-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15

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Esha

@esha143

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

Okay MK got a friend in the first day...that's so nice of Prince to take care of MK like that....innocent souls pure friendship is one of the world's beautiful emotions....why did Maan hired a detective to go behind Geet while she is infront of him??And today u showed Maan's pain in all this mess but he is the one that's responsible for all this so can't empathize with his pain as much as with what Geet had to face all these years...I hope to see the reformation days of their relationship soon....

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todayzstar

@todayzstar

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

Awesum..muskaan..
cntnue soon😉

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

i think these lines reflect geet's feelings very well............

Dil ne zinda rehne ki tamanna chhod di
par tum na aaye
Teri ek jhalak ki khwahish ne zindagi mod di
par tum na aaye

Mujh main basi teri khusbhoo kahi khone si lagi
Par tum na aaye
Vaado aur lafzon ke maiyne badalne lage
par tum na aaye

Badal phir jhoom barse, sharad bhi laut aaya
par tum na aaye
Saal maheenay dino ke gham ka saaya zehen main bas gaya
par tum na aaye

Ankhon main nami ki aadat si pad gayi, Sukh kar woh bhi ashk ban chale
par tum na aaye
Khushiyo ke badal chhatt gaye, ghamo ki syahi beh gayi
par tum na aaye

Logo ki ungliyon aur zamaane ki nazron ne kiya mere pyar ko badnaam
par tum na aaye
Neelami huyi tere pyar, mere khwaabon aur khushiyon ki sareaam
par tum na aaye

Takti thak gayi hun raasta tere intezaar ke saaye
par tum na aaye
Aaj main rakh hone chali hun, teri yaad ka deepak jalaye
par tum phir bhi na aaye…….

i know ab geet har umeed chod chuki hai.............par maan ko usse wapas wahi banana hoga jaisi wo thi............full of life..........i really feel very sad when geet doesn't react after that peck...........

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

Thank u for the wonderful update dear, love the first family scene bechara maan aab apni patnise ithna dhar tha hei he cant even open his mouth in front of her😉. I hate Anjali i know how kids tease when they see new students in the class that too with some little problem poor mk atleast their was a prince charming who is ready to help her

Muskan a small doudt is prince the child of any of geets friends group like mukti naina or rids if it is it would be lovely.😊

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

oops forgot to mention The poem u have posted was awesome

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

nice update.... waiting for next..... muskan u rock

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1107

nice update!!

beginning of new cute story ;)

cont soon

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1108

awwww overall it was a lovely update.........but y did maan asked dat detective to drop the case???? atleast ye hi puchh leta ki geet ka husband kaun hai!!!😕

i loved the poem in the end ..............it was awesome!!!!👏

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mons_mb

@mons_mb

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1109

PRINCE???😊😊

hmmm...........😆😆

i m assuming him as prem and mukti's son😲

u know😉

friendship next generation....😉😉😉

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#1110

Originally posted by: mons_bhatia
PRINCE???😊😊
hmmm...........😆😆

i m assuming him as prem and mukti's son😲

u know😉

friendship next generation....😉😉😉

GOOD IDEA😆