Maine Pyaar Kiya # 13 : I am learning to be on my

goldenball thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#1
I really liked the track which CVs had introduced where Geet tries to stand on her own.. I have a strong feeling that they couldn't handle it properly..hence closed it fast.
But this story is about Geet's journey and her struggle.. I see Geet in a very vulnerable state now.. though Maan is with her.. but now the track will open from Maan's side of story and many secrets will be out..again she will be back to square one.. (this is my thinking of future tracks)
So i always wanted her to be on her own...
PS - Those are reading my MPK series regulalrly, knows that she is working at IndianPaints.
Please put your feedback.
-
GB
Maine Pyaar Kiya # 13 : I am learning to be on my own

Geet was proudly looking at last month sales for IndianPaints(IP).. and she was very happy.. smiling... it was above her expectations...

She wanted to share the news with Maan first...IP is back on track.. and she was feeling very proud..
She wanted to hear his words..
She remembered her promise to him.."Please allow me to first prove myself,, give me some time.. I want to marry after I do it on my own.. I want you to feel proud of me" and today she has just tasted the first success..

Maan understood her well and didn't question..

She remembered the day when Maan dragged her out of KC.. .. the bitter fight they had.. now she doesn't want to remember it any more.. it was more of her fault.. she should not have concluded that Maan will try to use her.. she should have not insulted him in front of everyone at KC.. how much he could take.. and she knew his temper..and she really repented.. whatever happened that day... but then she cannot forget,,, how vulnerable she felt while walking out of KC.. walking out of Maan's life... she once again felt at the mercy of fate... again starting her life.. she had no one to fall back on.. she had no education.. no job experience .. only few months at KC as secretary.and she was no surprised when Yash offered her Nanny role.. what else she could have got... and then no place to live also when Dadi had thrown her out..
and then she realized one very important lesson.. she has to be on her own first.. she has to prove to herself.. that she can survive on her own ability..

She never had bitter feeling for Maan for their fight.. no question at all.. In her heart she knew.. their love is very much stronger and they will be back soon.. no matter what,, they can never stay away from each other....she can never imagine a single day without him. and she knew asame for Maan also.. how can he think of not seeing her..but then she was becoming totally dependent on him.. and this feeling was troubling her.... is she becoming liability for Maan ?

Till now life has been totally unpredictable for her.. She never had thought she will be doing a job.. staying in delhi.. carrying a child...going against her family.. a fake marriage.. falling in love with most arrogant man.. everything unbelievable... and now she doesn't want to plan anything.. she had no more faith that all her dreams will come true.. and her survival on her on own is the first thing on her mind...nowdays...

Maan had questioned her need of continuing at IndianPaints.. he wanted her to join back KC.. but then she wanted to do something on her own.. yes IndianPaints is also under Maan.. but then she had more responsibilty...and she wanted to really do it on her own....

and today she is very happy to taste the success.. first most .. she wanted to share it with Maan... but before that let me share with my staff...

She called up her trusted three..

"Pandeji.. Kya aap inhe bataa sakte hain.. hamaara kaam kaisa chal rahan hain..."

"Geet madam... hamara sales last mahine ka target per hain.. ur is mahine bhi hum strong hain.. " Pandeyji proudly open his laptop and shared the numbers.

"Geet madam,,, kya hamain celebrate nahin karna chayie.. ? " Romeo.. looking forward to partytime.. as always..

"Haan karna to chayie lekin pehle Maan Sir se poonch le.... Party ya Picnic ?".. Picnic also sounded good..

"Maan , where are you, mujhe baat karni hain aap se..? " She called him while parking her scooty at KC..

"Maan aapko pata hain,.. last month.. IP ke results kiten ache hain... our is mahine ke bhi......gjahsdgjs.agdsagd............ (no closing quotes..) she was going non-stop..

"Geet, tum itne se khush hon.. abhi to bahut kuch karna hain.... agle mahine tumhain loss bhi ho sakta hain...be careful.." ..Maan was looked at the brimming Geet.. so much happiness on her face.. and he was lost in her.... He was very much happy for her.. but then no way he can show his pleasure.

"Maan aapko pata hain.. hum ek picnic organize kar rahain hain..aapko bi chal na padega.."

"Geet, tumne budget ka plan kiya hain.. ? Indian paints kee halat to tum janti ho..." .. he was now sounding like her boss.

"Sir jyada kharch nahin aayega... hum sab paise de rahein hain " now he had no say.. he knew she has decided.. so she will go..

"OK geet..but don't expect me..".. he didn't wanted to go on a picnic.... whole day ?

"Maan.... aapko to chalna hee padega.." Geet thought smiling at him..

Please refer to following link for previous posts :
Maine Pyaar Kiya - Index file
Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

2.6k

Users

6

Likes

32

Frequent Posters

Aarthi_01 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
awesome part...so Maaneet is going to go for picnic...tat wud be nice to wait for... update the next part soon
vrsharma thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#3
sure. maan will go to that picnic
Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
grt update...u toached a topic which i think is ness for geets growtn as an individual...she def needs to be self reliant...hopefully the next one will be a fun one after this serious update...
goldenball thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

awesome part...so Maaneet is going to go for picnic...tat wud be nice to wait for... update the next part soon

Thanks.. let us see if Picnic happens or not.. Maan will go if itt happens
goldenball thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: vrsharma

sure. maan will go to that picnic

THanks let us see. I hope he will go..
goldenball thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

grt update...u toached a topic which i think is ness for geets growtn as an individual...she def needs to be self reliant...hopefully the next one will be a fun one after this serious update...

She has to be on her own.. If you have seen today's episode.. she looks so helpless. again getting trapped. She will be again in middle.. Not married and then married also.. peculiar situation..
jazzerette thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Very well written...Geet's independence must be brought about...it'll only make her more stronger...yet another track the CVs have ignored in the show so far.
Loquacious_Aash thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: goldenball

She has to be on her own.. If you have seen today's episode.. she looks so helpless. again getting trapped. She will be again in middle.. Not married and then married also.. peculiar situation..

nope yet to atch......but read the update...you right...poor geet never knows whats in her destiny.....so she needs to be prepared..:)
goldenball thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Very well written...Geet's independence must be brought about...it'll only make her more stronger...yet another track the CVs have ignored in the show so far.

Yes , i think they were under pressure to unite them.... but then they lost track of Geet's journey.. I feel she is so helpless now. and this whole love story has now shifted from cute office scenes to family drama.....

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt24/pg36- 13sept

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

KASAM tere pyaar ki/PT4/5/pg29/32/11 feb

Can anyone love to another person to this extent, he killed someone... Can anyone love to another person to this extent, he fall so low in

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Tere Pyaar Mein Marjawa/pt16/17-pg29/31- 1 feb

previous thread - which get closed now you can read here - click here

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".