BAck on Spcl Demand- Maneet SELF DIALOGUE-23 aug!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello everyone!!

Well..I'm back! I guess the epi was too intense and sad...hmm..I wondered self-dialogue kiska likhoon..will keep shifting and try my best to make it funny!!

Comment nahi karke bataya kaisa hai toh maar padegi!! 😆 😆



MAan(brain)- sab kuchh ghoom kyun raha hai?

Maan(heart)- ae lo.Maan...you're the one dancing.. 😆

Maan(brain)- oh..and why is there a comingling of fire and water? PAthetic fallacy? Geet fire aur main Water

MAan(heart)- yeah..why not..behne de mujhe behne de...

MAan(heart)- kiss..kiss ...kiss

Geet(heart)- and..it's a hug..

Maan(brain)- BLANK

Geet(brain)- BLANK

Geet(soul)- oh dear lord..it's been so long since we met!

MAan(soul)- I wait for you every moment I am here..but iski ego ne time hi nahi diya
anyways..while we're here..let's make the most of it

MAan(heart)- Hey BRainy..woh kaunsa gaana tha??...

Geet(heart)- Shut up Maan and close your eyes

Maan(heart)- MAHIIIII 😆 😆 😆

Geet(brain)- oi...oh oh..he kissed me!!

MAan(heart)- i wish I could come closer...but i cannot..I wish...so much...but that's all I can do...no brainy?

MAan(brain)- 😲 😲 😲
yeh kya ho raha hai...

MAan(heart)- woh..don't mind ...We have him on a tight leash these days!

They break apart

Geet(brain)- WOMAN! I TOLD you not to do this..but nahi..sunna hota nahi hai..jahan Maan ke shirt buttons khulle dekhe..wahan pe shuru...

GeeT(heart)- 😳 sorry..couldn't resist..But seriously..look at those eyes...oh so beautiful...

Geet(brain)- snap out of it!! LEt's go

MAan(heart)- haila..kya hua?
Do I have something on my face?

Maan(brain)- i TOLD you to look in the mirror more often..but koi nahi sunta!
Geet darling..wait...

MAan(heart)- dude..stop staring DO SOMEthing!!

MAan(brain)- abhi toh kiya tha...aur kya karun??

Geet(brain)- let me go..

Maan- HELL NO!

MAan(brain)- why did u come here?!

MAan(heart)- now ur talking!

MAan(heart)- i know why u were here..haha..

Geet(brain)- DUH

MAan(brain)- don't be scared

MAan(heart)- Says the man who is at the present drunk and cornering a woman he has just passionately hugged..in an isolated spot...yeah..don't be scared Geet

MAan(brain)- SHUT UP...says the MAn who is in LOVE

MAan(brain)- Geet..listen..PAri wari nahi..mujhe toh ...guess who!?

Get(brain)- oh no..I'm not getting into that trap!

MAan(heart)- suno na!!! dil ne tumko..chun liya hai...

Geet(brain)_ LALALALLALA...I don't know!!! I don't want to

MAan(brain)- it matters to you..haina...I can't be wrong!!

Geet(heart)- please ...I'm sick of the pain..I don't WANT to feel this way!!
I don't have the right to feel anything for you!!

MAan(heart)- her name is....!

MAan(brain)- abbe chali jaayegi...suspense khatam kar ab!

Geet(heart)- Ae le...He's not even listening is he?

Geet pushes him away

MAan(heart and brain)- 😲 😲 😲 AB kya hua?!

Geet(heart)- jo bole sohnihaal!!!

Geet(brain)- it doesn't matter to me!! Samjhe aap!!
Why do you keep coming closer...please stop...don't don't...don't say anything...I won't be able to control my feelings..poori life sehna padega MAan..bhaag jaa..cuz yeh toh sirf start hai..
LEt me go.. 😭

MAan(heart)-dude..how did she get the strength to push!!

MAan(brain)- it's okay..don't be hurt..it is just cuz we're drunk..don't worry HEarty..don't take it too hard

Geet- why do you ask me questions..that I cannot answer..

MAan(brain)- MAths thodi hai..feelings pooch raha hoon..kaunsa quiz le raha hoon...

MAan(heart)- aw..koi nahi..

MAan(heart)- she's crying..aww..but why?

MAan(brain)- who's drunk-you or I?


MAan(heart)- who's the controller? the one who knows things- you or I?

Geet(brain)- Don't let her touch you again..MEre hormones phir se...out of control ho jaayenge..

Maan staggers

MAan(brain)- it's not the drink..it's her..I'm drunk on her?!! MEra kya hoga!! AND to top it all..SHe's CRYING..she KNOWS I cannot see her like that..still

In the morning

Geet(heart)- Nimbu paani de de..bechaara..hungover MSK

Geet(brain)- ddue..just go keep it and come back..

Geet(heart)- can I stay a while..he looks soo adorable..aww...Dhak dhak..
😳

GeeT(brain)- he does... 😍 oh man..shirt buttons..oie hoi

Geet snaps out..

Geet(brain)- chalo bas ho gaya aaj ke liye!

dupatta get's stuck..yet AGAIN!!

Geet(heart)- phir pakad liya..next time shopping karne jaaungi toh I'll buy matching ones for him too!!

Geet(brain)- seriously..let me go! I will give u the dupatta..just leave the Dupatta!!

Maan(soul)- HAHA..aaj na chhodenge tujhe DUM DAMA DUM..tune kya samjha hai mujhe!!

Geet turns back

Geet(brain)- ae le..he's toh sleeping..NEend mein bhi..

Geet(heart) -haath hai ya hathoda..dupatta hi nahi chhoot ta

Geet(brain)-aaahhhh...!!!!

Geet(soul)- GOOD morning MAAN!! 😳

MAan(heart brain soul)- OH my GOd.. 😲 😲 yeh kya kar rahi hai mere upar??!

Maan(heart)- well...YOu won't hear me complain!

MAan(brain)- ow..I wish I could wake up everyday like this..

MAan(heart)- Geet..do I WANT to know...?

Geet(heart)- DO NOT say anything..please!!

GeeT(brain)- subha subha bhi kitne pyaare lagte hain... 😳

Maan(brain)- um...how did I come here? what happened? Why can't I remember anything apart from...oie oie moment..

MAan(heart and soul wink..)- hume nahi pata..poochho jiske baare mein sochte rehte ho usi se..

MAan(brain)- cute look Geet..oie hoi..Don't make me go crazy early in the morning..answer me...please...

Geet leaves...

Maan(brain)- helo!!! ?Will some one answer me!!

Geet thinking of how Maan was brought here

Geet(brain0- seriously..kitna bhaari tha..poor BAhadur..sach mein bahoduri ka kaam kiya

MAan(brain)- ohh..yeah..she was crying...BECAusE OF ME!!??
I wish I could kill myself right now! I was wrong..MAan Singh Khurana was WRONG

Doesn't matter to him!

Maan(heart)- yes.. this is what heartbreak feels like..

MAan(brain)- I'm sick of hide and seek..I will stay away from him

Pari comes..

Skip that scene I have hopes from!!

MAan(heart)- you want me to stay away from me..I will
In silence- I will love you..in silence I will adore

MAan(brain)- I'm hurting her. I will..I made her cry..I will cry too..I will hurt myself..sazaa doonga

Maan- trust me..I went to a place where it was v difficult for me to bear SOMEONE

MAan(heart)- which was the immense overflow of feelings we had for each other..that flooded yesterday..from our eyes..

😭 😭 and drowned us..!!

Geet(soul)- OUCH

Maan(soul)- I feel the same..I feel the same..


Okay that's it guys...

I tried to make the epi a little lighter...it was v v intense today..

Comments welcome!!

love to all

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beforesunrise thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣 little lighter ??????

omg this was so funny totally cracked me .


u r posting self dialog aftr a long time i really missed ur self dialog ...........


awesum gal 👏
so perfect and funny 👍🏼

thank you love you 🤗

muh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww....that was good...even I m stuck on the open shirt buttons...from the epi and frm here as well....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic!!! Feels much better now after the saddening episode.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏''i will luv u in silence,i will adore u in silence''-i luvd that line.it was supposed 2 b a fun post but it made me so sad.coz. it was so beautifully mixed with tears and laughter .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!!
every1 is crying .. i hope this phase will fade soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hehe... funny!! good one babe...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Geet!!
Thanks for the light hearted self dialogue .. it made things a little better!!
You are sooo right .. aaj ke episode ke baad to Maaneet nagar mein sab sogh mana raha hai!!
Things got far too emotional and difficult .. upar se that evil cow NT and spineless Dev just got on my nerves.. koi unhe spaceship mein Mars behej de PLEASE!!!
Ab in dono ka kya ho gaa??
Upar wala hi janay .. actually CV's janay but it sounded nicer!!
Anyway .. thanks again till tomorrow!!
Uzma xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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MAan(heart)- Says the man who is at the present drunk and cornering a woman he has just passionately hugged..in an isolated spot...yeah..don't be scared Geet

loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you are back! you are back! Thank you so much for making this episode a little lighter, it was truly very sentimental.. So dark and heavy.

Polki

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