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Posted: 14 years ago
Now begins office fun in my track..I will be updating them soon as I need time to write them...office fun and if u and anyone else have suggestions,can post on this link and I will incorporate it with your name and reference as an idea from so and so..in the episodes
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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode 61:

Scene 1: Maansi is in Maan's arms,eye lock and flashes a moment from flashback when Geet came to Maan's office and in similar fashion Maan

and Geet clashed and were in each other's arms,Maansi too is looking into eyes of Maan.Maan realises he was holding Maansi and in hurry

leaves her and Maansi falls down,Maansi feels insulted and gets up in furious mood.

Maansi: Tum,tumhari itni himmat ki mera picha karte karte yahan tak aayegaye,mujhe apni baahon mein liya aur phir gira diya,,aaj mein tumhe

sabak sikhake rahungi,just wait and watch,I will make sure you go behind the bars,tum aaj jail jakar rahoge,mein aaj tak chup rahi yeh sochte

hue ki shayad yeh ittefaq tha ki tum mere saamne aajate ho,lekin aaj kaunsa bahana hai?aur yeh mat kehna ki yeh office tumhara hai,yeh

cabin tumhari hai.

Maan: Aur agar mein yeh kahu ki tumhara andaza bilkul sahi hai toh.

Maansi Laughs and makes fun of Maan and feels Maan was such a smart chap.

Maansi:Ohhh toh ab meri idea mujhi par,isse pehle ki mein tumhe dhakke markar bahar nikalwadu aur tumhe police ke hawale kar du,nikal jao

mere cabin se,Get lost before I throw you out of my office.

Everyone outside is worried who is shouting inside,Adi and pinky are surprised to hear conversation between Maan and Maansi and are

worried to confront Maan since they feel Maan and Maansi have already confronted.

Maan: Tumhara cabin,tumhara office,hmm theek hai,bulayo security ko,dekhte hai kaun aaj kisse dhakke markar bahar nikalwata hai.

Maansi: Security,Bond yahan aao...

Hearing Maansi calling,everyone rush towards Maan's cabin,Adi and pinky are hiding and Sulagana and others are surprised..

Maansi asks the guards to throw Maan outside the office...

Looking at Maan everyone is surprised at what Maansi was saying...

Maansi: Dekh kya rahe ho,iss aadmi ko dhakke markar bahar nikal do..

Worried guards wish Maan Good Morning Maan sir...

Hearing that Maansi is stunned and slowly turns here head towards Maan and is shown mummering

Maansi: Maan Singh Khurana

Maan : Ji haa mein hu Maan Singh Khurana..

Maan shouts and expresses dissatisfaction over selection of Maansi in the office and questions who selected her,Sulagana who feels Maansi

wud be out before she cud compete her,points at Adi...

Maan sights Adi who is hiding behind and is surprised to see Sulagana pointing at Adi,he asks him to meet him in other room,while moving out

he informs Maansi that she must have got an idea who will be thrown out of the office.

Maansi: Ismein Adi Sir ki koi galti nahi hai,mein sach mein nahi jaanti thi ki tum yahan ke boss ho aur tum Maan Singh Khurana ho..

Hearing that while turning and going outside Maan turns back and feels resemblance between Maansi and Geet,with one moment from

flashback shown...the scene from first meet between Maan and Geet.

Maansi feels she has badly messed the situation and feels embarrassed..and also in her eyes you can feel she is about to cry since she is

already fed up with her unfortunate luck and cant beleive the person who followed her was Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan looks down and moves out..Maansi is worried and standing still..

Scene 2: Maan is furious and questions Adi how cud he despite knowing the fact,Adi informs Maan that even he did not have an idea and by

the time he did Maansi was already selected and since she was reference of Venu he never thought of it and followed Maan's guidelines..

Hearing Venu's name Maan feels he wud be in trouble if Venu comes to know that he followed Maansi in Delhi and then he might question Maan

which wud lead to critical circumstances,since he did not want anyone to know about Geet and after Maansi's entry he cannot afford to do

so.

Adi asks Maan how did he know about Maansi,Maan moves out without saying a word since he is worried about Maansi revealing the truth..

Scene 3: Maansi goes to her place and feels her dreams were shattered and come those moments from flashback when she was expressing

delight over her selection in Khurana Constructions..Maansi who feels life let her down again is shown cleaning her desk and arrives Sulagana

who offers help to Maansi sarcastically and smiles and goes away...

Scene 4; Pinky comes in and asks Maansi to have patience and not worry,Maan wont throw her out,but Maansi is very determined person and

informs pinky that she wud never ever be able to take any act which is against her self respect.

Maansi: Nahi pinky,isse pehle ki Maan mujhe office se dhakke markar nikaal de mein khud hi yahan se chali jati hu...

( Maan who is about to enter the cabin listens to Maansi and her conversation with pinky)

Meine aaj tak aisa koi kaam nahi kiya jiske liye mujhe sharminda hona pade aur agar aaj Maan mujhe bahar nikal dega toh mein apne hi nazron

se gir jaungi aur woh bhi uss galti ke liye jo anjaane mein hui hai..

Pinky feels sorry for Maansi and tells her she shud wait till Maan comes in...Maansi feels she shud share with pinky about how Maan followed

her..

Break: Just when Maansi is about to ask pinky,Maan comes in to avoid Maansi from saying pinky about what he did..

Pinky is still looking at Maan and makes her move outside,Maansi has a look at Maan and feels he will not spare her,Maan walks towards

Maansi.

Maan: Yeh kya hai?

Maansi: Dikhta nahi samaan pack kar rahi hu..

Maan feels irritated but controls his feelings..

Maan: Kyu?

Maansi looks at Maan with a question mark...

Maansi: Isse se pehle ki tum mujhe bahar nikalwado mein khud hi yahan se nikaljati hu...

Maan: Aur agar mein yeh kahu ki tumhe kahin bhi jane ki koi jarurat nahi hai toh?

Maansi feels something was wrong...

Maansi: Mein Samjhi nahi?

Maan: Tum yahan mere saath kaam karogi lekin meri ek Shart hai..

Maansi expresses surprise..

Break:

Before Maan cud say anything,maansi herself expresses and informs Maan she wud not say Venu about how Maan followed her..

Maansi: kyu yahi shart haina?

Maan is left stunned..

the episode ends with Maan stunned and Maansi looking at Maan with a question mark,since she had stuck bull's eye..



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Posted: 14 years ago
yes bro we with u pls continue we r waiting for the next part.......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Episode 62:

Scene1: Maan is stunned how Maansi read his mind which reminds him of Geet and how she use to read Maan's mind....a scene where Maan is stunned and flash scenes from past...

Scene 2; Maansi is not surprised looking at Maan's expressions..

Maansi: Tumhari shakal batarahi hai ki mein bilkul sahi keh rahi hu,tum jaisa kamjor insaan aur soch bhi kya sakta hai,mujhe toh achamba iss baat ka ho raha hai ki tum Maan Singh Khurana ho,tum "The Maan Singh Khurana ho" jiski baare mein meine itna kuch suna tha..

Maansi finishes and turns and speak Maan

Maan: Haa,tumne sahi socha,sahi socha ki mujhe iss baat ki chinta nahi ki Venu kya kahega agar tumne usse yeh batadiya ki mein tumhara picha kar raha tha,mein bas picha karne ki wajah nahi bata sakta..

Maansi: Kyu,aakhir aisi kaunsi wajah hai jo tumhe itna pareshaan kar rahi hai...

Maan: Mein..(He stops and comes in bond to inform that Adi was waiting for her for meeting)

Maansi informs bond she was no more an employee and was leaving..

Maan informs bond to tell Adi,Maansi wud come and wud come in a moment,bond leaves...

Maan: Tumne apna resignation nahi diya aur meine ab tak accept nahi kiya,isiliye abhi tum employee ho aur tumhara kaam hai iss meeting ko attend karna aur apna adhura kaam pura karna..

Scene3: Maansi feels annoyed and moves out for a meeting and follows her Maan,meeting scenario where Maan and Maansi continue to stare at each other...meeting ends and during the entire meeting Maan sees Geet in Maansi as if she was giving the presentation..Adi confirms with Maan if things were fine..Maan who did not hear a single word asks Adi to finalise the things and give the final report to him..

Maansi rushes out immediately after the clients leave..making Maan feel Maansi wont wait..

Scene 4:Adi questions Maan if he knew about Maansi before,Maan confirms it but also clarifies that he did not know she was Venu's friend but he did meet her in Delhi and folllowed her since he was confused..Adi informs Maan that pinky had seen her alongwith Reashu but he kept it a secret since he wanted to confirm it himself and tell him but before he cud inform him Maansi confronted Maan..

Break:Pinky informs Maan and Adi that Maansi was leaving,Adi feels Maan shud do something but Maan says Adi he bothered least if Maansi wanted to leave,it was good for him and everyone who knew Geet.
Maansi enters maan's cabin who is discussing something with Adi,pinky,Sulagana and Sanjog..Maansi hands over her resignation and assures Maan she wud consider they never met before...Sulagana and others feel something was fishy..
Maan looks at Maansi moving out and feels as if Geet was going far from him...

Break;Just when Maansi is about to get out of the main door,Maan stops her saying..

Maan: Toh tum darr gayi,darr gayi yeh sochkar ki mein tumhara boss hu...mujhe toh laga tha ki tum professional ho aur challenge accept karna tumhein accha lagta hai,lekin musibat dekhi nahi ki bhaag nikli...

Maansi turns back feeling provoed ..

Episode ends with Maansi and Maan both staring at each otheer where Maansi is provoked and Maan has a fake smile..

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Episode 63:

Scene 1; Maansi listens to Maan's provoking words,stares at him and leaves..and Maan feels he was hurt which is observed by Adi and he feels Maan was searching Geet in Maansi...

Scene 2; Adi gets a call from Venu confirming how things were and if Maansi was there since she wasn't picking his call,Adi informs Venu She had left and resigned..Venu feels that was surprising and thinks of meeting Maansi..

Scene 3: Maan enters his cabin and feels the pain of missing Geet and questions why was he feeling bad when Maansi left,as if Geet had left and he was feeling the pain..as if he did not want to miss Maansi and after loosing Geet...

Scene 4: Sulagana is happy as others are least bothered and feel bad Maansi had to pay for her mistake which was a misunderstanding..Sulagana while feeling happy senses Maan and Maansi had something to hide but feels good since Maansi was no more there in the office....and she felt insecured about her,even though she was there only for a day..Sanjog since he has a crush on Sulagana supports her but others just move out feeling bad for Maansi..and feeling Maan wasn't the right boos or a good boss to work for..

Scene 5: Maan informs Adi that he was leaving for the day as he wasn't keeping well,Sulagana follows Maan to confirm if he was ok and if she shud drop him home,Maan with a glare thanks Sulagana and requests her to concentrate on work as she was carrying huge responsibility..

Scene 6: Adi has a look at Maan and both Adi and pinky wish Maansi comes back and somehow Maan and Maansi get along well...

Scene 7: Maan enters and dadi feels good to see Maan coming early but a bit disturbed..Maan moves to his gym or practice place...and dadi is surprised to see that...

Break: Maan in his all time best scene...Maan practicing martial arts or kungfu what ever he does..and feeling the pain of Maansi leaving and feels she had insulted him despite him apologising and trying to calm things down...
Venu reaches Maansi's place with a question mark on his face....he enters and greets everyone and both Maansi and Venu move out to open place..before Venu cud say anything Maansi tells Venu she did not want to work in Khurana Constructions...

Break: Venu tells Maansi he wont question her decision since she was independent but she shud ask herself if she had valid reasons for leaving Khurana Constructions...

The episode ends with Maansi thinking over Venu's comment and recollecting two moments,when Maan apologised her for following her and when he saved her from Bhaiyaji...and men


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Episode 64:

Scene 1: Maan stops his excercise realising he wud never be able to overcome the fact that Maansi was like Geet and feels he was indeed helpless..dadi feels Maan was missing Geet and to change the topic...and divert Maan's attention she informs Maan that she was feeling alone and felt like visiting office quiet regulary only to help Maan,Maan objects and tells dadi that he did not want her to take stress at this age,,dadi tells Maan she wasn't coming there to work but to see how her new office was set up..Maan smiles and welcomes dadi...

Scene 2: Conversation between Venu and Maansi..Venu tells Maansi he was worried about Maansi becoz he really considers her as a good friend and did not want her to work in an organisation where there is no work culture,despite there been many good companies around to work but he wanted her to work in Khurana Constructions only for a reason that Maan was a very good person even better than him...
Venu leaves Maansi with a request to reconsider her decision...

Scene 3:Next day,Maansi goes to her old office and confronts Bhaiyaji who for the first time feels asahmed,looks down and moves out without even looking at Maansi as if he was afraid...Maansi feels the difference and feels she had over reacted since Maan had apologised and above all was indeed a good person and if he had a reason which he did not want to share then it was none of her bussiness to interfere...

Scene 4: Maansi feels guilty of overreacting and feels she had messed the situation as Maan wont take her back,she beleives it was her instant and impatient behaviour which had kept her away from a deserved success...

Scene 5: Maan reaches office and recollects memories of day before and regrets his words when he said Maansi to rethink who wud throw whom outside the office making Maan feel he was wrong and had he not said it,Maansi wud have stayed back..

Break: Maansi submits her resignation to her boss who feels she had taken the right decision and motivates her to move forward since she was right...Maansi feels good after her meeting with boss and makes a move outside...wishing every one,her collegues...feeling happy and confident that she wud make it..

Break: Maansi makes a move outside thinking she had resigned but then she did not even knew if Maan wud take her back...after resigning in 2 days and above all rejecting Maan and ignoring Maan's attempts to calm things down..

Episode ends with Maansi thinking about if Maan wud take her back and Maan feeling he cud have avoided Maansi leaving the office.

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Episode 65:

Scene 1: Maan is in his cabin and Adi comes in..he asks Maan if he was upset about Maansi leaving since it was evident on his face,Maan informs Adi that for a while he did feel bad becoz he was foolish to search Geet in someone who just looks like Geet and feels what happened was for Good since he wud have found difficult to answer dadi and his kids questions becoz Maansi's presence wud have only added concerns for him,Adi questions Maan why he tried to provoke Maansi and retain her..Maan looks at Adi and tells him he thought emotionally and it was difficult for him to accept the fact that Maansi was look alike of Geet,which made life even more difficult for him..

Scene 2:Maan gets a call from Venu who apologises Maan on behalf of Maansi and feels sorry since even he was surprised at Maansi's decision,Maan asks Venu to relax and informs him it was ok if his friend did not want to work in his organisation...

Scene 3: Dadi enters questioning Maan who did not want to work with Maan Singh Khurana..Maan diverts the topic and informs Venu he wud call later as dadi had come...Maan informs dadi a reference by Venu who was selected but left immediately...dadi feels the reference was stupid to leave Khurana Constructions,Maan calms dadi down and warns her from reacting and requests her to enjoy herself in the office as she was not supposed to worry about other matters...

Scene 4: Maansi takes blessings from God and feels nervous as she felt she was wrong and was going back to apologise and hope she wud get her job back which she gave away without thinking its importance...She hopes Maan forgives her....while she is moving out she informs her mom that she was going back to apologise and wished Maan forgived her..Maansi's mom is surprised to see change in Maansi as she had never cared damn about anything but felt good at her maturity...

Scene 5: After talking to Maan,Venu calls up Maansi just to confirm what was her next plan and he wud help her out,he offers Maansi to become his personal secretary as it wud be fun and she cud stay with him the whole day and help him impress Bakul along with work..Maansi denies with a smile and thanks Venu for calming her down and informs venu she was going back to apologise Maan for her decision..Venu is all excited but Maansi warns her to keep it a secret as she really felt bad about her decision...

Break:Venu promises Maansi with a wicked smile as if he had ever heard to her and kept promises..he calls up Maan who is travelling for a meeting and does not pick up his call,after trying thrice,Venu calls up Adi and informs him that Maansi was coming back,listening to Maansi coming back and dadi already in office Adi gets nervous and starts talking in his trademark style...

Break: Maansi enters Maan's office and everyone is surprised to see her back,Sulagana feels why was she back?

Maan calls back Venu and to his surprise when venu informs him that Maansi was in office,Maan gets worried about dadi's presence in office...

The episode ends with Maansi coming in Maan's office,dadi already there in Maan's cabin and Adi rushing back to office to avoid confrontation...and Maan worried after learning from Venu that Maansi was back in office..

All four in one picture...
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Posted: 14 years ago
do reply for the new office track coming up
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Posted: 14 years ago
did u like the episodes and did u read them all dear..do comment on 65 episodes written and if this can be the future track in geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Instead of taking leap,send Geet to heaven and bring Maansi..
How?
Read this:
Maaneet's eternal love story relived yet again.
Leap: One Guru Mantra which was discovered or rather invented by Ekta Mata to drag her series forward and was pathetically used by many other makers..
Give us a break makers,we hate leap as the main plot for running the series forward,we have a better and logical plot with even more fun in it..
Read,Maaneet's eternal love story relived yet again you will know how to generate the same excitement without leap and above all scope for a fresh new story connected with actual Maaneet love story.

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