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Posted: 14 years ago

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their bodies are the chosen residence of the feeling that binds them...this love has a life of its own...it does not obey the dictates of the two bodies that profess it...they walk in unison though one may think she's far away...but the feeling that he is near tugs at her...as there is a knocking at her door...to reveal the messenger that delivers his gentle kiss....and the elements in the wind would echo his declaration of love and resonate his heartbeat inside her...should she abandon the house and stop nourishing it...she need only stumble to know that he will catch her...though watching her lock the door...so that he doesn't enter...has surly made him feel in pain...he will bring to her the delites that will tempt her appetite again...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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i again tell ya u should be a writer......😛

lovely......👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Lovely dear 👏👏....I am agree with Ren, you are wonderful writer....

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Posted: 14 years ago

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OMg Syl .. was waiting for your BEAUTIFUL Post all day 😆

How nicely you portray the connection Maaneet really have!

The scene really got to me .. where she had felt his presence the most in the entire stay that she's been in this home. Now that he is living under the same roof .. is just a mere floor apart from her .. she can't help but feel his presence more and more! That kiss, the professing of his love for her -- twice -- she felt it all .. as last time they were connected through fire, wind, and water, today it is through an unbreakable bond .. today he seals it with a kiss.. even if it is just on a picture of her .. he feels it is enough for him as she will be sleeping close to his heart .. it was a beautiful thought..

Now her suspicions of Balwant being Maan are becoming clearer, and after seeing that the driver specially perpared the Gol Gappe for her .. she'll clearly want to get to the bottom of it fast!

I felt for Maan's helplessness today! He can see that this is the harshest punishment he can get -- not being able to be near his Geet or help her when she's in need .. and he's right there in front of her! Probably took all his might to not push aside Tej and just be with her!

Lovely Post Syl <3!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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the door to their heart.....i loved the episode today...when Maan kissed her pic...the sound...was music...and her reflexion...was as passionate as if he had really touched her cheeks with his lips...and then bringing her pic close to his heart...his heart beat...mahiii in the BG...it opened the door of our heart...Maan what a sweetheart...he was like a teddy bear..just wanted to hug him

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mgdg_2010

i again tell ya u should be a writer......😛

lovely......👏

you are far too kind ren...this little paragraph took everything i had...i am only too happy that you liked it!

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Originally posted by: muniza75

Lovely dear 👏👏....I am agree with Ren, you are wonderful writer....

Muniza

thank you muniza...i really appreciate your feed back!

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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh
OMg Syl .. was waiting for your BEAUTIFUL Post all day 😆

How nicely you portray the connection Maaneet really have!

The scene really got to me .. where she had felt his presence the most in the entire stay that she's been in this home. Now that he is living under the same roof .. is just a mere floor apart from her .. she can't help but feel his presence more and more! That kiss, the professing of his love for her -- twice -- she felt it all .. as last time they were connected through fire, wind, and water, today it is through an unbreakable bond .. today he seals it with a kiss.. even if it is just on a picture of her .. he feels it is enough for him as she will be sleeping close to his heart .. it was a beautiful thought..

Now her suspicions of Balwant being Maan are becoming clearer, and after seeing that the driver specially perpared the Gol Gappe for her .. she'll clearly want to get to the bottom of it fast!

I felt for Maan's helplessness today! He can see that this is the harshest punishment he can get -- not being able to be near his Geet or help her when she's in need .. and he's right there in front of her! Probably took all his might to not push aside Tej and just be with her!

Lovely Post Syl <3!

Z

geet cought on right away that something was up with the new "driver"...it is undeniable that they are one...dd was great with her expressions and body language when she felt/heard the kiss...it was breathtaking...i really thought maan would reveal himself at that moment...when everyone was trying to move him away...i felt like their love was beyond even them...

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the door to their heart.....i loved the episode today...when Maan kissed her pic...the sound...was music...and her reflexion...was as passionate as if he had really touched her cheeks with his lips...and then bringing her pic close to his heart...his heart beat...mahiii in the BG...it opened the door of our heart...Maan what a sweetheart...he was like a teddy bear..just wanted to hug him

i loved that whole scene between him and geet...i really liked the picture of geet that he had in his wallet...geet really react as if someone had kissed her and touched her..but not like she was affraid...more like she wanted to know where that feeling came from ...i wanted to hug him too...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: undisclosed

geet cought on right away that something was up with the new "driver"...it is undeniable that they are one...dd was great with her expressions and body language when she felt/heard the kiss...it was breathtaking...i really thought maan would reveal himself at that moment...when everyone was trying to move him away...i felt like their love was beyond even them...

oh syl you surprise us every day!! you have a lot more in store than you give urself credit for.. believe me darling!!! WONDERFUL!!!

yeah I rewinded it multiple times... her jerk, her expression when she felt the kiss... was pricelessss😳

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