#*Devil's Den#* Game of Passion [INDEX PG-1]

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geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#711

hello!!

What's going on? 😆

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@bDgT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#712

*hiya Geet* we are having a relapse of "war of the roses" :-)

Jus kiddin'

@Fazu: how did you coin your moniker "maybe just"

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Faz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#713

@Bridge - Is that what I am going to be called from now on? 🤣 I would also like Choti Talwar 😆

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 15 years ago

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@pallu – very well written… I loved the headers u hv given… O Girl! You are mine! And we twist! Tenu leke main janwaga! Jisne ki sharam uske phoote karam!

Gal request – I have been telling this to all…. Please no comments on guru's diction – positive or negative atleast for some time…. We shudnt remind him that time and again… he reads first few pages of den… lets not embarrass him all the time… we know he has read us n is trying to improve…lets give him time…. Its just a request…. I hv made this request to doodle also n am doing it to u as well…. If possible please edit that part….

@polki – ur take is awesome gal…ur google thingie cracked me….your confusion bout FB… well its Maan's FB as he is remembering her first rejection… I loved all 6 songs….

@GF - request u too to atleast edit the diction part from IF take....

u knw i hv been monitoring all talks till page 20 n hv actually been asking all to edit such talks if i let u n pallu keep this on page 1, ppl r gonna murder me....

so request... pallu, Doodle please edit the diction part..... u can keep it in ur takes if u hv repasted the same after page 20.....

@pingu - c ya

@swi - i thot u wud b happy to be in my league... the 2 deniacs.... good night gal....

@pallu, polki - my take on page 1....

@bri - waiting for ur comments on my crappy take

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geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#715

Oh my..so we're all excited for Brij and Maan scenes haan? [:D/]

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#716

@fazu, swati and geetu - hi

@geetu - ur first take for den... awesome....

@faz - i heard u starting the dumpings again soon... kab shuru kar rahi ho... dont forget to PM me....

@arwen....🤗

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#717

Wait wait..He READS those pages...

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It makes me a bit nervous..

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@bDgT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#718

@DDooooooooooodlebeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrry!

Love these lines apropos from your analysis

"I loved Maan's happiness for the moment when Geet said that she loves him too. That was awesome and Gurmeet acted so well when she twisted her words again and how he took the help of the curtain to be stable at that particular moment. That left me dumbstruck."

Oh yeah! baby! u are on the right track! Guru was solid!

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geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: deniac
@fazu, swati and geetu - hi

@geetu - ur first take for den... awesome....

HI! 🤗

Thankie!

I LOVED writing 😳

Hopefully will do one today 😊

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palluluvsmaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: deniac

@pallu ' very well written' I loved the headers u hv given' O Girl! You are mine! And we twist! Tenu leke main janwaga! Jisne ki sharam uske phoote karam!

Gal request ' I have been telling this to all'. Please no comments on guru's diction ' positive or negative atleast for some time'. We shudnt remind him that time and again' he reads first few pages of den' lets not embarrass him all the time' we know he has read us n is trying to improve'lets give him time'. Its just a request'. I hv made this request to doodle also n am doing it to u as well'. If possible please edit that part'.

Gauri I removed it. dint know Gurmeet reads it. Does he????????????????😲 I will read yours