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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
that was ana amazing OS..
came to the forum after almost 3 weeks and you are a wonderful start...
really loved it
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: silver.

I don't know! 😛 but i'm glad to see people really want it... 😆 I'm not good at coming up with stories and this was quite unexpected so... 😳

so that means we are getting a part 2??
if yes then i'll be waiting.. do PM me if you cont..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

so that means we are getting a part 2??
if yes then i'll be waiting.. do PM me if you cont..

plzzzz continue yaar...its just awsm....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wen are we getting the next part? 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i don't know... yet 🤣 i don't have anything in mind right now... and i didn't particularly promised a second part 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Author's Note
This is possibly one of the worst sequels written to any written piece of work... ever!
so read at your own peril.
I don't promise anything... there really isn't anything in there but I'm too lazy to actually eliminate it all and come up with something different. This is the final part. Please don't expect another one [i don't think you would either after reading it 🤣] Anyhow, I'm sorry if reading the following was a complete torture. 😆
The Valentine
PART TWO
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I really couldn't have believed he'd have been there. It seemed too good to be true. But I suppose miracles do happen... but only once in a blue moon and I was sure that I would probably not see him again. Perhaps he'd have regained his senses by the time he would have reached home last night of what a grave mistake he had made that night; kissing a complete stupid stranger. Guys like Maan Singh Khurana didn't cross paths with girls like me. It was not sensible. It was complete and utter moronic. I walked out of the crowded hallways of my college, looking back to take one last glance. I was a mess, my shirt had been written on, and so were my face and every visible part of my body. The things you do for college... I sighed and smiled back at the few faces who mouthed goodbyes. Meera walked towards me and congratulated me on completing another year of college. It seemed like it was the millionth time someone had said that to me. I frowned and Meera, noticing my annoyance, decided that it was better if we went home and take some rest.

The days flew by and I couldn't have possibly gotten him out of my mind. Meera asked about where I had been that night when Dev dumped me and I had no answer. It didn't seem particularly wise to tell her about that night... maybe because I knew that it was something that didn't matter to him anymore and that it shouldn't matter to me either.

I was walking nonchalantly on the same coast, wishing for a miracle to happen somehow and he'd land up there again. I had strong and confident hopes and it felt stupid to trust my instincts so much. I smiled faintly as the salt-smelling air whipped my curly, short hair and walked towards the waves to soak my feet.

And then I felt him.

It was so absurd.

But I really thought I did. He was here somewhere and I closed my eyes as the winds blew my hair, making me look like a complete witch since that's how I look when my hair is blown. I felt myself shiver and I knew that it was only my imagination. The hopes that had built up slowly came crashing down and I turned around to walk away. The tears that were completely pointless trickled down my cheeks and wiping them off, I ran into someone hard. Muttering a sorry and not bothering to look up to see who it was, I changed my direction and stepped forwards but he was fast enough to grab my wrist in a tight grip. I didn't have to look up to see who it was. I recognized that touch. It was all too familiar.

As my heart exploded inside my chest, I lifted my gaze and met his warm orbs which reflected the warm sunlight. It was still the same. 'Sorry,' I panted and turned around to walk away... I didn't want to be seem completely smitten since I knew it within me that it made no difference to him.

'Why the indifference?' he smirked which made my stomach uncomfortably churn.

I had no answer. Was he for real, asking me why I was showing the lack of interest? Maybe I had been wrong about him... maybe he did feel the same way.

'Are you going to say something?' he asked, raising an eyebrow.

I uncomfortably shrugged and said: 'I don't know what to say'

'I'm not going to hurt you' he smiled. 'You seem scared to death...'

'I'm not scared' I confessed. 'But I feel strange...'

'I can go if that's what you want' he said, his face clearly showing disappointment.

'I didn't mean that' I instantly spoke and his expressions lit up again. 'It's ' really nice to see you again'

'Either you are lying, or your eyes' he said in complete certainty.

I looked down at my feet, trying to think of what to say. He was so right about everything. I didn't like to see him because I wanted to see him. Surely, that made no sense. And if I told him how I felt, he'd have laughed it off like it was nothing. I didn't want that. I did not want him to make a joke out of my stupid feelings.

'It has been really strange for me... after valentine's day' I spoke, carefully and not meeting his gaze but I knew the intensity that they held. There was a short pause and I drew in a breath and continued the lunatic confession. 'I never had a real valentine's day... they always have been normal and you are probably going to laugh at this but for me, the last valentine's wasn't normal. It was different and... Well... special. It is stupid because I barely know you and it was all in the spur of the moment. It's not like any of us planned for it or anything... but I didn't quite forget it and it's been inside my mind since last month. I can't get you out of my mind which is why I don't want to see you... because I know you're probably going to joke about these feelings which I know are quite dim-witted but even if they are... I don't want them to be ridiculed... especially by you' I ended the long speech and sighed.

'Are you psychic or something?' he asked. Startled at the response, I raised my head and looked at his handsome face in complete bafflement. It was as if he hadn't heard any of the things I had said.

'Why do you ask?' I asked.

'Because you predicted how I'd react to your feelings... and you were so sure about them' he replied, his facial expressions soft but fear and nervousness rose inside me. And my knees started to turn into jelly. 'Even if you are a psychic, you're a pathetic one' he laughed and the frustration that had piled up inside my mind began to erode away. I smiled at his laugh.

'So, you don't think it's stupid?' I asked, sighing.

'Of course I do, but then, I'd be stupid too since you've described my emotions perfectly well' he chuckled. I had forgotten how to breathe. Did he just say that he felt the same?

'D-don't j-joke with me' I stuttered.

'I'm not joking' he replied in sincerity but I was in denial.

'I don't know why I can't believe that' I said slowly.

'Do you want me to convince you through my words?' he asked politely and I nodded.

'I can't forget you Geet, ever... not because of the small kiss and dance you had with me but because of what you gave me that night. It was more than just company. It was something out of the ordinary. I didn't forget you from then onwards... You completely had me obsessed... I searched for you, I came out here on the same beach after every two days but I still couldn't find you. I drove along the road more than ten times a week but luck wasn't with me. It's a big city and I knew that it might have been possible that you'd have changed your whereabouts but I still looked for you... I didn't work properly, I didn't behave properly and the only one I can blame was... you'

I couldn't have possibly explained my feelings upon hearing those words.

I smiled and then laughed. 'We are so stupid'

'I agree' he agreed cheerfully. 'Hm, but I like being stupid...'

'And that means...?' I asked, a mischievous smile playing upon my lips.

'That we'll have another valentine's day and that we're going to be stupid again but this time... we wouldn't go away from each other like we did last time...'

'But Valentine's still a year away,' I reminded him, stepping closer to him.

'Does that change anything? We're still going to celebrate it today, it's the fourteenth of March' he grinned.

I smiled back at him, my hands trembling with nervousness and he saw them shaking. Taking my cold hands in his, he squeezed them gently. 'You don't have to be so nervous, it's just like the first time' he pulled me towards him, snaking his arm around my waist and pressing his lips against mine. I didn't care if we were in a public beach and I did not care if my friends or Meera would have witnessed me kissing the most handsome guy out there... all I did care was of the immense affection that rose inside me when he kissed me and of those shivers that were sent up my spine. 'Is this... love at first sight? Or just some stupid crush?' I asked breathlessly as we pulled away, my arm still draped around his nape. 'That question will be answered soon enough' he deeply chuckled and pressed his lips on mine once again.

Of course though, we knew the answer.

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Silver.
P.S, comments are appreciated 😳
Edited by silver. - 14 years ago
NoorFatima thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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resss..
yippie
*edit*
very well written
👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
that was amazing..
(now dont u dare say disagree wid me) 😉😆
would love to read more of your work
do Pm me if you write something
Noor
P.S the auther's note was funny 😆
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😛 I wouldn't be too excited!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow... that was awesome....
sigh... and so cute..... 😃
i hope u write more stories like that......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG this is amazing!!

Please update soon and Pm me :)


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