Maaneet OS-Will you be mine? HAPPY BIRTHDAY RUCHI

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Posted: 14 years ago
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H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y R U C H I

Maaneet OS~ Will you be mine?❤️

DEDICATED TO RUCHI <3

She was biding bye to her mom as she was set to go to Delhi. Excel college, the very well-known college in India. Her dad always wanted her to go and study there. Hailing from Hosiarpur, She was very scared to go to a new place where the people are so different and she knew no one there. But it was her father's wish and she had to complete it. Picking up her bag, she bid bye to her mom and went to set up her journey for Delhi. But did she knew that her life would take a sudden turn when she met him..Maan! Maan Singh khurana!

Geet stayed in the Girls hostel of Excel College. There she met her roommate, Meera Singhania. Meera was a really nice, cute and caring girl. They instantly became good friends because of their similar nature. It was night time, Geet and Meera both went to bed. Geet was quite nervous as tomorrow it will be her first day in the college. Geet silently prayed "Hey Babaji..Please I hope ke main papa ki wish aache se puri kar saku..Please mera saath dena." and she dozed off to sleep.

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Geet entered the college with Meera. Finally she was here, her dad would be surely very proud of her. It was not very easy to get in Excel College.

Meera: Geet ..Ohh No I forgot my chemistry book at hostel..Ohh god agar woh Mr. shankhar kop pata lag gaya toh mera band baja denge and i have a test too so I have to study tum aage jao..I will be back in a while okay.

Geet: But Meera...

Before Geet could continue meera ran off to get her book. Geet was walking along the corridors of the college looking at it carefully.

Now Geet was in the basketball court before she could walk further,,*BANG* a ball hit her head. She turned around to see the person...and saw a boy dressed in a vest and trousers and was sweating as he was playing basketball. He was Maan..Maan singh khurana, the hunk of the college.

Maan: Hm I am sorry..could you pass me the ball please?

Geet: It's okay..Here you go.

Geet passed him the ball and left from there.

She felt a different feeling as soon as she saw him. He was so handsome; his hazel eyes were so captivating, his M-shaped lips, and his well-toned body. OMG what was she thinking?

Geet came out of her thoughts and went in search of the Library.

On the Other side, it was quite a similar story. Maan was blown out when he saw her. He had never seen anyone so beautiful as her. She was dressed in a baby blue anarkali with her straight hair open, her hazel eyes and her glossed lips. She was like an angel from heaven.

After their first meeting, Geet and Maan both were in same class. Well most of them. They usually kept on stealing glances of each other. There was some kind of feeling rushing through their body.

Mrs Divya: Okay guys, We'll be doing a project.. So you guys can select your own partner but ya it has to be a boy-girl group..

The class was dismissed and Geet was pretty nervous thinking who will be her partner and that too a boy?

She was lost in her thoughts and was heading towards the library when she heard someone calling her.

She turned around and saw it was Maan. Maan came to her and said.

"Hey, will you be my partner for the economics project?" he said. Geet was in a state of shock. But She couldn't refuse it, She had no other options. Ummm' Okay!" She replied still in a daze. They completed the project in a week's time and presented it with a bang! They were appreciated for it a lot.

As the time grew, her feelings for maan grew deeper and deeper. She didn't know what it was. On the Other hand, it was the same with Maan. Maan who was the hunk of the college, a total flirt was serious about a girl this time. She had just captured herself in his heart. Maan and Geet use to only talk to each other a little during their class. It was not much of talking it was just when they saw each other they got lost in that moment.

Valentine's Day was coming. Like every year, Excel College held a grand Valentine's Day party hosted by the students. The boys asked the girl to be their date and sometimes the girls did too. Maan rejected every girl's proposal this time. Being the Hot hunk of the college, every girl drooled over him. But, he had fallen in love with her. Yes.. He had realized that he was in love with Geet, her simplicity, her caring nature, her beauty. And he was set up to confess his love for her in this party.

The dress code for Boys was Black and Girls was red. Geet did not want to go to the party but Meera had forced her to come.

Maan,dressed in black Armani suit, was chatting with his Friends but he was kind of impatient to see Geet.He knew she was coming..his heart told so. Turning around he saw the most beautiful sight. Geet was in a red stunning dress with curly hair.

He was surely gonna go mad this evening. How can someone be so gorgeous? He thought.

Geet was in a corner having a soft drink as Meera was dancing with Yash, her boyfriend. Maan saw her in the corner and excused him from his Friends and came to her. Geet saw Maan coming towards her and a blush came to her face.

Maan: Hey Geet!

Geet: Hi..replied shyly..

Maan: umm would you like to have a dance with me? asked maan as he drew impatient.

Geet was blushing..

Geet: Umm yaa sure..

Maan brought geet to the dance floor and kept his hand on her waist and pulled her closer to himself. Geet heart skipped a beat. Her hand moved to his neck encircling them. They were just lost in the moment.

Maan: Geet you look beautiful..said maan with full of passion.

Geet heart again skipped a beat.

Geet: Tha..Thank you..Geet stammered.

Maan: Geet I want to tell you something.. maan said looking at her.

Geet: Yaa Maan...say?

Maan went down to his knees. Geet was shocked and she was blushing. She did not know what was happening.

Maan: Geet, since the day I met you I have always had this feeling rushing through my body. Whenever I see you, I get lost in you. You have captured my heart Geet. I love you! I really love you! Will you be mine forever? please.. He said softly but with lots of passion

A tear escaped from Geet's eyes. She never thought this will happen to her. Yes, she loved Maan but she never thought that maan had the same feeling for her and he will be confessing his love to her like this.

Geet was silent..Maan asked again..Geet will you?

"Yes" She said and Maan's happiness was no bound. He got up and brought her in a passionate hug. There was a big sound echoed in the hall. Everyone was clapping for them..some girls were jealous because the hunk guy of the college was booked.

They got out of the hug and Geet was blushing.

Maan: You look more beautiful while blushing.

Geet shyly said Maan and hid herself in his arms again.

She looked up to him and whispered "I love you". He smiled looking at her and pulled her closer by her waist and replied "I love you too".

After 7 years

"Mamaaa" shouted a 4 years old girl.

Maan and Geet came from thier bedroom all dressed up and ready to go. They were going to their dear friend's Birthday Party. They were married from 5 years now and they and a cute little daughter Muskaan.

Muskaan : Mama papa aap log kitne der karte ho..agar RUCHI ko pata chalega na toh aap logo se katti ho jayengi. Chaliye chaliye lets go to the party ..Yayy shouted muskaan.

They reached the Venue and saw Ruchi standing there eating a Muffin..

As they saw her, they shouted "HAPPY BIRTHDAY RUCHII."



Dedicated to my Dulhe..RUCHII!
Happy Birthdayy Lovee,
Muah Love you
Hope you like it<3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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LMFAOOO !
It was like so UNEXPECTED that uss kamine ka naam last pe aayega 😆
He is just born & tab bhi muffin kha raha hain kamina & bhukkhad kahin ka 😆

BUT coming to OS . Seriously I had this BIG smile in my face while reading this . LOVED It .
& I m sure uss lafange ko bhi pasand aaya hoga .
Geet season 2 must be based on this story that would be soo cool .
Haiii down on his knees & proposed ? Iss jamana mei is that possible 😍
Overall the BLUSHING & the BEST OS 😳 Love it saale .. 🤗

& Now Last but not the least .

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NALAYAK / LAFANGE / KAMINE / Mera jamai / Muffin / Ruchi / My Love 🤗
Iss gali ke piche bahoot pyaar bhara hua hain yaad rakhna nalayak 😳
I hope you have a wonderful day .
& May one day you get someone like Maan 😉 & For god sake mera Maan pe apni buri nazar matt dalna aab se .
Aur meri beti ko bhi khush rakhna 😆
Edited by -MaanEetLover- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res😉
OHH-EMM-GEEE
i am freaking SPEECHLESS!!😲😳😭😉😆
from the title to the writing to the proposal to the end...everything spelled BRILLIANT!!!!
awww firstly, i am sooo touched dulhaan
this is the most beautiful present everrr...ahhh today is such an awesome today...from beautiful threads to today's HAWT song seq to ur brilliant OS...i am in aweee😳😍
awww it was shoo cutee...from the beginning to end and u know its just the kinda stories i loveee...the simple and sweet ones...no over the masala types😆
awww from partners to lovers...maan was such a sweetheart here and geet the sharmili types...once again, i know i might be saying this a millionth time but awww!!
and valentine's day...hayee rabba, can it get any more romantic?☺️
and OHH-EMM-GEEE the end...ahhh u know how much i lovee kids so when i saw muskaan i already started jumping but omggg when i saw my name...i can't even express what i felt dulhaan...totally blew me away😳😳
i see i was as usual eating a muffin🤣
but the bestest part was them wishing me...awww maaneet and their kid wished me...now can anyone say that except me?😆
awww firstly, thank you sooo much for taking the extra time, pain and effort to dedicate this to me...on top of the simply amazing thread, u did this...i am really speechless my chandni...i don't even deserve such a beautiful heavenly dedication but since free main mil rahi hain, le leti hoon🤣
awww i am sooo touched
and once again, you have proved ur such a brilliant writer!!...u always say ur not but i think others will strongly disagree and so do I...i am not being biased when i say this okay?...but this was the cutest OS i have ever read...sachi...meri kasam😳
thank you sooo much for making everything filmy and just how i like it...u know my taste so well jaan and uff i will never get tired of saying this, i lovee youu sooo much🤗
Edited by macho_muffin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RESERVING MY 1ST .. PLACE
MUHAHAHAHHA !


ARGHHH can't believe u beat me😡 sharam nahin aati chudail?...mera budday hain kamini🤣
Edited by macho_muffin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi there ...superb OS. Happy Bday Ruchi 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: macho_muffin

RESERVING MY 1ST .. PLACE

MUHAHAHAHHA !


ARGHHH can't believe u beat me😡 sharam nahin aati chudail?...mera budday hain kamini🤣

Tu nalayak paida hote hi muffin khane lag gaya aur meri beti ke mehenat pe itna late comment karega toh mei maa toh apni beti ke OS pe peheli hi comment karungi na .
Tu kamina apna muh samhal barna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga .. MUAHAHAHAH 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww beautiful OS
Luvd it x
The proposal was so sweet
Happy birthday Ruchi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi there ...superb OS. Happy Bday Ruchi 😊

awww thank you!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Awww beautiful OS
Luvd it x
The proposal was so sweet
Happy birthday Ruchi...

thank you soo much!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MaanEetLover-

Tu nalayak paida hote hi muffin khane lag gaya aur meri beti ke mehenat pe itna late comment karega toh mei maa toh apni beti ke OS pe peheli hi comment karungi na .
Tu kamina apna muh samhal barna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga .. MUAHAHAHAH 🤣

kamini itni achi wish deti hain aur phir apni aukad pe aajati hainROFL
oyee toh kya bhooka mar jaao?...waise bhi tera kanjoos khandaan kuch khaane ko kaha deta hain...sharam nahin aayi ek fiance se uss ka haq chinte hue aur mera spot chori karte hueAngry
mera toh muh kya, laat bhi sambhal jaaye bas tu mere paas aajaROFL
awww thank you sooo much jaan, again...i know, galiyon ke peeche dher saare pyar hainROFL...and oyee main aur maan ka peecha chod doon?...main maan ko bhool nahin sakta aur woh mujhe bhool jaaye yeh main hone nahin doongaROFL
love you jaan🤗

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