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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Hey guys...a small change in the char of geet...she's not Handa but Kapoor

I think I might change the char of annie as well,i.e find a replacement 4 nikunj

Hope u guys don't mind
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Can u plzzz help me in this one...suggest sum1 in place of nikunj...

Shud be a gud 1😉

My mind is blank actually
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
when will u update?!?!? m waitin... plzzz update sooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: shelly_08

Can u plzzz help me in this one...suggest sum1 in place of nikunj...


Shud be a gud 1😉

My mind is blank actually


instead of NIKUNJ can be damini or her lil sister ROSHNI from love ne mila di jodi!!! i dun knw there real names... but i hope u got me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Zarmeen-M


instead of NIKUNJ can be damini or her lil sister ROSHNI from love ne mila di jodi!!! i dun knw there real names... but i hope u got me...

Hey good choice...even I had rosh in my mind
Her name is simran kaur😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
when will u update yaar... plzz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
love it, plz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Those who are patiently waiting for this 1...update is coming 2morrow😊

Thank u all 4 the comments guys...love u all🤗

Hope u all lyk this 1 too😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69





Chapter-1
Murder @ Oxford street,London




February 2011,Oxford st,London



*Click* *click* *click*



The sounds of the cameras went on and on as the gathering at Oxford St said it all that something big has taken place here.




''This is the third in line'', a man in his mid-forties sighed.




''It seems the killer have no other job to do than this-pick up random people,dash their brains out and screw the crime branch in the process'' a relatively younger man said irritatedly.




''Ahh chill Jones...I'm sure this is not the first time we are dealing with some serial killer and I can bet on my last penny that this won't be the last too'' said another man.




''Well...how do you know its a serial-killer''? a man asked questioningly.




''Oh come on Dirk,didn't you heard Chief say ''third in a row''? ''Now what can you probably make out of that eh''?




''How were the previous two like then''? Now his curiosity taking over his irritation.




''Look at the girl'' he said and bended over the dead body of the girl.




The girl wore a thick,leather jacket with fox-fur over her collars.Her feet were covered with high-boots,without heels.Her hair was in a mess and matted and it seemed she dressed herself in a haste.Her nails were neatly cut short and filed.There was no sign of any fight or using of force on her,at least that was what it seemed like from outside as she was mostly covered in clothes.There was no other injury save the sign of stab on her neck.It seemed the girl was stabbed with some sharp yet thin object.




''There is no sign to suggest she had a fight or someone tried to rape her'' he continued ''What do you make of that''? The man now asked.




''I can't make a head or tail of what you are asking or suggesting'' he gave a bewildered expression.




''The killer'' he proceeded ''I can bet-is someone from the medical family''.




''And what makes you think so'' he questioned his logic behind his conclusion crossing his arms over his chest.




''Look at the way the person has carried out the murder''.




''This sort of neatness and accuracy can only be carried out by a some medical buff''.




''The same thing happened with the previous two...even they were killed in a similar fashion,i.e no other signs of physical injury or even robbery-no wonder this seems to be a case of serial killings'' he said rubbing his palms together.




''Who were they-all young ladies'' Jones asked.




''Nope...an old lady and a teenaged boy''.




''Whoa...this is gonna be complicated sir...no similarity between the three murdered people and still we are assuming all are done by the same man or woman''.




''Theres some hope...and a big clue as well'' the man had a glint in his eyes as he said that.




''Like what''?




''The old lady was a patient in a mental hospital and the boy,as per the account given by the family members,was having some problems regarding which they have to visit a rehabilitation centre''-and co-incidentally both were patients of Dr Arabella Hastings'' he now smirked.




''Looks like someone is not that smart'' the other quipped as a playful smile came to his lips.




''Be careful Jones,we are not supposed to underestimate our enemy'' he finished.




Oblivious to them someone was watching them from a place far off and secluded.




As the person saw the dead body being taken away,she pressed the button on the handle of the car door,making the window of the car go up and with that she drove away.



Precap-''Mr Maan Singh Khurana,right''


Sooo...that was the first part...tell me if you liked it😊...sorry if it's short...will write a looong one next time

Plzzz give some nice and long comments...it really motivates me a lot.😳
Buddy me if u want 2 b pmed.

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Edited by shelly_08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
lovely update
nice start ...
very interesting
cont sooon

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