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@Silentsoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

preety neat...sweet sensible episode...but if this would be screenplay how...will we hate GEET...
Ths should be written ...its so simple...if u can write...why not...writers...
You wre superab MERI VICE...very NICE...rarely...happen U are nice...😉

Edited by kuls11 - 14 years ago

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kuls11
preety neat...sweet sensible episode...but if this would be screenplay how...will we hate GEET...
Ths should be written ...its so simple...if u can write...why not...writers...
You wre superab MERI VICE...very NICE...rarely...happen U are nice...😉

Why you wanna hate Geet Kuljeetey?

Anyways isn't she rocked with her screenplay?

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
thank u di, tanu, anshu, and jyoti for the lovely comments...i really put a lot thought about each character when i wrote this...

i feel they rushed Dev into wanting to confess his feelings after NT left...he didn't even realize that because of him Nando was kidnapped...was in danger...he should have hated himself for that...and it should have made him more guiltier for his past sins...but instead the moment NT walked out...it was as if she never even entered the household...it doesn't make sense to not have dev sitting and thinking about his life...

about maan, at least there should something his unconcious mind trying to make him remember geet...and so when i had him washing his face with cold water...i thought why not have him see a little flashback of an image of someone taking a girl out of the water...

which made him curious as to how he met Geet...

Geet can be bubbly, still can do comedy...BUT please it should not be stupid comedy...immature comedy...isn't there any way for this screenplay to reach those losers?

I think Shivu it make sense that he hadn't affected of NT leave, cause no matter he was so annoyed and irritated of her presence, and he wasn't at all in love of her that he would thought about her..Even when she was there, it wasn't matter for him, so why would they would showed that after her leave he was thinking about his life...Anyways before he would think about anything, Geet changed his mind na, so anyways chaddo, but seriously loved your flashback idea, and as water bind them always so it's really good idea that while washing face he got flashback of water scene...I think they should have to flashback related to fire, water, or any other natural things...Let see anyways, i am waiting for your next episode, but ya pleaje (daya bhabi style) don't forget to write lil drama between, and don't forget other Characters as well...

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Aray bahuria...it wasn't NT leaving why Dev should be affected...chalo chaddo...i will not spoil the fun for u...u will see what i meant with the next part!

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BreezillusionS

@BreezillusionS

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@mysterygurl1427

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Oh My God brilliant,😲 Wow girl we have the same deep thoughts,I love the precap, amazing imagery and i almost felt like it was real. I hope cvs read this, you could post this part at LV dude's thread na. I thought that i was the only person who had thoughts like this.😳 I always have these thoughts of what would happen if Maan first memory flashback would be on Geet and Dev.? Or my worst nightmare, on Sameera ,she turned out to be his ex wife but he does nt aware of the absolute truth of their separation. He is only remembering their togetherness moments that lead to destruction of MaanGeet relationship or maybe vice versa.

I saw things are just getting more interesting direction in every episode with lots of open possibilities related to their relationship. All these above points you have pointed out, itself helps the story to move forward because after watching each episodes there are several questions which will be raised here based on several concerns such as,

Will misunderstanding occur again , or this time they effortlessly merge with opening their heart, trying to figure out of this difficult phase with their strength of belief in each other?

Will he be able to trust on the same level,will he manages to push all doubts out of his mind, placing his trust in Geet on the same level again or is Geet growing tendency of running away from home again?

Is Dev going to remain wholly silent this time or Sameera and Vicky to take advantage of this delicate situation ?

So many questions raised in one episode and nobody knows what will happen next.The unpredictable nature of the story is back, how and when will he get his memory back or how will this lead to justice track does not bother me really, i leave it to the CVs proper justification and proceed the story forward.I genuinely thought that I was the only person who had symptoms like this. But after I read this post and the discussions, I have discovered a truly remarkable truth that I am not the only one🤣

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Awww, thanks Meher for a nice long comment...

i am confused yaar...are u justifying my screenplay or the screenplay of the episode today?😆

I felt when i watched the episode that this was not even my GHSP that i used to watch😕...it was a whole other show

i didn't recognize Geet today...was she even geet??😆🤓 Yaar Meher...i don't even mind watching the Dev and Nandani track, they just should not mess with the character of Geet...the character that gives many women inspiration😳...as long as her character and maan's character is NOT butchered...i don't mind dev and nandani😊

GHSP is a show in which i saw potential...a show that i felt can match up to an Modern Day American show...i saw a lot of freshness in the story, the concept and i feel there is A LOT MORE potential left, if the team thinks outside the box...no doubt they can...they have for 2 weeks straight including the Maha episode...but these 2 days...i have no idea what happened.😊

anywayz, nice thoughts u brought forward...but vicky and sameera...is a whole other story😆😆

LV dude...don't know what he considers me as...a fan or friend...i consider him to be a friend...and shall always...BUT that post of his that he takes the time to make is a spam post...good ideas...suggestions all get buried beneath the spammers...i shall pm him this, if he wants to read and if has time he shall come and read😛

but thank you soo much for ur time...reading my post and for ur comment...it was nice to read😳

Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 14 years ago

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Shivi, I do wish you had written last night's script but why did you make the servant pick up all the files? Would have preferred if Geet had put the file given to her in safe keeping and not left it on the table.

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Opti
Shivi, I do wish you had written last night's script but why did you make the servant pick up all the files? Would have preferred if Geet had put the file given to her in safe keeping and not left it on the table.

Opti when i was writing the screenplay...i was actually thinkin of another part as well...so i left it that way...u will see why i did that😃 promise...

thanks for the compliment...it means a lot especially for someone whom is a wonderful writer like you😳

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
Opti when i was writing the screenplay...i was actually thinkin of another part as well...so i left it that way...u will see why i did that😃 promise...

thanks for the compliment...it means a lot especially for someone whom is a wonderful writer like you😳

I guessed that you wanted Maan to first lose his cool when he finds the file is missing and then control his anger to show that he does care for Geet but still I dont want an important file to go missing especially when Geet is looking after it. We can always have some other scene to show Maan's transformation but not something connected to his work.

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Opti

I guessed that you wanted Maan to first lose his cool when he finds the file is missing and then control his anger to show that he does care for Geet but still I dont want an important file to go missing especially when Geet is looking after it. We can always have some other scene to show Maan's transformation but not something connected to his work.

nope not exactly...that either😆

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