A Beautiful Night MG OS upd 3( pg6)

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A Beautiful Night ' MG OS

this is my second OS...tried really hard of writing sumthng!!


A Beautiful Night ' MG OS

She was breathing heavily under a tree'.Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana was trying to escape from the goons who were after her'.Drapped in a lovely white sari Geet was under a tree wondering why she had to get out of house at this point of tym'.


FLASHBACK'

It was the reception party of Mr.& Mrs. Dev Singh Khurana'The flowers which she had ordered hadn't arrived and the hall where the reception was to be held was not decorated properly yet and Mr.Maan Singh Khurana ended up shouting on his wife''She decided that she'll go and talk to the planner herself'...she had gotten out of the house after getting ready'...she had worn a lovely white saari'.the blouse was blackless'.her hair left loose open on her right side'her white saari was of silk'her pallu was tied up to her left shoulder'.she was wearing big diamond earing'her mangalsultra and her kamrpatta'.she had white glass bangles in her hands'and the ring which Maan had given to her on their engagement day'...she looked like a princess'.

On her way the car in which she was travelling suddenly stopped'she asked the driver wht happened??he said that the engine has b'cum hot n that they cannot travel further'geet got out of the car told him to get a mechanic n planned to go by walk 'the driver said ..but mam its not safe for u to go lyk this'she said its ok I'll manage'.


The End



Under a tree'geet to herself'.geet to pagal hai..sach main jhalli hai iss waqt akele aane ki kya zaroorat thi..hey babaji ab main kya karun'.after thinking for sumtym she said par main aur kya karti maan mujhse naraaz the aur Mujhe apni galti sudharni thi isiliye main nikal gayyi'hey babaji ab aap hi meri maddad karo..suddenly one of the goons grabbed her from the back'she got scared to death'she treid to push him away but wasn't able to..he tried to force himself on her..tears started rolling down her face'.and thn suddenly'

A man in a black Armaani tuxedo came from behind n made that goon turn towards him as slowly as possible'he turned and said aa gayya tu chal mast maal mila hai attack karte hai(thinking that person to be his partner)'.n got shocked to see a man standing n staring at him wid full anger in his eyes'as though he wud eat him right thn'.he asked tu kaun hai yaar aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho??geet who was in tears smiled in joy to see her Maan standing there wid full anger in his eyes'.

The goon was holding geet in a very tight grip'.maan said ladki ko chhod do'the goon replied tu kyun padh rahaaa hai beech main jaa na yahaan se'.maan again said..maine kahaan na ladki ka haath chhod do wid anger in his eyes'the goon stared at him n started laughing'.maan got angry n punched his nose'it started bleeding'.he tried to hit him back but maan held his hand'.the goon asked kaun lagti hai yeh teri??kyun isko bachaana chahta hai?maan punched him again n said yeh meri biwi hai hai aur kabrdaar jo iski taraf buri nazar se dekha toh n hit him again'this tym maan hit him so hard that he left running'.he thn saw his wife who was standing there 'fully drenched wid a few scratch marks on her neck n hands which the goon planted on her while she was trying to escape his grip'.she was feeling very cold and there was a smile on her face'he was shivering in the cold'.

Maan realized and being a handsome gentleman removed his tuxedo n placed it around her shoulders'she looked into his eyes with love and affection'her eyes were watery'.she wanted to hug him as tightly as possible but was hesitant but finally took the courage whn she saw him staring at him wid the same passion which she was feeling'.maan at first didn't hug her back n felt a lil uncomfy but thn after a little hesitation he hugged her as tightly as possible'she hid herself completely in his arms feeling secure'.she didn't want to move but it was late n maan had cum back to his senses'he slowly moved her back n said chalo ghar chalte hai'she said a yes..maan opened the door for her n she sat down in n he got to the drivers seat..he cud feel that she wasn't feeling gud coz of the events that took place a lil while ago'.he switched on the radio'"LABON KO LABON PE SAJAAO"'.the song from bhool bhulaiyaan was being played'geet was looking out of the window with her hand next to the gear box'maan rather than seeing in front was stealing quick glances at her n wid d lyrics in the background he felt a deep desire to take her into his arms'.he saw her hand next to the gear box'.he held it n said geet 'geet looked at him'he said tum theek ho na??she said yes..her voice was a lil husky'he said geet aaj jo kuch bhi huwa use plz bhool jao..n suddenly the car stopped'.geet asked kya huwa maan..he said pata naheen check karta hoon'

He got out of his car n started checking the front of the car..instead of checking he was again stealing quick glances'this tym geet got out of d car and asked him kya huwa maan?? Maan thn checked n realized that the car had no petrol in it'.they cudnt go back home now as they had no vehicle to travel in and they were on the outskirts of the city'they cud hardly see anyone'geet asked ab kya karenge maan??maan said pata naheen geet chalo dekhte hai aaj ki raat kahaan guzaar sakte hai'.

He took her hand in his n started walking'geet surprised by this action of his'.she smiled n held it back even more tightly and they were walking'maan was looking here and there to see if he cud find sum place for em to stay'.geet was holding his hand and asked him maan hum kahaan jaa rahe hai...he said pata naheen geet'n suddenly his eye caught the site of a hotel'it wasn't a huge one but a very small hotel'maan said chalo geet aaj ki raat guzaarne ke liye intezaam hogaya'both of em enter the hotel'maan finally leaves her hand n asks the receptionist if there were rooms available'he said yes sir they r 5 rooms available'how many do u need'geet was standing beside him and didn't bother much with their talk'Maan said hume 1 kamra chahiye'geet luked at him with surprise'maan smiled back at her'the receptionist asked maan 'room kis ke naam par book karvau sir??he replied'"MR.AND MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA" ke naam se'geet smiled at him with tears in her eyes'he took the keys from the receptionist took geet's hand and asked chale geet'she replied yes'and they went into the room'


PART-2

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Chalo abhi ke liye itna hai..there's a lot more after this..i'll upd d 2 part in a day or two..

I'd written an OS b4 'that was my first OS..its no where connected to this but still thought of posting d link'

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1768769/my-1st-mg-os-mere-haathoun-ki-mehndi

Mere Haathoun Ki Mehndi -MG OS



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wow i loved it !!! awsome one ..do continue this to another part..
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Wow Awasome one
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Thanks 4 da pm n fab OS! Update soon

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PART -2

They went into the room'they were still holding hands'.maan opened the door n got in first n told geet to come in she came n he locked the door'.geet after much hesitation asked maan aapne ek hi kamra kyun liya?maan smiled at this question of hers'n didn't reply..he thn realized that geet's lip was bleeding..he got worried n told he'll get the first aid box'geet said naheen maan koi baat naheen main theek hon but maan didn't listen'he went n got the box'geet was still in maan's tuxedo'


Maan got the first aid box and made geet sit on the bed n sat in front of her'he removed cotton n applied dettol on it..he said geet thoda jalega par jaldhi theek ho jaayega'geet said agar aap lagaoge toh bilkul naheen jalega'.he took the cotton n dressed her lip'geet started shivering coz of his touch on her lips'..he realized it and smiled'thn after dressing that wound of hers ..he realized that they were scratch marks on her neck'he saw em n touched em n saw geet's eyes with pain'he cudnt control n he planted a kiss on those scratch marks'.geet was njoying his touch'after planting several kisses he asked her ki r u wounds hurting u??she said naheen aap ne choo(touch) kardiya aur who apne aap hi theek ho gayye'he luked deep into her eyes'



Thn he got up n said geet tum change karlo puri bheegi huwi ho sardi lag jaayegi'she sayz par yahaan toh kapde hi naheen hai'.he realizes n sayz aare haan main ek kaam karta hoon bahar jaakar dekhta hoon n geet holds his hand'.he asks kya huwa geet??she sayz aapne mere sawal ka jawab naheen diya maan'aapne ek hi kamra kyun liya??he cumes n sits beside her n shez luking into his eyes to find answers to her questions'.he sayz geet tum meri patni ho itne din hi hum alag rahe hai..main chahta hoon ke main tumhe jaanu pehchaanu aur kareeb se take hum ek shaadi shuda jode ki tarah reh sake'main jaanta hoon meri yaadshadt ki wajeh se tumhe bahut kuch sehna oada par ab naheen geet'main tumhe ek pati kya pyaar dena chahta hoon geet jo har biwi ko apne pati se milta hai main woh tumhe dena chahta hoon geet'main tumhe khush dekhna chahta hoon geet'tears started rolling down her cheeks wid joy'.she said maan'n hugged him'he was a lil hesistant in the beginning but soon hugged her with the same passion wid which geet had hugged him'both lost in each others arms'.



Maan sayz geet ab toh jaa sakta hoon na kapde dhoonde ke liye 'warna tum bimaar padh jaaogi'.geet sayz naheen maan plz Mujhe chhod kar mat jaaiye Mujhe darr lag rahaan hai'he sayz main 2 min main aaya'he goes out n searches but dosent find anything'.he cumes back'.n is overthrown by his wifes beauty'

Geet is in front of the mirror'she has removed his tuxedo n is drying her hair'she luks gorgeous'she had the perfect figure'.he saw em n cudnt stop luking at her'.their was a deep desire inside him..he wanted to make geet his this night'he finally came forward n geet didn't realize that hez back'..he came from behind and geet saw him in the mirror'she turned n said maan aap aagaaye..kya huwa kapde naheen mile??koi baat naheen hum aise hi sookh(dry) ho jaayege...he smiles and suddenly the light goes off but they can see each other coz of the moonlight'geet hugs him n sayz maan plzzz door mat jaaiye Mujhe andhere se bahut darr lagta hai'.he smiled n held her n said main kahin naheen jaa rahaan'.thn he took geet along wid him to the table where the candles had been placed..he lit em up'geet luked even more beautiful in the candelight'he just cudnt stop himself'.as there was enough light geet moved away n again went to the mirror n was drying her hair'



He looked at her back which luked gorgeous as her blouse was backless'her bangles were making sweet noises which made him even more restless and thn finally he came luking at her back and hugged her from behind..geet got scared and smiled at that gesture of his'.maan made geet turn towards him..he luked deep into her eyes n planted a kiss on her forehead'she shut her eyes'.he thn kissed her eyes thn eyes,nose,chin,ears,cheeks n finally her lips'


the last part will updt soon..!!😳

Edited by ArMaanDeewan - 13 years ago

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