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Helllooo bhaaiyon (if any) aur behno...I know its tooo early 2 announce another FF comin...but SERIOUSLY SPEAKING I just couldn't stop myself 4m writing down the two ideas which were buzzing inside my head 4 quite a while (there's something 4 the ArSh fans as well but not b4 I complete at least half of ROTE)

As I have completed more-than-half of ''Innocence...lost'', so I was thinking of a replacement 4 that😃 as I have two more ff's 2 complete!!!!


So comin back 2 the topic,taking a cue from samira darling,here I will present 2 idea on each reserved post,respectively.

What u guyz have 2 do is press the like button on the post of the story u liked better.

Even if u like both (which I doubt),u HAVE 2 press 4 just ONE!!!!

Done with my blabbering...over 2 u all (concepts comin up).


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sometimes in a man's world...


...the woman makes the rules...


Either abide by them...or...


A sneak peak:

'Good luck...have a happy married life' read the sms.Geet clutched the cell ever-so-tightly only to control the anger,frustration and feeling of helplessness rising in her.Angry tears made their way to her cheeks as the taunting words in Annie's sms kept ringing in her brain.




She wanted to do something...something extreme...if only that can drill some sense into the brains of her dimwitted parents who think getting her married off to some richie rich business person will solve everyone's problem,not realizing that it will do no good than destroying the lives of three people!




She knew she just can't run away,thanks to the security arrangements her dad has made for this special occasion.The only option left was suicide...but then she loved herself too much to do something like that!




As all these thoughts were brimming in her head,she heard a knock on the door.She opened it to find her mother standing at the foot of the door with a stern face.




''They've arrived'' she stated.Next thing she remembered was her being almost dragged out of her room and made to sit beside her 'hubby-to-be.'




She didn't realize what all was happening around her as she did everything in a trance,silently promising herself that she'll make the lives of her parents HELL!




This game was started by the elders of her family but it will be played by her...according to her rules.

So...that was concept 1.

P.S Concept 2 will arrive tonight.😊
Edited by shelly_08 - 13 years ago
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Her story would have been different



Her dreams,her goals would have been different,


Her life would have been different


If only...

Sneak peak

''Isn't it strange...I mean a fresh intern having a 6-7 year-old kid?''




''Whats so strange in that,may be he's adopted...you know her right,it's her nature which makes her do such charity work.''




''That's something different di...this boy cannot be adopted...I mean if I'm not wrong its a rule in India that single mothers cannot adopt a kid until they are at least 21 years older to the kid...and given her age...I mean don't you think it's weird?''




''Oh come on shilpz is that really our problem? May be he's one of her elder sister's kid or some best friend's kid...remember the film 'Kati Patang'?'' Anjali replied slightly irritated.




''I don't buy that di...have you ever observed his smile...it's so like her! And not only that I've secretly taken his blood and DNA samples...and guess what they match!'' Shilpa exclaimed.




Anjali shook her head in disbelief and then looked at her in a weird way ''you actually took his and Geet's blood samples...are you crazy?''




''No di it was all out of curiousity...and don't you think it's really weird to have a grown-up kid at the age of 22? My calculation says she must be around 16+ or 17.''




Anjali knitted her brows and looked at her sister,all of a sudden taking interest in the topic ''come to the point Shilpz...are you trying to say there was some history behind all this...like teenage pregnancy resulting from some forced marriage, love-affair or...''




Shilpa's voice shook as she added ''or even worse.''



That was concept two

Hope you liked my efforts😊

P.S-Credit of the title goes to the 2004 American film with the same name BUT the story is not the same😉


Edited by shelly_08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved both the concepts,but i vote for the first one(concept 1).
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st concept was too good
more than d second concept

Edited by niticool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I lykd both d ffs... plz.continue soon..w8ing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Di if I like both Wat wil u do????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like both concepts...if i have to pick one then it would be Concept 1...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurmina-rks

Di if I like both Wat wil u do????


I will KILL YOU!!!!! hehehe...ur askin me as I'll actly do that😛
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Originally posted by: renjini263

I lykd both d ffs... plz.continue soon..w8ing..


Thnx dear...glad u liked it😊

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