FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 80

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just love the way you illustrate Geet's intelligence, nicely done!!! Thank you!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sia89 - why gussa????

raisa159 - thanxs dear..glad u like it

sweet cherry - thanxs sweety

thanxs guys..for reading & posting ur reply
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
all the three updates are good geet has got good bznz skills awaiting as to how the truth will come out in front of her frnds
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update!!!

geet ka ghusa!!!!

bechara maan...

update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
great parts, im glad geet is starting to open up with maan now, and that they're getting closer
cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hy muskan

how r u yaar. sorry a bit busy now a days tats y didt comment on updates

jese hi free hoti hoon longggggggggggggggggggg comments k sath phir aon gi

filhal k liye

all the parts 86 to 89 are

in part 86 maan as sleeping scene is cute one

part 87

maneet dhaba date is

and maan's fight is

part 88

maan is shwooooooooooo sweet


maan - gussa hoon..iska matlab yeh nahi ki pyar nahi kartha.

sorry..geet..
lekin mera samne koi tumhare basethi kare main bardash nahi kar saktha..nahi karunga


maan - waise tumne use inspector ki boolthi band kardi thi..
geet - Maan Singh Khurana ki biwi hoon..
maan - tu bus mera pass aja meri Mrs Maan singh khurana..(pulls her closer)

part 89 is



but i think maan ko sudharne me kafi time lage ga. purani adaten jaldi thori hi jati haan.

wah maan...u came with geet & don't even know where she is...sahi jaa rahe hoo beta..
is tarah se to..u can never impress her...ulta aur gussa ho rahi hogi..oh god..where
is she now...she might be sitting some where with a big face...
he looked around the farm & office...also asked the people around..
he became really worried an tensed for her...

hope k filhal k liye kam chal jae ga.

waiting for next





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Posted: 14 years ago
1kaarzoo-thanxs dear
Anufa - thanxs a lot
Maheen - thanxs ..glad u liked it
Cute-al- thanxs for finally commenting..missed u..
Thanxs u guys..
Love
Muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan dear so sorry for nt reviewing.. i did indeed read the chpts.. but i espc love the apple farm.. love scene.. and wow.. geet giving some great idea for business.. and her friends still don't knw that she is married.. mmmm nw can't wait till maan makes up for leaving geet all alone for 3 hrs..!!!!

more soon dear.. hope ur weekend was good..

VIka😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

is tarah se to..u can never impress her...ulta aur gussa ho rahi hogi..oh god..where
is she now...she might be sitting some where with a big face...
he looked around the farm & office...also asked the people around..
he became really worried for her...

part 90

maan came to the car & banged his hand on the car roof...in frustration..
geet - kya hua? bhook laagh rahi hain to car ko kyun mar rahe hoo..(pulls her head out of the car)
bhicahar kab se dhoop main khada hain aap ke liya(rubs the car..making a pitty face)
maan(smiled at her) - I am sorry
geet - mujhe nahi car ko bholo
maan - tum yanha kya kar rahi ho
geet - u were busy so I caught up with my friends online..
maan came in & started the car..after driving a small distance
maan - sorry to have kept u waiting
geet - babaji aab yeh mujhe kyu sorry keh rahe hain???(cribing)
maan stops the car & holds her from her arms in concern
maan - I am saying sorry & why are u cribing to babaji..
wat is ur problem..I said sorry..wat do u want me to do
geet - yeh lo babaji..inhe bhook laaghi hai to..mujhe kyun kaa rahe hain..
maan - GEEEEET...geet
stop talking to ur babaji...& anwsere me
geet - abhi aap ko mera babaji se baat karne se bhi problem hain...
maan calms himself...
maan - nahi mera matlab hain..abhi bhi naraz hoo...
geet - yeh lo..gussa aap kar rahi hoo
kabhi car pe..khabhi mujhe pe..& u are saying I am angry..
she touches his forehead & checks if he was ok..
maan - yeh kya kar rahi ho?
geet - nahi..I was just checking if u were ok..
aap ko kyun laaga ki main gussa hoon?(she smile)
maan - I kept u waiting for 3hrs...he paused
geet(laughed) - u know I have waited like..35000 odd hrs...for u..
& u are bothered about these 3hrs..she continued laughing..
maan realized wat she meant...he left her arms & bend his head down
maan - geet ...
geet continued laughing
maan - actually I did'nt know we were married untill our 4th anniversary
geet laughed louder...aap mazak kar rahe ho na..
maan - nahi geet...I really did'nt know...(she stopped laughing..tears rolled down her eyes)
geet stepped out of the car & sat down...she folded legs & clutched them with her hands &
rested her head on her knees..maan came out rushing & sat next to her ..& put his around her..
she pushed his hand away with her shoulders
maan - geet plaese..meri puri baath sunoo
geet - just leave me alone..(she snapped back)
maan again tried to console her..geet yelled back..don't even try maan..
geet - I don't expect anything from u does'nt mean that..u could take our marriage for granted
maan - geet mujhe ek baar aapni baat kehne do..
geet - kya kehna chahthe ho aap..all of sudden lightening stuck & u realized that I am ur wife..
I always accepted all ur behaviour, anger, rudeness...now this is rediculous..
just yesterday ..u said...u were admiring me in the lift...
matlab ..woh sab joot tha..leking kyun maan..
maan - nahi geet kuch bhi joot nahi tha
geet - jab humari shaadhi aap ko yaad nahi thi..to humara har rishta natha ..har ehsaas aap
ke liya kya maina raktha hain...
waise bhi..why am I even expecting anything from u at the first place
she starts crying loud..
maan - geet please tum aise roovaa muth na..please..geet
geet - na aap ko.. ise se khabhi farak pata hain na pata ga...
maan - tum aachi se jaan thi ho..mujhe farak pata hain
geet - nahi main nahi jaan thi..aur aab jaana bhi nahi chathi..
maan cups her face in his hand...tum jaanthi ho..
meri aankhoo main dekhoo geet..(maan had tears in his eyes)
geet - nahi dkhna mujhe..aap ke ankhe mujh se joot bolthi hain
maan - tumhe dekhna hoga..(he tightens his grip)
geet looks into those eyes
geet - nahi dekhna..muh..(she was lost in those eyes)
maan rests his forehead on hers & says tumhe dekhna patage geet...
geet saw everything in those fleeting seconds while maans lips poised over hers.
Saw his rage and his pain and his piercing desire. Without thinking, she touched his face.
Stop it Maan - she whispered. ..yeh teehk nahi hain.. Maan closed his eyes as if her fingers hurt him. He opened his eyes to see geet turn bright red. not a little girlish flush, but a deep, painful red that burned on her chest and chin and forehead... she mumered a protest..
maan - kya geet..mera tumhare paas ana..mera tumse door na jaa pana
har pal har ghadi tum jo mera dil mai ..dimagme rahthi ho..
phir kya teehk hain...
geet - aap humesha aise karthe hoo...jab mujhe lagtha hain ki ..every thing is fine between us and u prove me wrong immidiately..she broke down..aap kyun asie karthe hoo..
kyun mera dil thoodathe ho..how do u expect me to bare all this..
maan - I love u geet....
geet lifted her chin and tossed her hair back from her face in a gesture he knew as defensive...
She felt him move closer, and a moment later a touch lit on her spine, just above the tip of her t-shirt...two fingers that brushed over a single bone of her back..,he pulled closer..bend forward..
moved the curls & looked into those eyes...until now, he had not seen how deep her pain went behind those rigid walls that kept him out... kept the world out and he feared if he tried to breach them in order to free her, the resulting emotions might destroy her..destroy their budding love...
this was the first time maan could actually get ever so close to her inner pain...he was glad he did reach there..but could'nt bare it...he did'nt know that would hurt him so much..as it did hurt her..
he hugged her tight...never to let go...she tried to protest weakly..
maan - I will do wat ever it takes to be with u...mana maine aaj taak jo bhi kiya woh galat tha lekin aab main aur kuch galat nahi karna chatha..please geet mujhe chodoke mat jaavoo..

precap
wat say Geet mana jayegi???

hope u like this part..thanxs for all ur support..please continue commenting..I love it
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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