OS-The girl in the neighborhood..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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~~SYNOPSIS~~



Sometimes little things may change your life.. An innocent act may make you smile..
A small incident can change your perspective and an innocent gesture can make you fall in love..
This OS has mainly love of a sister, determination of a girl and a cute crush. This is a random OS. And It is a light hearted one..
And Maan is a teenager here..
So if you want to proceed,
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SCROLL DOWN!!

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Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow i loved it !!!!awsome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aw.. that was such a sweet OS!!🤗... loved the sweetheart, practicing with all her concentration, again and again and again..😎... and how simply watching her do that gave him a new perspective..

Reminded me of a story I had read as a kid, I think it was bout some king who after facing defeat hides in a cave and draws inspiration from a spider which just keeps making its web from the beginning no matter how many times it fails.

LOved how simply hes drawn into watching her and then learning from her. How sweetly his opinion changes.. about the girl, about girls, about sisters and pesky brothers😆... The way he absently starts clapping and celebrating her little victory...

enjoyed reading this one a lot.😳
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww..my sweetie pie is on a roll and she is giving sweet ,cute updates just like her .The theme was simple yet refreshing !! Loved the brother - sister bonding..as I mentioned before,very very cute...
Love you darling😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome os plz continue it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww
loved it such a sweet OS
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a beautiful bond nicely portrayed
she changed him without saying a word
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simply wow,loved it . it is so refreshing and subtle emotions to feel .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow tht was awesomee.. I loved itt 😛 can u plzz continue it 😃 wud luv to c their chemistry as young adults..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chooo cute...
i loved it...
simple yet sweet, well wonderfully penned down...😛😳
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