FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 69

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

ha... she will be hurt for sure.. but then I think she will able to relate this to Maan's weird behaviour while she was at office, hotel room etc...and this time she should not give in so easily..

still working on that part...really trying to make it natural

i would like to see her acting as if she is angry at him and maan trying to convince her......

Hi Muskaan

Read all the parts I missed 😳. Thank you for the PMs. Apologies for not commenting on all of them.

I love how the story has turned out and it is very interestingly poised now - hmm Maan is going to have to own up that he had no clue she was his wife for 4 years ...... she might forgive him if he takes the road of "I am a complete idiot and I do not deserve you at all 😉 for everything I have done to you. I do not know how I am going to make this up to you but if you give me a chance I will spend the rest of my life making this up to you. 😉"

Geet will be mad at him for a while but she will realize that he really loves her. We need Maan to prove to her that he really loves her. Hmm I have an idea - let me PM you about it.....do not want people throwing ande tamatar at me 😛

Jhan

all the parts have been penned down very well the move of the characters is good......... the family outing....... maneet knowing each other n all.

lovely update.... eagerly waiting to c geet's reaction.. do continue soon..

Hi Muskan,

geet - phir kya baat hain maan..? (very softly) aap kehna chathe ho ki..aap ko 4 saal se mujh se kuch lagva nahi tha..aab aachnak aap itne pyaar karne laage ho.....
mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata...(she rests her head on his shoulder)
maan was speechless..

part 86

maan did'nt know how to tell her that he did'nt know about their wedding & her..
he was too scared about her reaction..maan just kept ..looking into her eyes
he did'nt want ..to lose this closeness between them..he thought of giving it some time
geet - meri shaksiyat ko jo pehchaan di aapne wo kya byaan karoon..(she was lost in his eyes)
aap se hi dil mera haara hai to main kya karoon..(she shies)
main khush hoon ki aap khush hoo...mera yeh haale dil main kise bayan karoon..
maan - mujhe ..geet sirf mujh se...tumhare hale dil mera dil se anjaan nahi hain.
geet - phir aap aise baathe kyun karthe hoo..kyun joothi umeed jagathe hoo?
maan - Maan Singh Khurna khabhi aapne baath se mukra tha nahi
geet shuts his mouth...
maan - mujhe kehna do geet..yeh dooriyan mitane kyun nahi dethi
geet - kuch baathe kahe..aur kuch unkahe aachi laagthi hain...
they walk back to the car...maan was just wondering how to tell her..how much he loves her
not from now..but ever since he actually met her..saw her..at tajmahal
they drive back..to the hotel...
geet - u have a apple farm some where here na..
maan - yah!!! we have..(he insisted)
geet - maine kabhi apple farm nahi dehka
maan - tumhara hi hain jab chahe dekhloo..if u want we can visit the farm tomorrow..
geet - wow!!! I am really excited..
it was late afternoon..around 4pm
when the reach the room..it was getting colder...maan orders tea for her & coffee for himself
she folded her legs & sat on the sofa...
maan poured the tea in the cup & gave to her..she held the cup with both hands & kept enjoying
the hot tea...he sat opposite to her & sipped his coffee..he looked at her every now & then..
she finished her tea & looked at him..their eyes met..she was lost in those eyes..
maan came close to her & sat next to her..rested his head in her lap...
streched his legs & laid down...she softly pulled his hair behind ..she kept stroking
his hair for a while..& she noticed maan was sleeping peacfully in her lap..
she kept looking at his face...she was very happy to have him so close..she treassured every
moment of their closeness..she could'nt stop looking at him..those beautifull eyes..
his face..lips..his nose...she went on admiring him...the more she looked at him..the more
she wanted to...after some time she streched her legs & kept on the table..she moved the hair
that just moved onto his forehead...he turned towards her & cuddled into her ...
his hands wraped around her waist & his face was rubbing ..breathing into her her stomach..
geet tucked her stomach in..his breath was tickling her..she tried adjusting her dress
slowly ..she did'nt want to disturb him..she has never seen him taking a nap at this hour
of the day..that too so peacefully it was 8pm...now & geet could barely feel any thing in her leg....
her leg started to become numb...it felt softer..they also made her feel 'tingly' as
if ants are crawling in her legs and feet ...as maan made any moment..
maan she wisphered...umm geet he replied..
wow mera pair..numb hogaya hain...
maan - ummm..he slept again...
geet - maan utto na please i am feeling ticklish..now because numbness
maan - umm..love u..sweet heart & hugs her..
geet - dekho na mere leg ko kya ho gaya..
maan jumped up & said- dikhavoo...& went to pull down her pants..
she snaped & tried to get up..the numbness caused difficulty in standing she fell back...maan held her..
maan - kya hua..
geet - my legs...(he lifted her legs ..she felt the tingly sensation..)
maan - don't worry poor blood circulation se hota hain..u have been sitting for a while like this..
(he helped he strech her legs..& kept them on his lap)
geet - all because of u..
maan - aur jo tum..puri puri raat meri goodhi main soyee thi..uska kya?
geet - kab?
maan - lift main...
geet(blushed) - u could have asked me to get up..
maan - how could I ..u looked so beautiful...I could'nt stop admiring u...
geet - wat rabuish..u admired me..no ways...
u shouted at me.. I still remember..u said.."geet enough of dreaming now get up!! ur not in ur bed..this is my leg ur sleeping on.."
maan - if i was angry ..why would i not wake u up...
geet - sachi...
maan - muchi...& kissed her legs
geet pulled her legs back..maan smiled checked the time..
maan - geet can i take u for a date?
geet(wondered) - wat?
maan - our offical first dinner date..alone u & me...please..don't refuse ..
geet - waise bhi Maan Singh Khurana ko koi dinner ka liya to mana nahi kar saktha..
maan (tum kuch bhi kar sakthi hoo..mummers)

precap
dinner date ...

MUSKI it was so cute! Yes brief but cute. I am glad Geet seems to have moved on and forgiven Maan!

Veryyyy nice part.
Looking forward to dinner date.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima

udate was sweeeeet and cuteee juz like youuuuuu..

btw, i don't mind if Maan doesn't tell her the truth.. let them stay like this.. you can bring in new characters and twists..😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃