Written Update:19/2:Ek bottle khoon ka khel

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all, I know u were all looking forward to the sarcy and spicy SAT update but since Anjana is busy I am here. So next time if u want her and never me again pls Pray she is not busy or u will be stuck to me again..hehe..



Ok so without further delay lets start.



GEET IN DILEMA, Heartbroken



Geet walking in the corridor,


Wondering about her feelings harbored,

Should she chose or love and husband,Or ask for mercy from DEV Dastard,She remembers Dev and his deeds,And remembers the blood Maan needs,She blames herself for the accident, She reminds Maan of all the promises he made,To stay with her forever and not leave her,But there he is moving ahead to free her,

She asks Babaji for help and Guidance,

And reaches a conclusion to ask for assistance.

GEET REACHES HOTEL



From the hospital she calls the hotel to seek help,


But she gets nothing but all the phone bills,

She decides to drive to the hotel where they stayed,

With that she drove to ask for life of her husband and goodbye she bade

She reaches hotel but finds no Dastardly DEV,


She calls him up to ask help for him to save,

But he picks no calls as he is lost in wonderment,

And thinking about all the things that went unattended

DADI LAEAVES, ARJUN AND ANNIE STAY BEHIND



Dadi leaves for hospital with adi,


Leaves behind Arjun and annie,

Asks Arjun to take care of her granddaughter,

Least she knew he takes care of her family altogether,

Annie is in tears thinking about MAAN Bhai,

Manisha consoles her that all will be alright,


She calls up Geet to give her himmat,

But little did she know that for her silliness GEET Is paying this Kimat,


Manisha romeo and Annie decide to pray to god,

Annie asks Arjun to join them in gods abode,


He clearly refuses saying he atheist,

Annie call him insensitive and indifferent,


He accepts it gladly and walks away,

And calls up to ask for Blood for his to be Brother-in-law,


Little did he know tht is wife is staring at him with all awe,

He denies doing anything good,


Reveals that is only aim is to destroy maan once he recovered,

To tell him about their relation,

And also give him sazaa for his sister's condition.

GEET MEETS DEV


Geet is ready to leave as her calls were unanswered,

And the dastard is out for a month of vacation,

And there he comes back to take a file,

While geet is walking out in trance all the while,

He reaches the car when he spots her half insane,

With tears in her eyes and life all drained,

She looks at him and a relief she feels,

Her husband will be fine and is all she needs,

She tells him about Maans condition,

And goes on her knees begging for blood donation,

He agrees saying he would do anything for his brother,

Geet is relieved and asks him to follow her,

But he stops her saying there is a condition,

She thinks that a man like him will help no one without a mission,

But she agrees to succumb to him without hesitation,

Her love wins and she chooses love over her revulsion.

Precap:

Geet praying to babaji,

Doctor gives her some news OMG,

She rushes screaming MAAN,

Look like he is finally gone with his samaan…

Ok thts it…hope u like it…do tell me if u didn't like it..i will make sure I do it better next time then..










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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnxx for the lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok please new dev dont be offended but the role yu playing suits the oold dev he was perfect match but its k but yu suit in different role.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow...I liked the way you wrote the whole thing...!!!⭐️
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Poetess ..... Luved your update........ Happy😛
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Jadu ki Rani 🤗Lovely update with Rhyming l👏👏oved reading it,😳😳 Calling Dev Dastard 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Love the Title Ek bottle Khoon ka Khel 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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polly: tht i picked from anajan..she calls dev Dastard..thnku
Deepika: Come on if i will not ask u all to read the crap i write..who else can i?????????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shreya.....Very Well Written.....Loved it that you have strung the scenes of the episode into a poetry in motion....👍🏼.....Great Job.....And would love to see you doing the update more often..... you are good 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@kavita: I took so long...thst Jo already be in a mood not to give it to me again..hehe...thnks..
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Since when u started writing updates 😕

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