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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: abinash079
dear give the last part of ur OS plz 😭😭 today only

ok sweety.😊...am giving it...u mean the "ajjeb dastaan h yeh" rite?

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: soumimaaneetsou

ok sweety.😊...am giving it...u mean the "ajjeb dastaan h yeh" rite?

yes

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

congrats !!!!!!!! 4 yet another ss ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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9staroneserials

@9staroneserials

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Good one...continue...curious 2 know how this shapes up...by d way wen r u updating ajnabee mujhko...SS...??? plz update that too...😳😳😳

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Its an interesting story hope to see maan saves geet from dev.

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hey congrats on new ss...

thought geet is wife of maan's but not...that was a shocker...

so maan ki intro...woh kaisa hain...typicla like dev or loving character hoga...

pl cont soon

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known

@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

why why yu toturing geet

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anshimanshi

@anshimanshi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

nice concept... till Geet didn;t say "dev ji" I thought Geet's husband is Maan but am actually happy that her cruel husband is Dev not Maan and Maan will protect her...YAY

.please add me yto your PM list.

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Nice concept!

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Part~2

in the evening...

geet was in the kichen...preparing food for the guest...dev's big brother...she thought...

'yeh devji k bhai to hamare shadi me bhi nahi aye the...me unhe pehchanungi kaise?...babaji...please kuch galti mat karwana mujse aj...warna...'(she remembered last night...dev was very rough with her...he gave a a lot of pain yesterday...she is still sore...she had to put oinments on the marks to cover them...her only fault was...she was about to say her mammiji that dev had gone for a party not office...but she hadnt done it intentionally...it just slipped from her mouth...but she had to face the aftermath of it...)

she comes out of her thought and quickly wipes away her tears...'geet...rona bandh kar...or jaldise sara kaam khatam karle...or aaj to ye nakul bhi chutti par ha...muje akele hi yeh sab samhalna pdega...'

suddenly the door bell rang...geet thought it must be devji's brother...she ran toward the door...but as soon as she opens it...the light went off...

she couldnt see anything...just feel the presence of a person outside...

the person standing outside...swichies the light of his mobile phone...he saw a girl...may be of 18-19 years old...lokking at her...trying to figure him out...

'excuse me...who are you?...'

geet fumbles initialy...didnt know what to say...

'ji aap...aap devji ke bare bhai hai na?...'

'yes...am maan...maan singh khurana...but sorry...mene tumhe pehchana nahi...'he said...

'ji...mein geet...devji ki patni...'she said...'aap please andar ayiye na...'

'yah...oh so u r his wife...nice to mieet you..geet...'he said with a smile in his face...

geet smiles him back...

the lights were still off...geet brought a candle and lightened it...and placed it on centre table...

she was feeling a bit uncomrtable in front of the stranger...she didnt understand what to do...what to say...

'ji...suniye...aao fresh ho jaiye...mein aapke lie kuch khane ke lie lati hu...'she said finally...

'its ok...am not hungry...can u please give a cup of black coffe?...'he said...

'ji..mein abhi lati hu'...she ran toward the kichen...

after some time...geet comes back with the cofee and some snacks...but she didnt find him on the drawing room...she decides to go to his room and call him...she kept the cofee on the dining table...

she was on her way...and suddenly there was a thunder storm...she becomes scared and the candle she was holding also felt from her hand...it was all dark...she starts to run without knowing any direction...as she was very much scared of darkness and thinderstorm...

suddenly she bumped into someone and was about to fall...when a strong pair of hand holds her...

she closes her eyes tightly...

'geet...are you alright...?...'

hi guys...so...it was part 1...

how was it???😳

hope u will like it...i knw it ws small one..😭

will give u a longer one nxt time...promise..😭

pls leave ur cments...

love u all...

~~~soumi~~~

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