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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

i almost wrote main tumse pyar karti hoon and changed it back... i was in such a flow .. i forgot the characterisation.. thank god i realised in time.. warna you wouldnt have quoted it ... thanks ...

Originally posted by: .sireesha.
Thats Fabulous Dear
Loved it sooooooooooooooo much

Loved Geet's Confession...............

Loved this Line..............

humara rishta jhoota nahi hai '. Main aapse pyar karti hoon'

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

cant say .. it could be .. and it could be not ... the opinions are divided.. eitherways we cant decide before monday .. thats why i got restless and wrote this...

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
really good!

and was the rooptera mastana sequence actually a dream?

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗🤗like i said to Pooj ... u guys just love me so much .. you are always encouraging.. par honestly .. this thought had been running in my head all evening.. i finally had to pen it down.. and i wasnt sure of the logic ...glad it worked

Originally posted by: muniza75
Nihuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yeh tu ne kya kiya, omg such a lovely part, awesome, very logical...I hope we will see something like that....

Love you darling for this awesome, dawesome part...Atleast now we can spend our weekend with this lovely OS of you....

Muniza

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#24

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
Like i said DD .. thats for you to imagine... issey aagey main kuch nahi bolungi ... if i write something, id confine u to my thoughts ... we live in a free world honey ....
well i seriously want him to do that ... though she has her reasons to be the way she is..anyway this force, nok-jhok and angst is what makes Maaneet what they are and i love that about them!!

Maan ka anger, Geet ki innocence, Maan ka protection, Geet ki ignorence, Maan ka passion, Geet ki hesitation, Maan ka harshness and Geet ka determination is what makes them do jism ek jaan....they complete each other in every possible way. Man I can't wait to see them tie the wedding knot and the story to follow thence.....they are going to be the BEST couple anyone has seen in the world....

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

well i know .. thats why its an OS and i wanted to end it all happy

Originally posted by: uzmam1
Niha!

If only girl!! if only ..

in don ki prem kahani .. inti jaldi announce nahin hone waali!!

it would be good if it did ..

all we can do is sit and wait!!!

great update!!!

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smarty2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

fabulous.hope the same thing happens in the serial

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

looks like she is spending a lot of time here as well.. to get a hang of what to feel for maan.. warna she is always in a dilemma

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg
wowwwww niha!!!! jst loved it..............n it was geet's dream............geet is getting naughty lyk forum girls😆 😆 😆...........btw lyked the way she confessed it to maan!!!

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Good morning Ni ...

i am really glad you enjoyed it ... i am pretty particular about characters too and get pretty hassled and worried when something happens outta character.. and i am glad you thought i was pretty much in line ...
you know, i am dreading they will drag this whole confession thing for longer .. thats why i got desp and wrote this..
imagine i was walking and all the time had a frown on my face as these thoughts were disjointedly popping in my head .. after abt an hour i got back home and wrote them down... thank god it wasnt a disappointment.. and plus you guys like always are super supportive .. so ...🤗

love,
niha

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i loved it......i woke up showered and came across this beautiful os!!!! Now how will i read 4 bio chapters after reading this???

Amazing job Niha.....as expected Maan reacted just how i thought he would.....which i wanted him too!! I also expected Geet to react like this too!! Amazing job in capturing the understanding of the characters so well..👏..hmmm i wonder where u get this talent from??? 🤪

U know why I loved this OS because it was realistic....and it was something I can see both maaneet doing.....also because geet managed to get me angry!! 😆 When i get mad at geet then u know that u have captured her character so well!! Ahhhhhhhhh geet.....i love u so much....and yet u piss me off!! She was thinkin why Maan reacted the way he did?? And she cries like a baby wondering why he isn't talkin to her 😕..............ummmmmmmm is there a reason u have left for not the poor guy to be angry??? 🤢

Amazing job yaar 👏......beautiful beautiful....thoroughly enjoyed reading it! A good way to wake up in the morning and reading something excellent!! Finally at least not the show, but at least in ur writing she confessed......i want it to be something like this.....😳 except i want her to put the taveez on him as well while confessing!! 😳

thanks for the pm