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Sorry for the late reply! Have been a little busy, what with winter smstr kick-starting tomorrow =\Ahh well.Back to your story LOLWell, I'm liking what I see here..😳Although, I do have some questions. So, Geet is 19-20 you said? And Ishan is 5?How does all of that work?Geet had Ishaan when she was 14-15?!😲I also like the fact that you colour-coded diff. characters..but it can be a bit hard on the eye.You have Maan paralyzed in this, which is really sad. =[Geet is cute as usual.Dev-Naintara sure are diff. from the serial. But that is a breath of fresh air for me..😃Ishaan is one cheeky kid. LMAO.One suggestion though - you sometimes add your own comment to the story in brackets. That kind of takes away from the story for the reader. It's sort of distracting.But, like I said, I'm loving the plot here! =DP.S. I like both Arjun-Arohi & Mayank-Nupur. Either works for moi. =D
heyy thnx and no i mentioned on the CS that geet is 25 so is maan. haila u thought she had ishaan when she was 15 or something? haww 😲 though it does gimme and idea😆 lolz and i just thought the colors wud make it a little nice mayb i shud just color code ishaan maan and geet? and for everybody else use black? and Dev NT well u see they r eveil almost everywhere and i really like NT's pretend nice self lolz. and about my comment hey it's not fair that u guys get to comment on the part and i don't! is it? lolz just ignore the parts in red if it distracts u lolz. and well there seems to b a lot of ppl wanting Arjuhi so I'll probz use them lolz
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