Mine..MG FF.. Season 3 last part page 8

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Hello guys, after seeing the amazing comments for Season 1 and 2 for Mine.. i have decided for u only to write a season 3. This season will be different. And may have some social issues. So lets see..
The current twist/track i have taken is from Desperate Housewives ...


Link to last 2 series.. on same thread..



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Part 16... Season 3 PART 1


3 years had passed since Maan and Geet had got married. There child Misha had brought a wonderful joy to there life. Misha being almost 2. She was the heart the joy the stars of everyone's eyes. She loved pulling Muskaan's hair, stealing Sheena's stestocope. (dunno hw to spell it LOL) and loved pulling Abhi and Rahul's ears. A little devil terror she was called by those four. She acted deviant in front of them but when it came to her parents, Maan and Geet, She was a perfect angel except when she was hungry or left alone. You see this little devil wanted attention.


Maan decided that day to take Geet and Misha out on a picnic. He was absolutely happy. Life could not be better for him. Everything was on top of the world. His wife was by his side with there daughter Misha.

'Come on Mishii be a good girl for daddy and scream so your mum hurries up' Misha smiled at her father and gave him a sloppy kiss and screamed. Geet came running out. She was just picking her duppata up and about to exit her bedroom when she heard her angel. Geet got worried had something happened to her is she alright. She went running down to see her playing peacefully with her father. Misha saw her mother arrive and gave her an innocent look. Geet tapped her foot for Maan's attention. Geet being Misha's mother understood everything about Misha and knew it was Maan's fault for Misha screaming. Maan slowly turned his head for face Geet when he smiled and said

'Hey Geet's whats up'

'Why did Misha scream'

'Misha scream she didn't scream. And your ready lets go'

'Misha did you scream because your dad told you to' Misha looked at Geet and then at Maan and Maan pleaded with his eyes not to tell Geet anything but Misha was a Mama's girl. And she innocently looked at Maan showing an apologetic face saying sorry with her eyes and looked at Geet and said

'papa yes mama run'

Those 4 words made Geet understand that Maan made her hurry down.

'Mr Maan Singh Khurana, I know you have no limit for any patience but for God's sake using my child as an excuse to make me hurry up. Maan do you not understand that my heart fell into my stomach thinking Misha was in trouble. I am a mother Maan i will worry and over worry you know'

'Sorry Geet its just your taking too long and me and Misha were getting bored'

'Excuse me Mr Khurana, not only do i have to get your clothes ready, i have to dress your daughter feed her and then i have to get ready myself understood'

'Point taken Mrs Khurana can we leave now' Maan asked standing up from the sofa.

'Yes' Maan picked up Misha and Geet walked behind them. For some reason she felt today was going to have a huge impact on all there lives.


They arrived at the theme park. Maan and Misha and Geet were really excited. It was Misha's first time in a theme park as under 2 were not allowed and Misha was almost 2 and her height showed it to. She was a fast and strong baby. Geet was excited. Being in a theme park made her a child again. Abhi and Muskaan joined them. Rahul had a meeting to go to and Sheena had doctor duties

'Maan Maan i want to go on that water ride'

'Geet calm down we will go' Muskaan said.

'Geet lets go forget these two misers' Abhi said laughing

'what did you say' Muskaan threateninly asked. Abhi and Geet ran away.

'Keep watch of my child Maan and Muskaan if anything happens I'll kill you' Geet yelled. Muskaan and Maan with Misha went to a baby ride. It finished before Geet and Abhi returned. Maan texted Abhi that they were at the benches outside one of the small cafe.


Muskaan and Maan played with Misha. They saw Geet and Abhi at the stairs of the ride waiting in line. Geet waved to them.

'I've never seen Geet look so happy' Muskaan said.

'I know, she neededa day out to be herself have fun with friends and stuff. She been busy with home and Misha' said Maan. Muskaan screamed in pain when Misha grabbed her hair.

'hey you naughty'

'Muski don't say bad things to my child'

'Oh I'm sorry Misha father' Muskaan and Misha laughed. They walked to the gate surrounding the ride which Geet and Abhi were on. They waved at eachother as they sat on the ride going round and up and down.

'Maan I know I'm not meant to say anything but do you think your right in not telling her' Muskaan asked. Luckily Misha had fallen asleep. Going on so many rides had tired her out.

'Muskaan I know your right but i mean there should'nt be any secret's in any relationships but how do i tell her'

'how when Rashi came into our lives Geet could never forgive me'

'But Maan she needs to know the truth'

'what truth'

Maan and Muskaan turned around and saw Geet and smiled and said

'oh that your such a pain in the ass' Muskaan said.

'Muskaan do you want to die now or later' Geet said.


It was almost time for the theme park to close. So all of them went to a small playground. Geet sat with Maan. Muskaan and Abhi were sitting. Geet put Misha in the playground where she played they were busy discussing something when they heard a scream. They saw Misha had fallen and hurt herself. Geet screamed in pain. Maan and Abhi ran to get Misha whlist Muskaan took care of Geet. They all rushed to the hospital.


'What happened' exclaimed Sheena with shock. Misha was covered in blood. she was bleeding profusely.

'she fell treat her please'


Sheena took care of Misha and then came out.

'She is stable but she needs blood urgently'

'Take ours we are her parents'


Maan and Geet gave there blood to test when it came back it did not match.

'But how is that possible'

'Geet Misha is not your child'

'What' Maan exclaimed.

'What do you mean? I gave birth to her in this hospital what do you mean she is not mine you helped me deliver her'

'Her DNA and your DNA does not match, Muskaan your blood group is same as her's nurse take Muskaan please' Sheena said talking to Muskaan and Geet.


'Geet calm down'

'Calm down, the child i raised for 2 years, your telling me she is not mine. How is that possible? Tell me'

'I don't know Geet. I remember clearly that day there were one delivery that day and it was only you'

'Then who is Misha real parent's'asked Maan

'and where is my child'

'Geet don't worry we will find out what happened,'

'Sheena, I don't care what happens now I want my biological child back and Misha is still my child no matter what happens, right Maan?' Maan was too shocked to speak.

'Maan'

'Yes Geet, Misha is our child don't worry Geet our love for her will never change'

'Geet could you please go outside'

'but why i want my child'

'don't worry Misha will be fine'


Geet left the room. Sheena turned to him and Muskaan came in to.

'Maan do you remember that time, Sameera came in the hospital as well' Sheena said.

'She promised you 3 months back that she will kill your child' Muskaan said

'I think she must have kidnapped your biological child or killed your child' Sheena said

'WHAT I will NOT LEAVE THAT SAMEERA' Just then a phonecall came on Maan's phone.

'Hello'

'Hello Mr Khurana, i see you have found out the truth, yes i have your daughter yours and Geet's daughter and plan on raising her and turning her into a... well i'm thinking of selling her when she gets older'

'YOU BITCH where is my daughter I will never leave you Sameera'

'find me first Maan oh and by the way regarding Misha, don't worry about her. She is an orphan, found her dumped, so gave her to you i mean i'd rather that poor orphan have a lavish life and your blood have a horrible life living as a sex slave'

'SAMEERA'

'Don't shout, whatever has happened is your fault Mr Khurana your fault, if you had never sent my husband to jail then this would never had happened Goodbye Mr Khurana'

Geet came in and heard the conversation and was shocked

'Maan' she whispered.

'Geet' Maan turned around.

'Maan, our daughter real daughter save her Maan'


just then a nurse came running in and said

'SIr Dr Sheena Misha is missing from her room'

'WHAT' Sheena yelled. maan then received a text


Both Daughters gone biological and adoptive poor Geet, Both will have a wonderful life don't worry, a new guy every night for them by the way your other daughter biological daughter is named Mahi


Geet fell on the ground. Maan went up to her and knelt down

'Geet'

'Maan i want my daughter back. I want both my daughters back. I want Misha back, I want Mahi back I want both of them safe and sound' Geet cried.

'I PROMISE GEET I PROMISE I WILL GET BOTH OUR DAUGHTERS BACK'




HELLO GUYS I CHANGED THE STORLINE PLEASE RE_READ




PRECAP:::: Sameera... her story!


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HELLO i have changed the storyline.. MAAN IS NOT THE FATHER OF MISHA (BIOLOGICAL)

MISHA is an ORPHAN! Sameera is not her mother... SAMEERA KIDNAPED MAHI! and NOW MISHA TOO! SAMEERA DOING THIS FOR REVENGE! GEET LOVES BOTH HER KIDS


SO how was it.. was it a banging start to the third serious or what???


Comments.. please x

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
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so much confussion plz clear it out😊
nice update
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nice start ... I hope its surrogacy ... i dont want Maan to cheat on geet in any way ... plzz z... a Big No. ... surrogacy will be more interesting than the cheating thingy ...
btw i just read the previous season yesterday at one go and today i get the update for the 3 season ... yooohooo 😃
continue super soon
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hyy nic part do add me 2 ya PM list
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Awesome update but scared
Hope maan didn't cheat on geet
& hu is sameera
Cont soon Xx...
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wow u r back !!! awsome one yaar ...loved it so much !!
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gret update

but pls dont let maan to cheat on geet
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not getting your pms dear...

pls pm me
Misha is not Geet's kid 😲
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what?? not geet child!!!
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