Self-Dialogue- MAan-12th Aug,2011

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey u guys!!

I thought I'd write about the cool new track..but aaj kismat mein nahi..gotta rush..so here's a short brain-heart instead!

Maan(heart) -lalalalalala...main toh hoon pagal..nanananananananana..yeh kahun har...

Maan(brain)- if u don't shut up.I'm going to seriously kill you.

Maan(heart)- as if u let me have fun..at least let me sing?

Maan(brain)- i have specific times for everything..including singing.it's over now. no singing for the rest of the day

Geet and maan fall on the bed

Maan(brain)- phir se..now she'll look at me with that expression that always makes me uneasy..

Maan(heart)- have you thought about it brainy?

Maan(brain)- main faaltu ki baatein nahi sochta

Maan(heart)- yeah yeah..hmph

MAan(brain)- hearty..tell me, how can she slip on a flat surface?

Maan(heart)- u flatter yourself sir! You are a bit curvy still u know..haven't been doing what u should be..naughty!😆

MAan(brain)- what is she doing in my room?

Maan(heart)- playing hide and seek. Ask her silly

She bent down and maan sees the marriage pic

Maan(brain)- yeh phir se. why??
MAan(heart)- oh dear... i feel..

Maan(brain)- ENough HEARTY! that's it. NOT one word..

Maan(brain)- she tells ME that I'm WRONG? does she think I'm dumb?

Maan(heart)- she's very intelligent if she does. But hear her out..see she says she doesn't doubt u

Maan(brain)- I'm going

MAan(heart)- but..

Maan(brian)- NO

LAter, sneezing

Maan(brain)- oh god..I feel sick.. All that sneezing..nosey is just not stopping

Maan(heart)- 😆 oh i love seeing u in pain sometimes!
it's so much fun

Maan(brain)- have i told u again how much i hate you?

Maan(heart)- geet's here.

And i LOVE geet for this at least
Maan(brain)- OWW..
And when he starts to get up

Maan(brain)- OWW again
What a strong head she has

Maan(heart)- 😆 *enjoying eating popcorn and watching brainy getting troubled*
Maan(brain)- she doesn't know me...

And then geet starts listing all that she knows

Maan(heart)- abbeey...isse toh bohot pata hai boss!

Maan(brain)- uh..haan..thik thik..so now Geet, what do u want?

Maan(heart)- jaitun ka tel😲😆😆

Maan(brain)- Ha rum will shut her up! I mean, shut the sneezing up so I can show her i don't need her help

Maan(heart)- AAND..here he goes again😆

Maan(brain)- i wonder how quickly i finished the rum...i went and got more and aah..took a sip
...i..ii...

Maan sleeps

and geet comes and massages

Maan(soul)- when everything is asleep..hearty and i are alive..to your touch Geet..to you..
we remember u..though he may have forgotten..we love u..

As geet gets his hand close to her..and touches her cheek with it and places it back..

Maan(hearT) -don't leave geet...

Maan(soul)- won't let go..I have more access when brain sleeps..don't leave me geet..

And that's it..gotta rush!

Love to all

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t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u know what
i was just about to write you to continue 'self-dialogue' during this ML track,
if possible do it regularly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is so awesome
plz write regularly
I loved brainy n heartys little nok jhok
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazz07_dh

It is so awesome
plz write regularly
I loved brainy n heartys little nok jhok



Thanks loads!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

u know what

i was just about to write you to continue 'self-dialogue' during this ML track,


if possible do it regularly



Aww thx!! 😃
Im glad u liked it 😃
Love

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