FF: Broken Promises..Chap1/Pge2

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Thanks Bro.. :D

No.. Maan is going on a business trip.. 😉

Mahi might meet someone.. you have to keep reading tho..

and I will update soon.. =)

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kooliio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Ohh sounds interesting!!
Does maan have another kid with geet??
Can't wait for the update!!
Do cont.soon and pls add me to your PM list

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

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-Chapter 1-

So many words for the broken heart
It's hard to see in the crimson love
So hard to breathe
Walk with me and maybe

Nights of light so soon become
Wild and free I can feel the sun
Our every wish will be done
They tell me

Show me the meaning of being lonely
Is this the feeling I need to walk with?
Tell me why I can't be there where you are
There's something missin' in my heart

Life goes on as it never ends
Eyes of stone observe the trends
They never say forever gaze

If only guilty roads to an endless love
(Endless love)
There's no control, are you with me now?
Your every wish will be done, they tell me

Show me the meaning of being lonely
Is this the feeling I need to walk with?
Tell me why I can't be there where you are
There's something missin' in my heart

There's no where to run, I have no place to go
Surrender my heart, body and soul
How can it be you're asking me to feel
Things you never show

You are missing in my heart
Tell me why I can't be there where you are

Show me the meaning of being lonely
Is this the feeling I need to walk with?
Tell me why I can't be there where you are
There's something missin' in my heart

(Back Street Boys)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaZWQHzfGXs

Maan woke up feeling empty and cold.. He had been up quite late and it was the afternoon sun that had finally awoke him now. It was stinging his face and he needed to get out of the room. His friend had always been the darkness. Pure darkness.

'Mahi' He called out.

No answer as usual, he knew she wouldn't be home but he tried like every afternoon. He walked into the kitchen and poured himself juice whilst listening to the answer machine.

'Maan Singh Khurana.. Meeting at 11am.. 11th September.. Don't be late..'

He skipped the rest.. He was waiting for one voice to come up on the machine.. A voice he hadn't heard, felt.. seen in 18 years. A voice that would bring joy upon his lips, that would have been music to his ears.

He wiped the tears upon his cheeks and walked into his study. He locked the door behind him. Walking over to the small door he opened it and walked into a walk in wardrobe.

He fell to his knees and cried out loud. Could his voice reach to its destination.. He couldn't ever forgive himself for his mistakes..

'GEET' He screamed..

Her photo's scattered on the floor, her portraits upon the wall.. her chunni.. the taaveez..the roses she loved.. everything..

'You can't leave me Geet.. Please.. Come Back once..!! Just this once.. Please..'

'I never told you.. I love you Geet'..

He carried on crying.. hoping she would hear him.. hoping she'd come back...

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So How Was It?? Comments On Chap1 Please.. :D