FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it yaar... at least after so many sad parts this was the part that made me smile..😊 anyways as usual it was excellent update.

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Posted: 15 years ago
muskan u r AWESOME😊LOVED UR WRITEUPS👏actualy i read ur FF today and completed in 3 hours😆loved it a lot.plz add me to ur PM list😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute update!! love the bond between krish and geet!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome getting better and better
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi dear friends the update is ready..but some problem with IF
not able to post or..send PM...
it is landing up with double posts..so just trying it..if u guys don't get the pm
I am really really Sorry
THANXS A LOT TO EACH & EVERY ONE FOR UR VALID SUGGESTIONS & REPLIES
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Posted: 15 years ago

krish - dad yeh maa ka sirf starter hain...& laughed..
geet stared at krish ..he held his ears..& bit his tongue..
geet - dad ke samne tumhare bhaut pank inkal rahe hain
maan looked away & smiled..looking at their chemistry..

part 80

after the breakfast maan drove to Brahma Sarovar ..it was beautifull water tank..
really huge in size..geet stood their admiring..the volume..
maan - tumhe yanha kya dekhna tha..(he asked wondering)
geet - nahi maan aap ko yanha..Gita Jayanti celebrations ke samya aana chaiya..
it is such a beautifull and breath-taking sight ..
during that time there will be 'deep daan' and 'aarti'..it is so beautifull...
maan - umm!! (looks at her eyes..they were delighted...he said yah beautifull)
geet - ji?
maan - challen...
geet - umm!!
as they drive along..
krish - dad which is next big city..
maan - I think that will be ambala
geet - oldest and the largest airforce base in india..(maan & krish look at geet...)
aab maine kya kah diya babaji...
krish lies down..geet wakes him & asks him to take his medicine
he has the medicine & the lies down again...geet looked worried & concerned
maan - kya hua geet..?
geet - pata nahi hostel main teehk se aapna khayal rakega ki nahi..
maan - rakh lega...Maan Singh Khurana ka beta hain
geet - aap nahi samjhthe..deekho..he se so young...
hamesha aapni medicines lene bhool jata hain
maan - tum bhi to aapni medicine nahi lethi hoo..
(maan passes her medicine..she has tablets & cuddles up in the seat)
geet - lekin mera saath to aap..(& she paused)
maan was very happy to feel those unsaid words..
they reached shimala after 2pm...maan looked into the cottage..&
finshed with the formalities..& went to the room
geet - mera room ka key kanha hain(she taunted..)
maan turned her hand & held it...aacha?
geet - mera matlab hai mera aur krish ka room..(he tighten his grip)
maan mujhe dard ho raha hain...
maan leaves her hand & says sorry...main to mazak kar raha tha..
geet - aap ka to mazak bhi mujhe dard detha hain..
maan looked into her eyes...he did'nt mean to..yet again..he has hurt her..
krish came in maa i am very hungry...
geet - we will order something..from room service
krish - we will go to the resturant...
(krish was getting little cranking & stubborn)
geet - maine kaha na order karthe hain...
krish makes a face & sits in the couch
geet orders the food & also a big portion of ice-cream for krish
maan - why did u insist on ordering..if he wanted we could have gone out..dehko use..
geet - kuch nahi huva use..bhava kaha raha hain..😳
use bhook laghi hain...he will be fine after having his lunch

geet served the food on plate & went to krish
geet - oye hero ..kana kalo..
krish - mujhe nahi khana
geet - nahi baba..dad might be tired driving all the way..
thats why..avoided going out..let him rest now..
dinner main dad ki band bagaenyge(maan was amused😲 how well she managed both the
boys so well..she exactly knows wat they need & when)

in the evening they go out for shopping...
geet & krish planned for the party..krish wanted to invite his friends over
on monday evening...geet - nahi..I don't think dad will be comfartable with that
krish - dad main aapne friends ko invite karloon
maan - umm!!!
geet - maan ??
maan - kya hua??
geet - he wants to invite his friends for bday party...
maan - so?
geet - are u sure..(babaji..abhi to haan keh dengi..baat main kaun sa jwalmuhki fata ga pata nahi)
maan - geeeeeet..kudh se baat karna band karo..

they finsih dinner & come to the room...
there was a slight nip in the weather...geet was having water..
krish - maa ..it is getting cold here..aap itna pani mat piyoo
geet - haan na...
maan wondered wat was in geet drinking water & weather..

maan & krish where cuddled up in the bed inside the quilt..geet changed & came in
next to krish...
krish - maa don't touch me..(pulling his leg away)
geet - please please ...mujhe bhaut thand lag rahe hain(cuddling close to him)
krish - no ways mom ur legs are freeking cold
maan - wat are guys fighting on(stirn voice)(both of them stop)
(geet slowly slips her feet in between krishs leg)
krish - dad dehko na mom ko..her feets are really cold..
& she is cuddling it in between my legs..she always does that..
maan touches her legs with his..
maan - ur feets are really cold..sweety(geet turns away..& moves to the other corner of the bed)
geet - i don't want to sleep with u both..koi mujh se pyar nahi kartha...
ek to mujhe thand lag rahi hai..aur mujhe cuddle up bhi nahi karne detha..
geet suddenly felt warm in her feet..she looked..maan sat near her legs & pulled out one
feet at a time from the spread & slipped it into a socks which he warmed it for her on the heater...
maan - aur kanhi thand lag rahi hain..
krish - dad..mom ko bhaut thand lagthi hain...
get her cap, glouse & sweater...
maan - I thought she likes cold weather..more over it is not that cold here..it is just pleasent
krish - she loves cold weather but can't bare it...first time delhi ki thand main she actually
fainted..& we had to rush her to the hospital
maan - wat? where was I ? 😲
krish - aap..aap??..maa ..where was dad😕
geet - business trip ...& rolled her eyes
maan slipped into the spread next to her & hugged her..she felt so warm & nice
she slipped her hand around his waist..he reacted with a jolt...her hand where really cold ...after few mins..he could feel her hand, face & body were becoming warmer with his body..she dossed of in a min...in his arms..
krish - wow..that was cool dad...she does'nt fall a sleep so esaily in winters...
maan - i guess she is fine now..with me around..
krish smiled..aap ko hamesha maa ke saath rehna chahiya..unhe kuch na kuch problem to rehtha hi hain..😳

precap...
mid night bday celebration

part 81 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33217431
thanx you for all ur replies..just love reading them...sorry if the pm is not reaching u guys
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay first to comment!!

I loved the last two parts. Totally enjoying the little family moments. They are really becoming a family now. Great job! Continue soon!
Edited by ann65 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay!geet is finally acting favourably towards maan!
FAB update!

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