OS: Truth and Betrayl

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesome os.. hope to c it on the show..

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-knirwal-

@-knirwal-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Awesome ...wish this happened
Loved it

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Sana

@Vintagepeach

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome OS...
loved it....
wish dis could be shwn in d show...

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TSharan

@TSharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Beautifully written Shreya!!!! I loved it totally....a similar scene in the show would make my day!!!

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Shreya - U set new and higher standards for yourself every time u write an OS. Brilliant. 👏

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, awesome sweety... Too good, this part was sooooooooooooooooo cute... "I came back I saw that I was ready to be accepted into the cocoon that I always lived in. and with that I slept peacefully with my head resting against his chest and his hand holding my waist as if protecting me from all the misery of the world. And it was true till he was holding me nothing could harm me ever,never."