Ajnabee mujko itna bataan...MG ss.prt 2...pg 4..

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a dark stormy rainy night...


a girl of about 20 yers old...running through the muddy road...

she is running...as fast as he can...and very often watching behind to notice if they are still visible...


she is gasping...her legs are no more helping her...



it seems she will collapse in any moment...


the salwar kamiz she is wearing is soaking wet...


she is shivering from the cold...


but still she doesnt looses her hope...she is running through the high way in the time of almost mid night for a single ray of hope...for help...


suddenly...she notices...a car is coming...

at first she shrinks in fear thinking that they have found her finaly...

but then she notices that the car is different one...




she thought this is the only hope...for which she was running...the person in the car may help her...may save her...




she waves her hand frnatically to attratct the attention of the person driving the car...




but...all her hopes goes in vein when she founds that the car doesnt stops and crosses her...


but...she was not ready to loose the last chance in any condition...


she starts to run behind the car and starts to shout...


'gaari rokiye...please gaari rokiye...meri madat kijiye...please...mat jaiye...please ruk jaiye...gaari rok dijiye...'




a person of almost his late twenties was driving hte car...

he notices a girl is waving her hands...indicating to stop the car...but he decides to ignore it...as it is midnight and he doesnt want to give lift toa unknown girl at this time of night ib his car...



but he cant ignore her any more when he founds through the rearview mirror that the girl is running behind his car...and shouting something...


his mind told him to stop the car...and he press the break...





part 1~page 1


part 2~page 4


hii...all my buddies...😊

here goes my new ss...

i knw i knw u will say that i havnt yet updated my other work and starting a new one...

but what to do if ides are coming in my mind and my hands are demanding me to type them...😭

😆😆jokes apart...

hope u will like this part...


it is a small ss...

please leave ur views...


love u all...


~~~soumi~~~
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U strted so many SS
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