Tuje yaad n meri aayi. (maaneet) pt 6

BACKGROUND:-

MAAN SING KHURANA DHILI KE BADE BUSINESSMAN HAI UNKI COMPANY KHURANA CONSTRUCTION INTERNATIONAL CONSTRUCTION COMPANY HAI. GEET CHOTE SAHER KI SIDHI LADKI JO ANATHASHRAN ME BADI HEYI HAI OR DHILI ME KHURANA CONSTRUCTION ME MAAN KI SECRETARY HAI .GEET KE EK BHAI OR EK BAHEN HAI JO SAGE NAHI HAI WO BHI USHI KI TARH ANATHASHRAN ME BADI HUYE HAI.PER YE TINO EK DUSRE SE BHOT PYAAR KARTE HAI.GEET DONO SE BADI HAI. EK SATH KAAM KARTE MAAN OR GEET KO DHERE DHERE PYAAR HOTA HAI OR FHIR SHADI. GEET OR MAAN EK SADHISHDA KUSHAL JODI HAI MR/ MRS KHURANA. SHADI KO EK SAAL HO GAYE HAI. DONO EK DUSRE SE BAHOT PYAAR KARTE HAI.GEET MAA BANNE WALI HAI. DONO KO APNE BACHEKA INTAJAR HAI. GEET KI SHADI KE PHELE HI LUCKY NE APNI PADHYI PURI KAR KHURANA CONSTRUCTION MAIN AS ARCHITECT JOIN KIYA OR BAAD MAIN NANDIDNI NE BHI KHURANA CONSTRUCTION KE ACCOUNT DIPARTMENT MAIN JOIN HUI. DO BHAI BAHEN NE APNI MENAT SE PAISE JAMA KAR EK CHOTA SA GHAR BHI LE LIYA JHA WO ABHI RHETE HAI.

CHARACTER SKETCH

MR/MRS KHURANA

MAAN KI DADI

MAAN KA BHAI DEV

MAAN KI BAHEN KASHISH

GEET KA BHAI LUCKY

GEET KI BAHEN NADINI

PART 1

Maan ko office ke kaam se Gajiyabad jana pada.waha jane ke baad maan ne geet phone nahi kiya is liye geet ko maan ki chinta ho ne lagi or geet ne maan ko phone kiya. Par maan geet ka phone nahi utharahethe or dusri taraf maan apne office ke logo ke saat manegar or majdur ke jagade ko sulja rahe or waha achanac se mahol baatchit se ladai jagade pe phoch gaya.ushi waqt maan ke moblie ki ring baaji maan ne phone utha ya par kuch bol ne se pahele adi ne 'maan sir' chilya maan ne phone rakh diya or wapas office ki taraf chale gaye.per dusri taraf geet thi. Geet ne logo ki chilane ki awaj or adi ka maan sir chilana or maan ka javab nahi dene ki wajha se gabra gyai.

Geet: dadi ma... dadi ma... maan... maan... dadi ma

chilte hue chidiyo se jadi ne che aarhi thi tabhi geet ka pair fisalta hai or wo chidiyo se niche girti haior sar per chot lagti hai.or behos ho jati hai.

Ghar ke sabhi log bahar ate hai or geet ko jameen per behos dekh te hai.

Dadi : geet beta uto kya hua

Dev: babhi kya hua

Kashish: babhi.

Sab geet ke pass phoch te hai or geet ke sar se khoon nikal te dekhte hai.

Dadi: dev beta jaldi se abulance ko bulo hame geet ko hospital le jana hoga.

Dev: ji dadi.

Hospital

Dadi: doctor pls dekhi ye na hamari bachi ko kya ho gya.

Doctor: aap bahar rukiye pls.

Kashish: dadi babhi ko kuch nahi hoga na.

Dadi: ha beta hamari geet ko kuch nahi hoga.

Dadi: dev aap jaldi se maan ko phone kijiye.

Dev: ji dadi.

Dev celling maan

Maan: ha dev bolo.

Dev: bro vo babhi...

Maan: kya hua geet bato dev kya hu hai.

Dev: bro vo babhi sidhi yo se gir gyi.

Maan: kya.

Dev: ha bro hum unhe hospital leke aye hai.

PART 2

Maan: adi tum yha dokho muje abhi jana hoga.

Maan apni jeep lekar nikalta hai. Raste me use geet sath bitye hue sare lamhe ek ke baad ek yaad aate hai.

Hospital

Lucky: dadi geet didi keshi hai.

Dadi: lucky, Nadini aap yha kise.

Nadini: wo dadi hum didi se milane ghar gye to nakul ne batya kya hua to hum shidhe yahi agye.

Kashish: babhi oprecation theatar me hai.

Lucky: Doctor ne kya kha.

Dev: abhi tak doctor ne kuch nahi kha.

Nadini: jijaji kha hai.

Dev: wo bro kishi kaam se bhaar gye the maine unhe phone kar diya hai. Wo aate hi hoge.

Maan lobby me phoche or doctor oprecation theatar se bhar aaya sab log doctor ki taaf gye.

Dadi:doctor aab hamari geet keshi hai.

Doctor: i am sorry hum unke bache ko nahi bach paye.

All are shocked.

Maan: Doctor geet.

Every one tern n see maan's face. Maan come near the doctor.

Maan: kya geet ko pata hai.

Doctor: nahi wo abhi bhi puri tareh out of denger nahi hai. Uhka kafi khuoon bahe gya tha. Hume unhe 24 houre under objertion rakhna hoge.

Maan: kya hum use mil sakte hai.

Doctor: pls mr khurana abhi hum kishi ko nahi milane de sakte.

Maan: pls doctor.

Doctor: ok per sirf aap ek hi mr khurana.

Maan: thanks doctor.

Doctor: ha per hum unhe ICU room me leke jane ke baad.

Maan: dadi ye sab kya hogya (sitting on chair holding dadi crying like baby)

Dadi: maan apne aap ko sambhaliye geet ke bare me sochiye. Uske liye aap ko himat rakh ni hogi.

Maan: per dadi maa hamre saat hi ku bolo dadi ma.

Dadi: sayad beta ye kushi hamare naseeb me nahi thi. Babaji pe barosha rakho sab thik ho jayega.

Maan: aap thik kaheti hai dadi maa hame ab geet ke bare me shoch na chiye use to patabhi nahi ki kya hua hai. Use kashe baatyege.

Dadi: wo sab aap ko hi karna hai maan per phele aap ab geet ke pass jayiye.

Maan: thik hai dadi maa me geet ke pass jata hu aap sab ghar jayiye wishe bhi doctor ne milne se mana kiya hai.

Kashish: per bhai hum bahar se to dekh sakte hai na.

All are agree wtih kashish wish.

Maan enter in room others are seeing geet in glass windo.

Maan seat near bad on table holding geet's hand.

Maan: pls geet ankhe kolo dehkho tumara maan aaya hai. Geet aise mat karo warna tumhara maan ji nahi payege.

After some time

Sister: mr khurana ab apko jana hoga.

Maan: ok sister.

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Part 3

NEXT DAY MORNING

Maan enter in geet's room and sitting near the bad on table hollding geet's hand.

Maan : geet tume u chup chup achi nahi lagti. Tumari wo baate jo pura din khatam hone per bhi khatam nahi hoti thi unki aadat hogyi hai geet muje pls geet ankhe kholo mujse baat karo.

Doctor : hello Mr. khurana.

Maan : hello doctor

Doctor : well Mr. khurana ek good news ab Mrs. khurana khatare se bahar hai. Sayad ab jaldi hose bhi ajye.

Maan : such doctor.

Doctor : ha Mr. khurana per abhi bhi hume puri tarh tasli ke liye inke hosme ana jauri hai.

Maan : koi chinta wali baat to nahi hai na doctor.

Doctor : nahi Mr. khurana bas Mrs. khurana ke MRI or baki report abhi thodi der me aajyege. Bus thodi der bad aap mujse mere cabin me miliye report ke bare me baat kar lege.

Maan : thik hay doctor main thodi der me aata hu aap ke pass.

Doctor : bye theway Mr. khurana ye Mrs. khurana ka kuch hai jo me aap ko dena bhool gaya tha.

Maan : kya doctor.

Doctor : ye lijiye.

Doctor ne apne coat ke pocket se ek chota sa pouch nikal ke maan ko diya or chale gaye.

Maan ne wo pouch khola jisme geet ka magalsutr,payal the. In chijo ko dekh kar Maan ko apna shadi ka din yaad aagya.

Maan : ye payal geet maine tumhe hamare hamari SR ko phenayi thi. or ye magalsutr tum kabhi bhi apne gale se nahi utarti thi. Tum kheti thi ki ye suhaganki nisani hai jise maine tume phenya hai. Tume ise nikalna bilkul pasand nahi tha. or uthane per tum ne ise aapne gale main nahi dekha to bhot naraj hogi tum is liye main tumare gale main abhi hi phena deta hu.

Maan jab geet ko magalsutr phenane jata hai tabhi lucky or nandini andar aate hai.

Lucky : jijaji doctor ne aap ko bulya hai.

Maan : thik hai tum log geet ke pass bito.

Nandini : thik hai jijaji.

Maan : dadi, dev or kashish kaha hai.

Lucky : wo log bhi arhehai.

Maan magalsutr apne pocket main rakh deta hai or doctor se mile chale jata hai.

Nandini or lucky dono geet ke pass akar bithte hai. Nadini geet ka hath pakadti hai. Thodi der me geet ki hato ki ugaliya dhire dhire hilane lagti hai.

Nandini : lucky virji didi ko hose arha hai. Doctor ko buliye.

Lucky : ha ha main abhi bulata hu.

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