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Posted: 14 years ago
Here's another scene from my fic:


Maan walks into the outhouse when he hears a loud scream and saw Geet rushing from the kitchen.


Seeing him she yelled "Maan" and flew into his arms. She jumped up, wrapped her legs around his waist, clung to his neck tightly and buried her head in his shoulder. Maan was taken aback by this strange behaviour and holding the back of her head, he brought it forward to look into her eyes.


"What is the matter, Geet?" he asked her with concern.


She did not say anything but with fear clearly written in her eyes, she pointed her hand to the kitchen. Wondering what could have scared his pretty little fiance so much that she hopped on to him like a baby, he held her tightly against him in the same position and walked to the kitchen. He looked around and couldn't see anything unusual.


"What is it, Geet? Everything seems to be normal. What are you scared of?" he asked her in a gentle tone.


With her face still buried in his shoulder, she pointed to the wall in front of him. His eyes followed her finger and settled on a big fat lizard on the wall, tut-tuting to let people know his presence. He seemed to be pleased to be ruling the kitchen walls.


"You are scared of the lizard?" asked Maan with a mixture of astonishment and amusement. He already knew she was terrified of cockroaches but he did not know she was also terrified of their predators.


Geet nodded her head, refusing to look at him or the lizard.


Maan couldn't resist smiling at his timid fiance. He gently put her down and holding her by her waist, he kept looking around the other walls.


"What are you searching for?" asked Geet in a small voice, her head turned up to him. "Do you want something to get rid of it? There is a stick behind the door. Don't hit it though - just use it to threaten it so that it will go away."


"No, I am not looking for a stick. I am looking for Mrs.Lizard."


She looked at him in confusion.


"Mrs.Lizard?" she repeated.


"Yeah, Mr.Lizard's wife. I presume she must be around somewhere here too!"


Geet let out another scream and jumped up on him again.


"Why do you want to look for another lizard?" she asked, pouting her lips.


"Well, if there are two of them, then there are chances that there will be some baby lizards as well," he said in a matter of fact tone.


"Do you want to chase them all?" she asked hopefully.


"Chase them? Are you crazy? Why would I want to chase my allies?"


"Your allies?" asked Geet in puzzlement.


"Yeah, see they managed to get you on my hip like this. I owe them one, don't I?"


He then turned to the lizard and said in a serious tone, "Don't worry Mr.Lizard, I'll get you some fat flies to feed on tomorrow. Don't ever leave the kitchen wall when my fiance and I are around."


Geet punched him and sliding down from his hip, she stomped her feet and tried to run out screaming, "You will not get your breakfast, Mr.Maan Khurana."


Maan laughed out loud.

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Achcha yeh ek naughty idea:
After the suhaag raat, Geet wakes up and see Maan beside her, she blushes remembers the whole night, she was about to stand up, then her hair is stucked on Maan's hand, she comes near him trying let her hair off his hand, she successed, then she turns around going to take a shower, but then Maan grab her hand, she turns around and see him open his eyes and give her a naughty smile, he pulls her towards him and tell her as he did with the bindi one, telling her bemaani karne jaa rahe hoon, she says bemaani, he says haan meri haaq cheena jaa rahe hoon, she is confused, then he said, akele nahane jaa rahe hoon, then she pushes him and try to run away, but he runs after her and carry her towards the bathroom and both, eheem eheem 😆😉☺️
Later on they come out where he carries her too where both r wet ☺️, they get surprised to see daadi is there 😆, telling the the office staff is waiting down to congratulate them, etc...........
Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii Jyothi,
Nice post. Actually loved ur starting. yes Mods also having right to have fun.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Opti: U r very expressive writer, I like reading ur scenes, coz they r so detailed and it's as we r watching the scene, u are super writer.......
I hope they show the chipkali scene.......
Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice idea, opti and temorocks😍👏👍🏼☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely post jyoti!!!!!!!!! Am wid u!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Prithvisanyo:Another fab Maaneet baby scene👍🏼...all these scenes r going to b wonderful to watch after marriage😳
@Bri:Loved the finger sucking scene....☺️
@Opti:I m becoming a pankha of your FFs now😆😳...I will say god bless that lizard😆☺️...I remember earlier they showed a similar cockroach scene in the outhouse😉..this time they can do it with lizard and in a more passionate way🤣😳
@Zee:Yup the morning after the first night is always spl...I m hoping to see such a scene u hv described☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love all the ideas and the rain dance is the best😆
Opti ur ideas are great and very well written ..CVS can just copy same to same..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Jyoti: Yeah, the suhaag raat and morning after it is so special, they have to show it......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spshastr

I love all the ideas and the rain dance is the best😆

Opti ur ideas are great and very well written ..CVS can just copy same to same..😆

As much I was angry at the BDs and I kept after it, u seem after the rain scene 😆, we r so similar 😆
I agree with u, Opti is a super writer, I hope that the creatives takes her scenes and all others scenes as well, we r not satisfied with only one or two, we r always satisfied with endless Maaneet's romance 😉😆☺️

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