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Guys i hve just tried a story of short short seq...so let me first start with FIRST MOMENT OF OUR MANNET...

B4 i jump into the scene let me just gie some intro abt characters...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:he a famous fashion designer in delhi...though he is in designing field he is not so friendly, girls loves him...longing for his single glance...but they dare go near him-simply he is the sweet DUSHT DHANAV for girls...yet he is so nice person from heart...all these rudeness is just to bulid a wall around him..

Nw will see the nly person who can break theswalls of MSK...its none other than

GEET HANDA: she is research student...but not studious...she is differernt from all others...exact opposute to maan...she so frndly...according to her your life will be beautiful only when u hve so much of frnds...her parents are in HP...she is here doing her research work in delhi univ...she is so beautiful..but she always doesnt care about her looks...she can be modern and desi...she wnt bother much..whatever others think she will wear which is comfortable to her..thats geet...the gals who makes her own world with lots of love...

ADI: maan's assistant...a frndly person...

SASHA: MSK's manager...

ANNIE: maan's lovely sister..

PARI: geets frnd...cute gal...always in dreams...

K GUYS ENOUGH OF INTRO..NW WILL SEE THE FIRST MOMENT...

Geet was getting ready, shes already late for her new job, she is screaming at pari to wake up...

Geet:pari meri jann, wake up..plz help me gt things arranged ,already iam damn late...

Pari:harre yaar..y r u shouting..u broke ma dreams in mid..ah..u woke me up exactly wen prince charming was proposing to me..

Geet: haan haan ..ask ur prince charming to cme tmrw..nw get up or i will gt fired at first day of job itself..

Pari:hey i almost forget to tell..i heard ur new boss is so hottt...i wish i gt a job tere like u..

Geet:hot or cold..i need this job for ma packet money...i care damn abt ma boss...geet handa wnt fall head over heels for anybody... u knw y???

Pari:haan haan i knw..u luv ur parents..blah blah..u cnt cheat them by choosing a guy for u...god hw can u b like tis...meri maa...u r nt in 19s u r in 2011 ...grow up..

Geet:i dnt hve time to argue with u...bye iam leaving...plz take care of ma things in lab will meet u tere in noon...bye..

Pari:geet wait u r wearing a salwar to join in MSK fashion industry(geet started her scooty and she was out of the gate)...haare yaar i hope they let her in...ah...waise be who can stop miss geet handa...

Maan: i can..(he was speaking with adi in office...)wat do u think adi..cant we handle this show by this weekend...i knw we hve so much of work...bt still we r going to do this..it will b nice if we organise a cool show cum a surprise party for savitri ji(maan ideal guru in fashion world)...on her 60th bday..

Adi:yes sir it will be really nice.

Sasha: bt MK we already hve a tight schedule...we cant arrange a show that too with new designs...we can organise a party alone...

Mann: no sasha...i respect her a lott...it will b nice if we create sum new designns and release it on her bday..it will b a gr8 honour..

Adi :yes sir..u r ri8..

Sasha: adi ..do u knw anything else other than jst nodding ur head to MK...MK tis is nt possible bcoz...we hve lot works to dne..

Maan: enough sasha...its decided...u take care of that mumbai project...adi will do the entire work for savithri ji party and show..

Adi: wat???bt sir..

Maan: dnt worry 2day sum new person is cmg for the job rite???u interviwed na...

Adi: yes sir..its a gal named...

Maan: adi i dnt need the biodata...she will help u in this work...bt i dnt wnt any thing messed up...cal her i will give sum ideas and instruction for the party and show..

Adi: sir ...sir..ah..she s nt yet here...

Maan: wat???? First day itself late..wen she cums gve her the dismiss letter(adi was blinking..cursing geet )...u gt that..

Sasha: MK ..its fine ...we dnt hve time to recruit new person nw...lets leave..i will warn her personally...k...(or else who will do so much of work..)

Maan : fine u ppl can leave nw..and adi meet me with that gial wen she cums..k..

Adi : k sir..

Both of them left...maan is stading near the window and thinking abt wat will be his idea for new designs...suddenly his eyes gt fixed on the parking area ...all he saw a gal gt dwn frm her scooty in a hurry...wearing a light cream clr salwar which is very simple...he suddenly switched onto the cctv cam on his table in parking lot...her hair was curly..nt even properly combed..not much of accesories jst a small chain and a stud...according to him she is a fashion disaster...bt still she luked nice..he alsmost cnt take his eyes frm her...he was still watching..

Geet gt dwn frm her scooty run towards the lift...but stop near ganesh ji statue and prays for 2min.. "babaji plz plz take care that i wnt gt fired on first day itself..k ..bye" ..maan smiled...geet ran into the lift...maan nw lukin at her thro'lift cam...a kid in the lift was crying...her mother trying to console the kid..geet tuk a choclate frm her bag an dgve it to the kid...return she gt a kiss frm the kid...she checked herself in the glass mirror of lift...she was like "oh geet u luk... (maan: simple yet stunning )pathetic...thats y u shuldnt be late..fine iam here to do job iam nt here to work as model...so chill"...suddenly maan realise wat he is doing "shit..wat the hell u r doing maan ..spying at a gal in cam...ah...stop it ...fine its nthng..k...gud nw lets focus on the new show..."...maan thoght wish i got that choclate...no gal disturbed him like that...

Geet ran into the adis cabin and crashed at sasha...

Sasha: wat the hell???oh ur miss geet handa...late for work..and wat on the earth is this costume...adi really u dnt knw to select gals for the jobs..

Geet: sorry mom...a person work is nt defined by their dresses...

Sasha : watever...u r already late stop arguing and start working...

Adi: geet y r u so late ..(geet tries to explain him bt)...fine leave we need to meet our boss first come..

Wen they reach maan cabin he was nt there...he was in the conference room...adi tuk geet tere...geet was walking beside adi...bit scared..suddenly she saw a man standing in front of a table...explaing things to them...his formal attire and his aatitude towards the ppl tere...and his style of speaking..geet almost lost her consioucs...her heart missed a beat... "wow!!!wat a man"...

Adi: ya ya he is our boss maan singh khurana...call him sir nt maan...k..

Geet gt her consioucs.. "thank god adi sir heard as maan...geet wat r u thinking u r geet handa..no guy can impress u...ahh..bt he is ...oh stop it geet...he is ur new boss...behave..."

Both entered the conference hall...maan turned and luked at geet...for the first time their eyes met...both of them wnt to luk away..bt they r helplesss...they were jst luking...

SO HW WAS IT GUYS..IF U LIKE IT...COMMENT ...I WILL CNTNUE WIT THEIR OFFICE NOK-JHOKS AND ROMANCE...

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krishdgr8 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ah...nobody liked it.😕..k ...no probs...😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I LOVED IT!!! Waiting for the next part!! please add me to your pm list!!! I liked the strong crazy geet and silly Maan! Waiting for more!! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ha i loved it...do continue soon...and plzzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@crazedfan19 ...eiya22..
thanksa lot for ur comments...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great start!!!
Will be waiting ...
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nice start

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Posted: 14 years ago
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intersting...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2-intro of two love birds….

Geet entered the conference room almost try to avoid maan eye contact…maan was finish with the meeting ..staff members gt dispersed…adi came to maan with geet..maan was luking at them …maan self thought(oh so this is new PA geet handa…nice…wat???stop it maan)..

Adi: sir …this is geet ..aapki new PA..

Geet : gud mrng sir..

Maan luked at his watch…geet was an hour late..

Maan: miss geet handa…first day itself late..wat do u think of urself..

Geet tried to say sumthing..

Maan: no need of explanation…nw go to work…adi..these are the new designs for the show…I thought we will make something of 80s desi kind of stuff …it will be a nice presentation for savithri ji on her bday…

Adi: gud idea sir….

Maan: hmm….also I thought of colour scheme like black and white…both for party and show..

Adi: nice sir..

Geet was mumbling..80s theme and black and white colour, desi..wat a combination..yuck..

Maan: excuse me…wat did u said..

Geet : nthng sir…

Maan:I heard u…yuck…wat was that…(he just glared her frm bottom to top and said…she almost mesmerized him still he said)u criticizing abt my ideas..maan singh khurana ideas..u urself is a fashion disaster…first learn hw to behave with ur boss…understand..

Geet was really shocked and annoyed(wat d hell…geez such a rude person)…k sir I understood…

Maan:u both can go…ha one thing miss geet handa..if u r planning to cme late and criticize ur boss idea plz dnt cum at all…gt that..

Geet gve him a stare and both adi and geet left the room…

Adi showed geets cabin and left her with sum work…geet was… "such a rude or kadoos boss..woh be mera jaise bubbly gal ke liye..hai babji…hw iam gonna manage him…wait geet he is ur boss..aur koi nahi…k..nw back to work..lets show him who is geet handa…"

Man crossed geets cabin and had a sneak peak…he saw her table arranged properly and she is work interstingly with humming songs …he started to leave..suddenly heard her talking to herself..

Geet : I still dnt understand hw it will be a black and white cum desi theme…desi is full of colors hai na…old means their colorful clothes are only main…bt wat was this abt…hai rabba….i cnt understand this…fine who cares…he said iam a fashion disaster…ah…leave it..he luks gud nly frm distance nt near…dusht dhanav…..wow geet u gt a name for him…she gives a naughty smile..

Maan: wat dusht dhanav..me????hw dare she can tell this…and wat did she said lukin nice frm distance nly???(suddenly he sense sumthing..)he smiles..nice ah..he checks himself once…nt bad…oh maan yeh ladki to muje pagal kardegi…jst one day I was smiling on her sarcastic comments….i guess this a bad day…gotta go…

He leaves suddenly geet thought that somebody is watching her so she came out to check bt nobody was tere…she went back to work…

Adi came to maan cabin and gave sum details abt the party arrangements..

Maan: wow adi gt all arrangements so soon…gud work..

Adi: actually sir its geet who dne all this…

Maan was surprised… "ok…adi do u think that desi theme and black and white combination wnt work.."

Adi: why this sudden question…

Maan: answer me…adi…

Adi was luking blank he knows that its nt a nice combination bt he doesn't has the guts to speak up…he knws that maan can change the rock into diamond..bt y this sudden question and change of mind..

Maan: adi iam asking you something answer me..

Adi: sir its nice only but savithriji is famous fro her traditional kind of stuffs…so if we present her black and white that too on her bday…ah…ah..

Maan: wat…

Adi: it wnt suit sir..

Maan: u r rite y cnt u tell this one b4…fine leave…we make some alterations in designs..adi just check that we have any desi collections in our office and let me knw..i will just ask the designers to hve a luk at those..k

adi noded and left..

THE DUPPATTA-LOVE SYMBOL OF MANEET

Adi asked geet to make a note wat are all the dresse in desi collections in their sections..geet left for the room without realizing shes gonna experience her first romantic moment…

She entered the room and started checking all the dresses she also gt amused by the designs and variety of sarees salwar…choli..lehenga…etc..

Maan was crossing the room and saw geet..first he thought he was dreaming "wat..werever I go this gal cums in frnt of me…am I dreaming"..then he heard her humming… "I guess iam nt dreaming"…he approached her…she was standing in between a colourful room but only she luked so beautiful to him…suddenly geet duppatta flow in air and gt struck to one of dresses … "hai babji …need to remove it carefully so that the dress wnt spoilt…" she was trying bt her hand is full ..with a note, pen..if she moves to keep it aside she need to go without duppatta…and so she throw it in d grund..her pen broken and a part hit maans face wen he reached tere…geet "oops…sorry sir I was jst"…she tried to move…bt her duppatta gt more tangled..

Maan approached her and came close..geet heart missed a beat…he raised his hand ….went near her and helped to remove the dupatta…geet never came across to a man this close…but somehow she liked this closeness of him…though he his close he doesn't touch her…geet thought how gud he his …somebody wuld hve mistook the chance to harass her…she was staring at him in surprise…..maan removed the dupatta and left it….then eyelock ….suddenly they gt to their senses and broke apart…

Geet: thank you sir…

Maan: its k…did u gt the list..

Geet hand over the list and almost ran away frm there…

Maan was thinking why did I came into the room and was remembering hw he came jst luking at geet..and helped her……he smiled again…he thought wats happening btwn us…why iam feeling like this for a gal……he left frm there..

He doesn't knw that after this day his smile is nly for that girl ….she is the one who is gonna bring up colours in his life……..

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