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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Asha2010
Good, I just hope that they would do something on this front only, and one more thing, after that there will be some passionate moments between them, so now is the time, you should write about some passionate moments between them, some teasing, some playing with each other, but ya now is the time for that. waiting for that update.
Good that I am fist one to comment.

Sejal

Thanks Sejal.

I do not write things for being read by CVs. Especially not now. I have stopped watching since Miscarriage. I am updated on the tracks since I visit the forums and the treatment of the characters has been absurd at best. The show has ended for me. But I have loved Maneet at one point. I write only for that love 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Wow! That was really good! I hope something like this happens :)

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Bulbul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

very nice OS!👏..I loved that scene in Ishq-Vishq(it being one of my favouraite movies) and loved it on Maaneet!..you write wonderfully and your dialogues are awesome!👍🏼⭐️😃

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

beautiful os .it is always a pleasure to read all your os's. you are an amazing writer.

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Short n sweet, but oh so powerful! Loved it, but hoping for a passionate, intense, emotional, soul stirring reunion for these two on tv. Hope the cv's deliver.

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-Deepzz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

@Mishthi........Another sixer from you...👍🏼.....Geet saying "Bilkul chup. Ek shabd aur nahin ".....The student becomes the master....😍

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

beautiful os.. keep writing!!!!

esp the last part

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Mishthi - Simply beautiful. Loved it. Well, not sooo off track from what is happening currently, so we can expect something like this to happen even in the show. Let us see what they show us now.

If only we had any of u OS / FF writers in the creative team 😆

Brilliant job., Loved it.