-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 - Page 70

tm mini, well it's also on the way half done , if any one need just give me 5 minsI"ll post it here😆


me waiting MUAH🤗

awesome ...... briliant.. wow.. jr MK ka gussa dekhna hai muje...wow.. kya gussa hai...lol..

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

it better be the part u left yesterday...😡

plz type fast n post it...

u too jyoti 😡

btw how r u?

Originally posted by: simi91

hi kate
update ff, hmm fro tomorrow I'll start.
right now slowly slowly typing 😆


do yu write FF i didnt know i was just talking about TM mini yu & komo & jyoti wrote pls can yu pm me ur FF so i can read it

hey checkout the link of her FF

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1567133&TPN=86

Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan

Love at First Sight

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1614552

Memorable moments

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1543601

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey dear....how r u....m waiting for ur mini story 😉

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

it better be the part u left yesterday...😡

plz type fast n post it...

ha jee ohi part hain post kar rehi hoon ruk ja 2 min😆

TM mini???????
yep my dear sis its amazing i'm telling so we have to comment me & yu komo & rakhi jyoti are the writer

Next:-

Maan enter muskan's room and found lots of maan's pic with her. Maan adore those pics and caressed little muskan's pic. He kissed little muskan and a tear falls from his eyes. He hates himself for doing this to his geet, he promised her to stay with her in her pregnancy period but he fails his every promised fails. He feared now to promise anything, but he has to, have to do something he have to erase every pain from geet's life. He knows it's tough but not impossible and He will do anything to bring smile on geet's face. His geet who was bubbly at one time but now she is cold, and all cause of him, He was so busy that time he don't give time to his life, he taking her for granted, never understood her unconditional love for him.

Here, that day maan just spend time with geet and muskan pics with him, he look whole house and found his cloths, toiletries. His shoes. Maan's eyes again filled with tears. He fell down on his knees and crying there. He feels to destroy himself. He want to kill himself, y he gave so much pain to his soul, yes his soul his geet, y he didn't listen to her, y his ego is big that day . y his love hide behind his ego, y ,y?

He cried that day, he want to kill himself but he know if anything happen to him then geet will finish that day,

He has to be strong for his family, yes his family, his wify geet,and their symbol of love their muskan.

That day evening geet reached their with muskan .

Muskan look unhappy , she want to stay back in Delhi, cause her dad is there.

Geet knock the door, Here maan open the door and geet said ramu ,then saw maan is standing there.

Muskan also saw maan then she shout da … da… da …da.

Maan bend and take her in his arms, both gives each other lots of kisses.

Muskan:- da … da… da …da. Aap iha, aap iye surprise de…n eke liye kya the n..aa.. aap …iha.

Maan:- ha sweet heart, mein iha aapko aur aapke mama ko surprise dene liye aaya hoon.

Muskan kisses he daddy and said u r the…..be….st…

Maan smiles and kissed her cheeks.

Geet is still standing there with confuse state, she cannot believe it. After some moments, she understand it and just enter the home and said msukan beta, go to ur room, geet indicate her nanny to take muskan with her.

But muskan huggs her daddy tightly and said nehii.. ne…hi…

Geet got angry and said muskan come with me.

Maan look at msukan first then at geet and said sweet heart, go with nany, I'll be there within 5 mins.

Muskan still nodding in no when maan said aaj raat hum dono vanilla ice cream khayenge.

Muskan smiles and maan wipes her tears and said ha , pakka.

Muskan kisses her daddy and said jaldi aana ma ..ma .. dad..da

Maaneet both nooded.

Geet :- y r u here?

Maan shocked then smiles and know it'll be her reaction.

He said take my life back to my home back.

Geet turns and looks at maan but her eyes speak nothing, her eyes r still cold, no pain, no fear, no complain, just look at maan then said raat ho gayi hain khana kha lete hain.

Maan nodded and said to himself I know geet , it'll be tough but I"ll manao u sure. U r my life.I'll not repeat my mis take again.

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

me gud...how r u...

forgot to say hi to every1...hello every1...😆

today i wont be writing anythhing...it will be rakhi n priya...😃

agar control kar paayi toh...😆...otherwise u never know😉

hi to u too
i cant think of anything as if now😭........how about u start the scene ...........n.........i will continue from there ........sounds like plan .......what say 😳