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awww the trusty sidekick....his disguise did more to draw attention...than it did to hide him...but he would go to great lengths to come to the aid of the beast...the beast that by now is roaming free inside the castle walls...the walls that hold his treasure and his heart....his heart that beats inside our song...our song that sits and dreams....dreams that bring them close...close to eliminate the gap between them...them who yearn to be together...together in the dream but as consciounous brings back reality...she sits and longs for him as he steals her image...image that will keep him going until she is back in his arms...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ur presentation of the episode is like a song...the flow of the words were like a wave...ur ending word of the sentence it's the first word to the following sentence...i...sort of saying one ending it's for another begenning...keep rocking with ur posts...yet to eatch the episode...but from the WU i'm sure it was a great episode

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Originally posted by: Maya_P

ur presentation of the episode is like a song...the flow of the words were like a wave...ur ending word of the sentence it's the first word to the following sentence...i...sort of saying one ending it's for another begenning...keep rocking with ur posts...yet to eatch the episode...but from the WU i'm sure it was a great episode

maya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....go watch the episode ASAP....i loved it!
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What a Beautiful (here I go again:P) Poem you wove!! I am in awe Syl!!
You put the words in such a flow that it made me feel like I was riding in a river down Maaneet Land ..
Yes .. the beast now has full sight of what his song's heart desires!! He has seen her day dreaming about him .. and he has heard her conflicting thoughts. . now all he needs to do is get her in his grasp .. and take her away .. and make her believe that all will be right for him and her ... if they are together!
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After going through your wonderful post l have a request to u to write more poetry like this.
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wonderful.......👏

thank you ren...you are wonderful😳
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

What a Beautiful (here I go again:P) Poem you wove!! I am in awe Syl!!

You put the words in such a flow that it made me feel like I was riding in a river down Maaneet Land ..
Yes .. the beast now has full sight of what his song's heart desires!! He has seen her day dreaming about him .. and he has heard her conflicting thoughts. . now all he needs to do is get her in his grasp .. and take her away .. and make her believe that all will be right for him and her ... if they are together!
Z

thats right z...once he gets her in his arms ....inside that house...she is going to melt...nice and slow...
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After going through your wonderful post l have a request to u to write more poetry like this.
wow..it sounds like poetry...i didn't mean for it to be poetry...i was just trying to recount the episode....thanks for likeing my post 🤗
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Originally posted by Maya_P

ur presentation of the episode is like a song...the flow of the words were like a wave...ur ending word of the sentence it's the first word to the following sentence...i...sort of saying one ending it's for another begenning...keep rocking with ur posts...yet to watch the episode...but from the WU i'm sure it was a great episode

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U have said all I wanna say........superbly written.....and maya pls watch the episode ASAP...its too good......getting back the old magic gradually......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You know...I think her dream was basically her questioning herself...she clearly loves him, yearns to be with him...and as Maan in dream- she basically asked herself- Why the separation?

Me really liked it!


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