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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Hola twinnie
omgg can i say i love you? like i love you sosososo much? i really really love youuuuuu!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH pweez tell me i am not dreaming!!....this was a freaking happy ending?😲.....OHH-EMM-GEE, no wayyy, i gotta be dreaming!!😆....i don't believe this....actually, in the ff thread some people told me to read your latest one (sshhh they don't know i HAVE to read it anyway, regardless of the ending, cuz i will be dead meat if i don't😆) but ya, i was told this is a cute one and i was like omggg no wayyy lol....and umm WOW....did i say i wuvv youuu?😳
would you be surprised if i said this has got to be one of fav pieces?😆.....really twinnie, its not cuz of the happy ending (okay, maybe a teeny tiny bit) but just the title and the family and the kids....omggg u had everything i consider as an adorablee story so umm duhhh, i heart lovedd it!😳
omggggggggg Kushi is such a cutiepieeeee...ahhhhhhhhh i wanna pull her cheeks!!! *muffin jumps up and down in excitement*....she is like a mini me, well excluding the sweetness part cuz i was (*cough am cough*) a very naughty kid but other than that, ya was like kushi....always wanna be picked up and mess up in the kitchen and what not!😆....awww the "me still a baby" dialogue was like major awwww.....wow, it feels like foreverr since i have given a good awww in ur stories....haha jk twinnie....how can i not enjoy this one precious present you have given me?😆😉
oyeee Rahul ke bache....apni mom se aisa kehte hain?....good thing maan taught him some manners or i would have shown him girl power lol....but even then, awww he is such a cutiepie the way he got the flower for Geet😳.....what a cute little family!
ahhhh one of fav parts in your stories....the last paragraph....cuz it always relates to the title and leaves you with an awwww feeling....his mishti *hayeee*😍.....ohh man, i am crying tears of joy here cuz i still can't believe this was a happy ending....someone pinch me😆
love you twinnie and thank you soooo much for this.....i really loved it!😳
P.S. jyada jhaad pe chadne ki zaroorat nahi hain😡....cuz i will be pissed as hell in the other ffs!😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
JAZ..sacchi bata who wrote this..it cant be u..i died laughing in this one..i bet yeh kisi aur ne likha hai..u are a saddist...and this is so happy happy..sacchi bata..and me loved it..when rahul says.."Girls are really strong.." i just died laughing in that..why cant u wrte like this..remmeber next time u give me sad one i will get back at u lik i did last time..(evil laugh)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
^^ kasam se yaar...i did it...i wrote it...khabi khabi...i can write happy...but uss mein itna maza nahin aata...so i dont do it often...he he

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
see i told u u were a saddist..hehe..
and when we gettg HOME COMING..u planning to end the way i ended the OS ya changing it..i am toh expecting same ending..hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
expect what you must...my lips are sealed...vaise...you havent read "Without My Mishti" have you...ha ha...issi liyeh him still safe...

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
JAZ; whts without my MISHTI?????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

OMG!

hats of to u Jaz.....
Havent read your other creations yet, but m bowled over by this one completely........
loved it......
it was soooooo...romantic and awesome.......
do pm me when u write next......
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i was thinking about this OS the other day and had to come find it and read it again! lol
keep up the awesome writing Jaz!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
wat an amazing OS
sorry 4 commenting l8
awww maan was so sweet dat he wont even let his own son disrespect geet
👏👏👏
👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Loved it . . . K . . . when khushi said me still baby i wanted to get in the story n pull her cheeks . . . kids can be such cuties . . . it was simplicity at its best . . . i mean well the concept though simple was beautiful . . . respect for his woman comes above all . . . that is what i loved the most abt it and well, the way u penned down father son convo i had a smile reading it, it was realistic above all . . . the way he said he'd like to kick a kid's butt i was like man this is the Maan we love . . . and hell yeah husbands should fear their wives . . . sleeping on the couch . . . do wives really do that, poor hubby's . . . u have any idea how much i love spicy food . . . and pineer tikka masala with gravy is YUMILICIOUS . . . although my mother really doesnt get how can i eat so much of chilli but well i dont really like sweets . . . and i wonder how mom can eat jalebi's with chatni . . . i was litearlly gaping at her when she ate it and she was like try it its tasty . . . i loved the brief insight u gave into their past . . . last but not least loved it . . .

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