FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 66

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi! mukan i'm really sorry for not commenting on u r updates but plz i make it clear that ilove ur updates and plz send me ur ff soon and add me to ur pm's list .
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Posted: 15 years ago
great updates, i love it when he is reflecting in the shower about geet always wins him over when he is trying to win her over, i hope this drive wins her over wherever they are going
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Posted: 15 years ago

maan takes the suitcase..packs the stuffs..(geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho?)
lifts her & puts her inside the car...(geet - maan chodo mujhe...chodo..)
he puts her seat belt & starts the car..(geet turns her face away & looks out)

part 85

as they drive on..geet was getting curious to know where they were heading to..
she did'nt want to ask...she looked around & noticed they were on NH 22
she was so angry at him...but the silence between them was killing..she looked at him
he did'nt respond..she tried moving her bangels..then pulled her curls behind..
maan ignorned & smiled..knowing how much she was trying to get his attention..
they have been driving for couple of hours now..the view out side was spectaculus...
beautifully dotted with oak trees, there were orchards loaded in red apples looked just
amazing..it was naturally beautiful landscape...the climate was salubrious ..the nature
looked so pure & virgin...geet admired the beauty & cuddled up as the temp was setting down..
maan switched on the heater in the car & passed her a shwal..
geet switched off the heater & threw the shwal...maan stopped the car..
maan - aab kya hua geet...(she turned away her face)
maan - aach baba ..we are in Narkanda!!! altitude about 8000ft..
I was here last time on a business trip..thought u will like it..
geet - it so beautifull...she hugged him..this place so close to nature..
I love it hear..kitne thand hai yanha
maan feels that was easy.....he puts the shawl around her & switches on the heater..

they check into a hotel..they order some thing to eat & lie down...
facing the cieling..maan slowly moves his hand looking for hers & holds it..


they sleep early that night...late at night..geet starts feeling really cold..
maan senses her restlessness & covers her with the blanket...she cuddles up into him
& rests her head in his arms they wake up late...not sure if it was the weather or the
closeness..they just did'nt want to let go...maan opened his eyes saw her sleeping
comfartably..he selpt again..geet turned after a while..saw him sleeping peacfully ..
she again cuddled up closer..there was so much of tiredness ...that it was 12noon..geet & maan
rolled around..their stomach seem to feel hungry..their body still did'nt want
to let go ...maan pushed the curls away from her face..she smiled with her eyes closed..
maan - geet
geet - umm
maan - mujhe bhook lag rahi hain
geet - muje bhi
maan - uttoo na..
geet - nahi..mujhe nahi uttna..
maan finally got up & got ready..geet got up after maan was ready..
she dragged herself to the washroom & got ready..
maan stood behind her in the mirrior & helped her with mangalsuthra & sindoor
& held her from the waist & kissed her on the neck..she smiled..maan
was so happy to see that smile in her face...
after breakfast/actually lunch...maan suggested to explore the place..
they walked..arround admiring the natural landscape & their budding relationship
maan - geet tum hosiyarpurr se hona..
geet - umm..
maan - tumhare darji ko main aache se jantha hoon..
aur kaun kaun hain..
geet - aap to sab se mile the shaadhi main..(he pulls her aside holding her arms)
maan - geet mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain..(puts a sorry face)
geet - ji
maan - mujhe kuch teehk se yaad nahi hain..
geet - umm!! shaadhi ke baad to aap ek dam chalai gayathe..
brij veerji bhaut gussa hogaya the..wow to darji ne sambal liya tha..warna
use din to
maan - to kay geet
geet - aap brij veerji ko jaanthe nahi hain...unhe har baath par mar-peet karne ke aadath hain
maan - really tumhe laagtha hain he could have hit me..
geet - she smiled..naughtly
as they walked ..their hands met..& entangled..they did't even realize that..
maan - aacha tumhare mummy ..papa..wait wait..tumhari ma..bahut sundar hain na
geet - aap ko kaise mallom
maan - tumhe dehkar andaaza laga raha hoon..I am sure she will be much prittier
geet - shied...& tried move away..maan pulled her back..thats when they realzed their
hands were entangled..
maan - aacha aur tumhare papaji?
geet - meri papaji..mera sab se fav hain..woh muje sabse jayada pyar karthe hain
when I was born he was the only person who was happy ..
maan - why ?
geet - every one else wanted a boy...
maan - they did'nt know u were born for Maan Singh Khurana..then
he hugged her...& rubbed her arms...
maan - aur khun khn hain..
geet - agle bar aap ghar challoge to main aap ko sab se..(she pauses)
maan(lifts her chin) - we will definitly plan a trip..
geet - aap mujhe se aise baath math kariya(she moves away)
maan - kaise baatha geet..(she walks ahead & sits on a rock)
geet - 4 saal se na aap ne mujhse khabhi kuch kaha na suna
mujhe aab iske adath se hogayi hain...
maan - kis ke adaath geet
geet - aap se kuch umeed nahi rakhne ke..phir aap aise baathey kar ke mujhe joothi umeed
dilare hain..Its ok..I understand u won't have time once we get back...
I know u ..& I am fine with it...aap ko meri chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain..
maan - nahi geet aise baath nahi hain (he puts is hand around her shoulder)
geet - phir kya baat hain maan..? (very softly) aap kehna chathe ho ki..aap ko 4 saal se mujh se kuch lagva nahi tha..aab aachnak aap itne pyaar karne laage ho.....
mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata...(she rests her head on his shoulder)
maan was speechless..

precap
Maan not able to explain himsself

thanxs for all ur replies & suggestions..keeps me going..
shall update soon..for the week end...
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i hope geet understands maan..........
wonderful update
Edited by lallulal2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh wow!! they are romantic again...👏👏👏 i love the way maan takes care of geet and i feel its time maan tells what he actually feels for geet.

love you,
vinithaa
Edited by vinithaa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😊 so beautiful .....so finally maan got chance to explain himself ,wow i really really cant wait ....he dznt even knw who else is in geet's family 😆

geet is definitely gonna kill him this time once she gets to knw the truth 😆

i knw how much this side of maan wud have surprised geet .....poor he nvr got chance to show his love but

now he is not in mood to leave geet for a sec ...so loving ,

love you musky 🤗 for giving so lovely update 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
i hate ur ff's maan cuz of him my expectation frm a guy is rising high nd high with each update ...nd i'm sure if i wont get over dis maan i wil have to reject each nd evry guy of this earth cuz its impossible to find sum1 lyk msk :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan itna dumb kyun hain? vaise toh kitna gussa dikhata rehta hain toh ab kyun nahi keh sakta kuch?
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW muskaan you potray emotions awesomely

I am partially in tears


AWESOME UPDT

love you muskaan YOU ROCK sis

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely!...
glad to see geet smiling and relaxed!
i think even geet is right in her place that why suddenly maan started loving her....but poor maan!...how can he express his love or make her understand his feelings for her....
i just hope that they resolve their differences soon!...
continue soon!

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