frankly it's all in their hands .. they can't make us think that they DON'T have the ability to write this much at least .. they're much more experienced than I ever will be so do they really expect us to believe they can't come up with something logical and interesting just because a lead is going off to another country for a few days??
I hope they read this too!
Z
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Posted: 13 years ago
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priya: exactly .. I am not liking the characterization at all .. and if MP doesn't want to do his hwk .. he can just focus on Maan's reactions after the flashback .. and give him monologues and stuff .. because he really doesn't get the fact that Maaneet are the leads and this is not how they are characterized to be ..
giggles: thanx :) I hope so too!
Z
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice logical and interesting layout for the episodes. Just wish CV's have these kind of thoughts once in a while t move the story in an interesting way
roseinbloom thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nirvy: don't we all! Thankyou :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Zee TV wonderful ideas, it's too late to implement now, cause DD has to leave tomorrow, but yes in future they can use these ideas.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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This layout is quite interesting...MSK will have flashbacks would want to know d answers to his questions & then another interesting track could be introduced...though MP is suffering from writers block he will not take ideas from others...& we will have to watch his beloved Amritsar circus party's tamasha

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